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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

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Part 2 - Yes, sir (1/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:08:47 UTC

Original request from part 2: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=2921674#t2921674

The request is: Noble!Arthur and Stableboy!Alfred having sex.
So yeah.. there's not really a plot - do note there's a long "foreplay", but I've filled it so you can skip right to the smut in part 3 if you want to :'D Do enjoy!

Yes, sir“I hate horses ( ... )

Yes, sir (2/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:10:03 UTC

“But there’s nothing wrong with being a rabbit.” Arthur looked at Alfred. Alfred blinked with the eyes, and he bit down onto his lower lip in an excusing gesture. “…sir. There’s nothing wrong with being a rabbit, sir ( ... )

Yes, sir (3/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:11:31 UTC

Arthur was pushed hardly against the tree, Alfred’s much bigger body forcing itself onto him. His heated up lips made Arthur’s cold mouth melt, butterfly kisses and bites and sucks strongly turning him on ( ... )

Yes, sir (4/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:12:51 UTC

“Yeah.. Sure..” Alfred smiled and got to his feet as he started to undress himself. Arthur too let the last pieces of clothing fall to the ground before leaning back against the tree, slowly stroking himself as he took the sight of Alfred in. The other was very different from himself. His body was toned and well-trained, and despite his young age his skin was scratched and marked from hard work ( ... )

Yes, sir (5/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:14:11 UTC

“Get moving!” It was a faint moan, and Alfred slowly started to move out of Arthur before slamming into the other again. Arthur whimpered in pain and bit hardly down onto Alfred’s shoulder, making Alfred yelp in pain. But as he threw a look in Arthur’s direction, he could see how the other’s face was a mess of pain, and couldn’t get himself to complain ( ... )

Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:15:05 UTC

“It has really been that long?” Arthur mumbled as he noticed, getting up in sitting position. He rested his cheek at Alfred’s shoulder as he watched the red and yellow colours spread across the sky. Alfred smiled a little, slipping a arm around Arthur’s sweaty shoulders ( ... )

Re: Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 01:40:15 UTC

Oh my god..That was..orgasmic lol

DAMN

Literature-nerd!Anon here!! anonymous October 13 2009, 01:55:51 UTC

Oh wow it's amazing that their different status made this sooo hot!! The end had such a nice pastoral warmth to it too. Amazing work!! You rule!!

Also the sense that this was an AU was so subtle. Got right to the point "Yes Sir!!".

ReCaptcha: strong Celtics Chill out recaptcha, I'm sure one day Iggy will top like a hurricane.

Re: Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 02:31:05 UTC

/fap.

FUCK, THERE'S MORE?! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ A.W.E.S.O.M.E.

Dammit, anon, you make me feel so dirty already and its not over?! GOD, make me your slave so I can have my brain turned to mush daily because i am so hard for your writing!!

Loves and F5s to you.

Re: Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 02:45:39 UTC

...s-suddenly I feel very ashamed, as that part was supposed to be 6/6, not 6/? D: SO SORRY!

But I do have in mind making an epilogue (that's the reason why it ends as it does *wink wink* :'D)

Re: Yes, sir (6/6) anonymous October 13 2009, 03:05:10 UTC

Arthur's just as bad as Scotland his older brother, isn't he? |D

This was awesome, anon. I hope you write that epilogue soon!

Re: Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 03:28:02 UTC

this. was so hot.

wonderful, anon! the outdoors. the class-driven dirty talk. smelling each other. everything. amazing.

it'd totally be awesome if you wrote more...

Re: Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous October 13 2009, 20:42:24 UTC

Fuck, do I wish I could say something more coherent, but... Holy fuck that was hot. *A* I mean. Whoa.

'“N-no.” Arthur’s hands slipped from Alfred’s back to his face, squeezing his cheeks. He looked into the other’s eyes. “N-no, not Arthur, sir. Kirkland.”' FFFFFUCK YES. Gah, the "sir" thing is such a kink of mine.

If you're going to make an epilogue I'm gonna be on that like... like Arthur on a stable boy. XD (reCAPTCHA: skipping Japan, PFFFT, you know Kiku wants to join in)

Re: Yes, sir (6/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 21:50:39 UTC

This is awesome!! - although methinks you'll have to write about the meeting at lunch now!!

6/6!! anonymous October 13 2009, 02:47:00 UTC

Above should be 6/6 D: I AM SO BAD AT REMEMBERING STUFF LIKE WRITING CORRECTLY >__

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