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[Part Six] Romano/Alfred--Romano thinks Alfred is a Girl anonymous November 10 2009, 19:59:22 UTC

Original Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=17290018#t17290018

Really quick request summary: Romano meets Alfred and thinks he is a she. He tries to get 'her' to act lady like and develops a crush. Then Spain takes him back home and Romano promise to return to her one day.

So this fic developed a mind of its own and diverged a bit, so you get chibi, teenage, and present day Romano thinking Alfred is a girl.

My Fair Lady (1/?) anonymous November 10 2009, 20:08:36 UTC

Warning: I switch between human and nation names.

Late 1500s
TexasAntonio was going to be pissed at him for running away but Romano refused to spend anymore time with those girls. He wasn’t even sure how many of them there were anymore and they all spoke in different languages. What was with the New World and producing girls? Spain hadn’t found a single boy on the mainland yet. Romano wouldn’t to play any of the ridiculous, girly games and was tired of sitting around bored. If Antonio could go wandering around, so could he ( ... )

My Fair Lady (2/?) anonymous November 10 2009, 20:12:03 UTC

“Europe ( ... )

Notes anonymous November 10 2009, 20:15:14 UTC

--Romano is speaking Spanish. In my head canon, little America can understand the languages of his possible ‘big brothers’ but not Italian because as far as I can tell, they didn’t set up any colonies.

--The country America looks like is Finland, of course.

-- Nizhoni is a Navajo name, or at least, I am hoping it is. So she would be Navajo(or more accurately Diné)-tan. I know little bordering on nothing on Native American cultures, so forgive me if the not shaking/kissing hands thing is inaccurate.

--While there are many theories to the exact origin of the name, many history books (especially for kids) say Amerigo Vespucci and guess what? He is Italian. And “America” is apparently the feminine (and Latinized, I think) version of his name (or so said a History channel Special.)

This is my first time doing a fill and I already hate the character limits.

Re: Notes anonymous November 10 2009, 21:35:28 UTC

Lol I hate the character limits myself! It's a real bugger.
Anyways love this fill so far anon! Haven't seen a romano/america yet so this is really refreshing from the usual. Plus I like how you set the timeline to 1500s, it's an interesting approach!

OP~~<3 anonymous November 10 2009, 23:19:10 UTC

If this is your first fill then I'm honored and so SOOOO happy somebody picked this up!

Very cute so far (I like that America is refered to as 'she' through Romano's perspective. And he's being so darn polite! Adorable!) and you've really done thorough research. Props, props and mega!props over and over to you!

Re: Notes anonymous November 11 2009, 00:57:39 UTC

Aww! This is an absolutely wonderful start, you've got me hooked. Can't wait for more! <33

Re: Notes anonymous November 13 2009, 22:47:05 UTC

Well, I think your first fill is turning out awesome! I'm bookmarking it to check for updates!

Useful resource on Native American/Indian American stuff.

Re: Notes anonymous November 18 2009, 01:20:59 UTC

I love your connection to Finland lol And I'm curious about the Native American connection, this is the first story I've read that has actually brought that up.

Re: My Fair Lady (3/?) anonymous December 7 2009, 18:48:30 UTC

The land around them blurred as Romano ran with her. (Or more accurately, tried to keep up with America as she dragged him.) First, tall grasses rose from the ground and then great trees. America finally stopped at a small creek, holding tightly onto Romano’s wrist to keep him from falling into the water ( ... )

Notes anonymous December 7 2009, 18:56:31 UTC

Sorry for this being so short, but I should have another update in the next 24 hours(going through my beta), provided my Chem project doesn't go to hell.

Thank you for the encouragement (and the Native American resource)!

To OP: I am glad you like it! He's polite for now...but add in getting upset and Spain and he loses that a bit. And then the plans I have for teenage years...well, he tries to be polite for America :)

Re: My Fair Lady (4/?) anonymous December 8 2009, 20:28:56 UTC

The owner of the fur and teeth rose to its hind feet ( ... )

Notes anonymous December 8 2009, 20:32:59 UTC

--Romano seeing the native cultures as heathen and bad stems from the fact he has Rome, the center of the Catholic faith and Europeans (and Spain to a very high degree) looked down on those of different faiths.
--Fernanda would be Mexico/New Spain.
--I use “Azteca” to represent the Nahuatl speaking peoples even though Aztec technically refers to the people of Tenochtitlan. I was going to call her Mexica (after the name the Aztecs called themselves, Mexica Tenochca) but I thought that would get confusing for my poor headcanon. (But the history of Mesoamerica is confusing anyway when you are learning it in Spanish and English at the same time.)

Re: Notes anonymous December 9 2009, 22:43:35 UTC

Mexico's human name is a variant of Spain's surname?

Re: Notes anonymous December 11 2009, 04:39:31 UTC

No sé!
Ah, I kind of forgot that was part of his name. I remembered Carriedo but not Fernandez! I just used the feminine version of the King of Spain at the time of Cortez's conquering of the Aztecs.

OP<3 anonymous December 8 2009, 22:38:47 UTC

YES I love Azteca inclusion! Oh Anon, the one liners are just so freggin cute!

"Shit? What's that?" or "I like calling you Romo!"

So funny, and great historical accuracy. I hope you write other stuff on this kink!

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