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Feb 26, 2011 13:32



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Spellbound [1/?] anonymous September 15 2009, 21:04:10 UTC
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=17377570#t17377570 -- Enchanted with America as Giselle and England as Robert (and quite a few other characters in the supporting roles).

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Once upon a time, there was a prince and a princess...

Prince Alfred rode through the forest on his mighty white horse, whistling a jaunty tune. The day was bright and sunny as always, and the forest was alive with woodland creatures who scampered out to look up at him.

"Sorry, guys," Alfred called out apologetically, giving them a quick wave while passing by. "I'd love to stop and chat, but I've got a princess to save. Isn't that right, Silver?" he asked, patting his horse who neighed in response. Apparently, he was "weird" and "not a real prince" because talking to animals was something princesses did. Or so the other princes claimed. Alfred only laughed at their comments; just because he liked chatting with his horse and the ( ... )

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Spellbound [2/?] anonymous September 15 2009, 22:26:04 UTC
"Hi there! I'm Prince Alfred and you might not know me, but I met you in a dream before and I've come here to rescue you," Alfred said cheerfully, looking down into his princess's beautiful, if teary, face. The princess blinked away a few tears and looked up into his own handsome face, recognition dawning in her large blue eyes after a moment of staring ( ... )

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OP is so excited! anonymous September 16 2009, 01:05:37 UTC
I didn't think this fill was going to happen! But it's beautiful and already so lulzy and I love it! <3

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OP is glad you're enjoying it so far! anonymous September 16 2009, 04:58:32 UTC
You actually should thank technoranma for this fill; she posted the updated list of unfilled kink meme requests for US/UK on the usxuk community and I just had to fill your request out after reading it on the list. (No secret here; I love Enchanted.)

I hope to provide plenty of lulz in this fill! I also hope you don't mind that I didn't go with your bonus of France as Nancy (though he'll likely appear later on, just not as England's current boyfriend) and ended up making the secondary pairing Canada/Ukraine. It'll still be mainly US/UK, after all, and I'll make sure that it sticks to that once Alfred gets dumped into reality. XD

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Should read "Author!Anon is glad you're enjoying it so far!" anonymous September 16 2009, 05:33:52 UTC
Ignore that brain fart, please; it's getting late and author!anon needs to go to bed now. >.

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Spellbound [3/?] anonymous September 16 2009, 04:27:58 UTC
Meanwhile, in a land far, far away...

It had taken eight minutes for Peter to stop complaining about how his parents let him stay up past nine PM (which was a bald-faced lie as Berwald had made it very clear to Arthur that he and his "wife"'s adoptive son was not to go to bed any later than nine PM, and no one in their right mind would argue with someone like Berwald), which was not really that much longer than usual, but Arthur was not in one of his better moods tonight ( ... )

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Spellbound [4/?] anonymous September 16 2009, 04:36:59 UTC
Normally he'd go straight to the liquor cabinet, but Matthew and Peter were both at his house and he was sensible enough to not drink when either one of them was around. It wouldn't do for anyone he associated with to find out just how...talkative he could get with a good amount of alcohol in his blood system ( ... )

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Re: Spellbound [4/?] anonymous September 16 2009, 12:37:09 UTC
B-boring? Author!anon, this is so... good. If this what you think is the most boring part, then I can't wait to read the continuation.

I can't say I don't like the influx of AU America/England fills. <3

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Author!Anon anonymous September 16 2009, 22:31:42 UTC
Aww, thanks for the words of encouragement! I'm still self-conscious about my prose because I'm relatively new to fanfic writing, so it's good to know that someone thinks it's good.

America/England is awesome in any universe. <3

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Re: Spellbound [4/?] anonymous September 16 2009, 15:57:35 UTC
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES, YES YES YES A THOUSADN TIMES YES!!!!! I love Enchanted and your parallel take on it is SUPERBE!!! The first 2 parts were freaking hilarious, I love the character casting choices you made. Holy crap Anon you are a god. I just can't get over how perfect your characterization is.... Omg please please PLEASE continue!! *bows down and offers soul*

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Author!Anon anonymous September 16 2009, 22:37:49 UTC
*blushes* Am I really that good with the characterization? I keep on wondering if I'm getting the characters right because I haven't written a lot of Hetalia fic yet, and they're in an AU here to boot.

No worries, I will continue! I'm not sure just how regularly I'll be able to update this fill after school starts, but I will make a real effort to actually complete it!

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Spellbound [5/?] anonymous September 16 2009, 22:20:17 UTC
Back in the land of princes and princesses...

"It does look good," Alfred commented as he examined his newly tailored wedding outfit in the full-length mirror. "but I still think it would look even awesomer with more red in it."

"Any more red in that thing and you're going to look like you're bleeding," one of the tailors groused. "Not that I care, but I don't want to be responsible for damaging the eyes and mental health of wedding guests."

"Ve, Lovino, I don't think that red, blue, and white together will really harm the eyes of others," the other tailor spoke up with that blithe voice and smile that made him instantly discernible from his brother in spite of them looking identical otherwise. "Although I do think that Prince Alfred looks best in blue too."

"Really?" Alfred said, giving his figure another check-over and adjusting the peacock feathers in his blue hat while tuning out Lovino's protests about how he had never said anything about the prince looking good in anything. "Now that you mention it, the blue does fit my eyes ( ... )

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Re: Spellbound [5/?] anonymous September 16 2009, 22:52:48 UTC
LOL! Oh America, the outfit!! Anon I love this fic to death already omg!!! $_$

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Re: Spellbound [5/?] anonymous September 17 2009, 17:17:39 UTC
Oh god, Alfred was made for this role! He fits it perfectly~

Eager for more~!

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OP anonymous September 17 2009, 23:09:13 UTC
Oh Alfred, you were born to be a prince :D
Great job, anon!

Captcha: who's divorces. I don't think it wants the wedding to happen! =O

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Re: Spellbound [5/?] anonymous September 18 2009, 03:30:56 UTC
Take my internets, anon. This story is fantastic! Alfred and Arthur are characterized so well, and I just want to cuddle sweet, sensible Matthew. I like how you have Peter integrated in the story like you do, Arthur-as-babysitter makes so much sense to me. And the writing style you have going is fantastic--descriptive, engrossing, and smooth to read.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next posting!

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