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Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 05:34:17 UTC

Original Request here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=14364682

; A ; Writer!Anon tried to incorporate the lyrics as much as she could, but had to change a couple things for story's sake... This is my first time writing a fill...! Apologies for the ensuing massive fail!! TT ~ TT

1/5 Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 05:37:03 UTC

Lovino Vargas let out a growl of barely contained frustration. Damn it. He still couldn't believe he was standing at that tomato bastard's front door again. He's definitely blaming this on his stomach. He couldn't explain why, but lately he'd developed an inexplicable craving for Spanish food whenever his day got too hectic... Perhaps he could write it off as stress making the tiniest, not to mention weakest part of his brain, drift back to those days when a younger Antonio made him snacks. But in any case, this dinner invitation was too well-timed to pass up. Not that he enjoyed receiving any affection from that tomato bastard or anything-Antonio was just a good cook ( ... )

Re: 2/? Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 05:43:54 UTC

Merda... No way. He thought that smile looked familiar, but there was no way in hell that the stupid Spaniard's smile and the stranger's were one and the same. But the more he looked, the more he realized there was no denying it. But why in God's name was he dreaming about Antonio of all people?! The taller nation's smile faltered slightly as he processed the look on Lovino's face. "Lovi?" he inquired, waving his hand in front of the brunette's face. Hmm, if he didn't know better, he'd swear the poor Italian had seen a ghost, but there weren't any ghosts in his house unlike Arthur's. But that shocked expression had been on Lovino's face a little too long, and his cheeks were starting to turn red. Puzzled, Antonio tried to discover what was wrong with his former charge. But then he smiled, chuckling to himself that he didn't figure it out sooner. "Ay Lovi, you must be really hungry. Let's get some tomatoes in you before your legs stop working too," he teased, poking the Italian in the forehead good-naturedly. Immediately, ( ... )

3/? Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 05:49:17 UTC

"Come on, my guitar's in the living room," Antonio exclaimed, tugging Lovino along. "France showed me this great song this morning, and it was so full of passion, I had to learn how to play it!" Lovino mumbled something incoherent, unable to resist with Antonio squeezing his hand like that. Not a minute later, he was being ushered to the sofa, while Antonio proudly brought out his favorite stringed instrument in his arms, the shining rosewood manifestation of his "passion." It was said that music soothed the savage beast; maybe it would soothe this angry Italian too. He sat down in a spindly chair in front of the younger man, smile growing slightly wider as he saw Lovino take up all the space on the couch, as if to say, "Don't even think about joining me when you're done." It reminded him of those days when he came home to find his beloved Lovi napping on it, bored after waiting for Antonio for so long. Once his guest looked like he was more comfortable than he let on, Antonio grinned again and placed his fingers on the right ( ... )

Re: 4/? Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 05:59:24 UTC

Every sigh in the night...

Antonio paused a moment and breathed deeply, raising his head just so, and hearing the breath the dark-haired nation let out, Lovino nearly fell off his seat as he was trying to sit up. The older nation's eyelashes fluttered slightly against his smooth tanned skin as he kept playing, losing himself in the music he was creating...

Every tear that you cry...

Each note that fell on Lovino's ears rang like a drop of rain... and each sweeping glance of the Spaniard...

...Seduces me...

Lovino was now sitting very still on the couch, trying to gain control over his mental state, but still completely spellbound. Not that Antonio noticed of course; he was too caught up in his music to look up. He couldn't see the Lovino at the moment, but he couldn't wait to see the look on that cute face when he finished playing, completely oblivious to the longing slowly emerging in Lovino's eyes.

And all that I am...The world had disappeared. Night had long since descended, but only now did the walls seem to vanish ( ... )

Re: 4/? Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 06:01:10 UTC

After what felt like hours, Antonio finally stopped playing. "So? Lovi, did you like it?" he asked, flashing another brilliant smile. But at the look on the Italian's face, he faltered. As unperceptive as he was, he could tell something was wrong. Lovino's behavior had been a little off all evening, but now his cheeks were really flushed, and his hands were trembling. And that passionate stare... There was something in Lovino's eyes that he'd never thought he'd see. If he didn't know better, he'd mistaken the expression as one of quiet heartache. He gently set the guitar down and walked towards his former charge, sitting down next to him and placing a hand on his shoulder. Little did he know of the emotional tempest that he'd unwittingly created swirling inside Lovino's heart.
Slowly and gently, Antonio touched his lips to the Italian's forehead, thinking it would calm him.

Your most innocent kiss...Involuntarily, Lovino shivers. A strange, pleasurable tingle lingers from where Antonio's lips had been ( ... )

Re: 5/5 Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 17 2009, 06:03:09 UTC

Their lips finally parted. Lovino could still feel the Spaniard's breath against his mouth as they both struggled to catch their breath, only dimly aware of his arms around Antonio's neck. "I take it you liked the performance?" Antonio asked, his forehead touching Lovino's and his arms around the younger nation's waist. Unable to formulate a response, the brunette scowled and dropped his gaze, face still red. For a while, neither of them spoke or moved.

Everything in this world...

At last Lovino nodded a little. Antonio laughed and hugged him... and then held on tighter when he felt Lovino returning the gesture.

Every voice in the night...

"It's gotten pretty dark out," Antonio whispered. Lovino stayed quiet, unsure of what he might say or do next once he let go of the older nation. Not hearing any response, the Spaniard guessed his thoughts. "You want to stay here tonight?" he asked quietly, gently stroking Lovino's hair. A muffled noise. "I can't hear you," Antonio teased, kissing the Italian's forehead again.

Every ( ... )

Epilogue anonymous September 17 2009, 06:06:45 UTC

That night, as Lovino drifted off to sleep next to him, Antonio smiled secretly to himself. He would have to remember to thank France for sending him that Celine Dion CD. And maybe send a thank you note to England for hexing his guitar. Maybe.

This might have been too fluffy and not smutty enough, but I haven't written smut before either so er... Hope OP!Anon enjoyed it.

Re: Epilogue anonymous September 18 2009, 19:25:50 UTC

Not!OP loves you. With a passion that would make Spain proud. And I don't really mind the lack of smut because seduction isn't about sex and I think you managed to write a very seductive fanfic.

And Spain's "...because it is." just made my heart go 'nnnghhhh <3 ' I listened t the song while reading the fill and I think it's perfect.

/melts

Thank you so much for writing this amazing fanfic, this anon will save and love this fill forever.

Re: Epilogue anonymous September 18 2009, 20:42:07 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! When I was posting at first, I thought, "Oh God, no one's going to read this because it was posted so long after the request was made," but you proved me wrong! Thank you for such a flattering comment. Writer!Anon blushes like a tomato from the praise. (////)

Re: 5/5 Spain/Romano: Seduces Me anonymous September 19 2009, 04:22:42 UTC

Also-not-OP thinks that this was absolutely gorgeous! I love the way you incorporated the lyrics and how absolutely heartwrenching Lovi's thoughts were... and how quickly Spain turned that around. Spain's lines about Lovino not getting any tonight and that last line about England hexing the guitar both made me laugh out loud. And that kiss was just fabulous. Well, the whole thing was. You did a fantastic job!

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