Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

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Twisted With You [1/4]

[anonymous]

Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=17699362#t17699362
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The words are right there on the tip of your tongue. They've always been there, really, in the back of your mind, tucked into a little pocket in your heart, at the core of your very being, to be honest, just waiting for the fog to clear, waiting for you to finally realise what those feelings meant.

It took some time (a few weeks, hundreds of years, who's really counting?), but you finally figured out what caused those butterflies in the pit of your stomach. You finally figured out why you felt nothing but warmth and heat and intense longing every time Antonio smiled at you, every time his hand grazed yours. You know it can only come down to one thing, that one beautiful thing that everyone hopes for, and you're happy, so fucking happy, but... But. There's always a but

Twisted With You [2/4]

[anonymous]

You sit on the couch in Antonio's living room, silently fuming to yourself as the bastard cleans up after dinner. No one thing about the situation odd, not in the slightest. You are often in Antonio's living room, he always cleans up after dinner, and really, when are you not angry about something? Typically, however, you are just a bit (a lot) calmer after dinner, the late hour and your full stomach working together to keep you from exploding. Unfortunately, a certain dinner guest grated your nerves, and the fact that they ruined what would normally be a quiet evening only adds to your irritation.

"Ve~, fratello! Big brother Spain! It's so nice to see you

Twisted With You [3/4]

[anonymous]

You fall into an uneasy sleep in one of Antonio's guest bedrooms. You refuse to acknowledge why it takes you so damn long to actually fall asleep in the first place, why you continue to wake up, more tired than you were before. The mattress is too soft, the pillows too hard, and that jackass must have taken all the good blankets with him into his room. His room that you normally sleep in.

You sleep, and you dream, simply replaying all your inner-most worries.

What if he gives up on me?

What if he finds somebody else?

What if he doesn't really love me?

Waking up once again, this time in a cold sweat, you desperately try to calm your breathing, to push back the tears already rolling down your face.

"Fuck it all," you mumble, drying your eyes on one of the (way too stiff) sheets wrapped around you. If you don't tell him soon... If you don't tell him at all... If only you didn't have to see that goddamned cheerful face of his...

You close your eyes, blind to the world for a moment, and that is when it hits you.

You don't have to

Twisted With You [4/4]

[anonymous]

You glare for a moment (a useless action, you know) before reaching out a tentative hand. Your fingers find Antonio's cheek and gently stroke across the much beloved (though you would definitely never say that) face of the man you so desperately love with everything in you. Any further questions he may have die when his lips are captured by yours in a kiss. Soft, hard, warm, wet, passionate, heated, gentle. You don't really know, you're beyond descriptions because you never realised until now just how much you really, honestly wanted this, and now you finally have itSeeking hands stray lower, glad for the fact that Antonio has already undressed for bed. The flesh they come in contact with, while familiar to the eyes, entirely foreign to the fingertips. The slick skin of a shoulder becomes the jutting of a collar bone becomes the hint of a muscular chest becomes a hardened nipple becomes

Re: Twisted With You [4/4]

[anonymous]

You capture Romano perfectly~ That was beautifully written ♥

Not O.P.

[anonymous]

Oh, anon, this was so, so very beautiful. You captured Lovi perfectly, as well as Feli and Antonio--but still most importantly Lovi, of course~ I lovedlovedloved your choice to use the second person--that gave this story such a personal connection to Lovi that I don't think could have been reached any other way. The descriptions were lovely, particularly those of Lovi's feelings, because they were expressed in such a wonderfully familiar way that it was easy for the reader to connect to--and when you've got -that- ability, to reach your readers on such a personal level, you -know- you're a good writer.

Lovely job, anon~

Re: Twisted With You [4/4]

[anonymous]

Author anon, this is wonderful. ♥ Second person is difficult to pull off well, but you used it in just the right way. I fully agree with the anon above me - it really helped the reader connect to Lovino and his feelings about everything that was going on, and it made a concept that been done a million times over (not your fault, that's just how Spain and Romano are~) feel more fresh. Great job!

OP might just cry.

[anonymous]

Do you know what I did when I found out this had been filled? DO YOU KNOW WHAT I DID? I quite literally clapped my hands together in joy. I KNEW that my kink-meme karma would catch up once I started on that really long FrUK fill! :D

All that aside. My. GOD. I love this piece. So, so so so much. Oh my god, it is even better than I had ever, ever imagined it would be, and part of it is because of 2nd person, and part of it is because of Lovino being so, so Lovino, far better than I could ever have written him, and part of it was the incorporation of Lovino's jealousy of Feliciano, which I don't see as often as other aspects of their relationship. Anon, I've filled out my half, now where do I mail out the contract that gives you my SOUL?

Re: Twisted With You [4/4]

[anonymous]

You make me nervous to post my fill if I ever finish because it's been eating me on the inside since a long time ago but I can't finish it make me so happy author!non 8D. I must repeat what everyone said! The second person made it even more enjoyable because it's not usual to see that and you did it perfectly well and just. <333333333333

You're great ♥.

Re: Twisted With You [4/4]

[anonymous]

I'd love to leave a long comment about how beautifully wonderful this fill is, but I'd end up repeating everything that's been said. I'm so sorry for this fail!comment. You deserve much, much more!!
Just know that you're amazing~! ♥