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Nations as trade items - France/America (Dowry) - 1/? anonymous September 28 2009, 13:36:11 UTC
A/N: Request here - http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=17569314#t17569314

This is a fill to the request that nations are used as trade items to establish good connections between countries. I don't know if this completely matches what the OP requested however. It's based on the 1778 Treaty of Alliance between France and America, during the American Revolutionary War.

DowryAmerica tried to remain calm when they came to break the news, but he couldn’t help fidgeting nervously. Behind him, John Adams paced the room, muttering irritably. America would have joined him, had Ben not pulled up a chair next to him and taken one of his hands in his own. He summoned up a shaky smile for the old man, but couldn’t hide the cold sweat on his palms. Ben patted the back of his hand reassuringly ( ... )

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Re: Dowry - 1/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 13:39:37 UTC
*Kicks formatting*America tried to remain calm when they came to break the news, but he couldn’t help fidgeting nervously. Behind him, John Adams paced the room, muttering irritably. America would have joined him, had Ben not pulled up a chair next to him and taken one of his hands in his own. He summoned up a shaky smile for the old man, but couldn’t hide the cold sweat on his palms. Ben patted the back of his hand reassuringly ( ... )

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Dowry - 2/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 13:41:38 UTC
Tom caught America’s hands in his own, clasping them anxiously. The young nation was startled, nearly dropping his chaise on his toes ( ... )

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Dowry - 3/? anonymous September 28 2009, 13:51:53 UTC
*sighs* That should be trunk up there, not chaise. And why is the formatting hating me tonight?!

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When the coach finally arrived that would take him to France’s residence (a chateau just west of New Hampshire called La Vert Montagne he’d been told), America was surprised to find that his escort was no other than Prussia himself. He clutched his bag tightly, his fingers suddenly nerveless ( ... )

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 13:52:28 UTC


More A/N: That's what I have so far, if it meets with the OP's approval. I do have plans to continue it, including working in another request (that I sadly lost the link to) about a sort of formal ritual around a nation losing his or her virginity. I subscribe to the state-tan theory, with the original 13 being around with Al, but the others being his kids. If the OP doesn't object, the continuation will eventually include some male preg. If there are objections... Well, I'll continue it anyways, but end it earlier on the kink meme and just have that part on my personal journal or something.

I know OP wanted the nations to be used by their higher ups, but I couldn't see America's founding fathers (or even the original 13) being completely callous about it. I hope OP didn't mind America going willingly either. It seemed the sort of thing he'd do, what with his hero complex, in order to help his people.

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 14:35:46 UTC
oh anon, this is WONDERFUL. I'm not OP, but I simply, simply, simply must have more.

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 29 2009, 09:43:14 UTC
More will hopefully be coming... just as soon as I write it!

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 14:53:30 UTC
Not OP either, but just... wow! It's a pleasant surprise to see Prussia here as well. You can rest assured that I will be following this for more. x3

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 29 2009, 09:43:57 UTC
Hooray!

I didn't plan on Prussia coming actually, but he invited himself. He does stuff like that.

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 18:49:20 UTC
This one looks really promissing! I can't wait to see the rest of it, your style is great, anon. <3

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 29 2009, 09:46:20 UTC
Thank you very much!

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 28 2009, 23:23:33 UTC
This is totally awesome, hot damn but I can't wait for more (poor Canada though)

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 29 2009, 09:47:16 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you like it! And yeah, I'd much rather lose my virginity (if I still had it) to France rather than England!

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous September 29 2009, 17:53:06 UTC
So the other states besides the first 13 are Alfred's kids huh...and he's going to be married to France, that means...anon likes where this is headed!

Vermont maybe?

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Re: Dowry - 3/? (con't) anonymous October 1 2009, 12:15:22 UTC
Definitely Vermont. ^_^

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Dowry - 4/? anonymous October 15 2009, 14:03:19 UTC
AN: I realized I made a dumb mistake in the last part. It would take more than a day of travel for Prussia and America to complete their trip. I’m adjusting that in this part. It still works fine with the above only, Prussia’s line about America getting some sleep should change to “I doubt you’ll be getting any in a few nights’ time.”

Apologies and thanks! I hope you enjoy the next bit. I’m not sure how long it will take ME to get where I want to go yet, but I appreciate the encouragement!“On your feet lover boy!” Prussia crowed, startling America out of an uneasy sleep with strange dreams. He rubbed the sand out of his eyes, blinking dumbly for a few moments as his brain took a minute to catch up with the rest of him. They’d been traveling for several days now, leaving early in the morning and continuing until dusk. It was more tiring than he’d expected, though that might have had something to do with his traveling companion seizing on the trip as the perfect time to quiz his captive pupil on military formations and ( ... )

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