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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

Fresh past-part fills post HERE

Comments and Suggestions go here

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How to leave the closet (1/?) anonymous November 21 2009, 22:42:28 UTC

Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=15448866

"America x England, just straight-up smut.
Bonus points if it's England's first time~"

I kind of added a storyline. Wooophs, sorry! Smut will come, though~Arthur sat in the park smoking his eleventh cigarette that evening while he patiently tried to persuade himself into going home. It had been two hours already, and besides his red lips that were heated up from the smoking his body was turning cold as ice. As he moved his feet in order to stand and straighten up in his back, he could see how his legs were shaking, and his actions suddenly occurred very ridiculous to him ( ... )

How to leave the closet (2/?) anonymous November 21 2009, 22:44:13 UTC

“What, kid, got a problem?! Here to get your ass kicked, haah? Haah ( ... )

How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 21 2009, 22:45:21 UTC

“Hey!” the biker roared, “hey, get up, dude! You don’t want to be hurt, do ya?” Arthur stumbled onto his feet again, his body still swaying in pain from the kick. His eyes fell upon the biker who was watching him with great concern in his blue eyes. “Ya okay ( ... )

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 21 2009, 23:27:18 UTC

NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH

more?

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 21 2009, 23:56:55 UTC

oshi -- FLYING MOTORCYCLE ATTACK! Yeah, I can see this in Alfred's repertoire of skills. This story goes from painful to BADASS in 60 characters, that has to be some kind of record.

Okay, enough of my fangirling. I really like the plot of this fill so far, especially since you're covering some of the negative aspects of being gay, which gets ignored a lot here. (Which I totally understand! But, you know, it's nice to switch up the material once in a while.)

AU!Arthur's life is just so typically dull/sad and then BAMF!Alfred arrives to claim save his ass! 8DD I'm sorry, I'm just so gar for Al right now, it's not even funny. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter, Anon~ Keep up the good work! ♥

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 00:06:30 UTC

That was mean!! How could you leave it there!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 00:13:07 UTC

OMG ANON!!!!!!!! THIS IS.. I JUST... MORE PLEASE!!

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 01:48:25 UTC

I'd go straight for motorcycle!alfred. Just sayin'.

recaptcha is "bristol 355-to-1" which for some reason is lulzy.

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 02:25:37 UTC

whao! Awesomeness

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 07:07:18 UTC

Oh, wow! More soon, I hope?

Re: How to leave the closet (3/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 08:56:38 UTC

I love this idea!! More!!

How to leave the closet (4/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 20:35:37 UTC

Wow, thank you all for such great comments! I'm really glad you like it, for - I must admit - I have so much fun writing on this! I do hope I won't dissapoint!Arthur was dying. The helmet was heating up his entire head, making him sweat like he was in a sauna. Furthermore, the tinted shield made him feel isolated from the world around him. When turning the head, all he could see was a blur of colours disappearing beside him, and mixed with the softened music it was as if he had stepped into a whole other dimension ( ... )

How to leave the closet (5/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 20:37:36 UTC

“That’s my kind of man!” Alfred grinned, patting Arthur’s back friendly. “And now - no more tears! I’ve already told ya once, ‘member?” Arthur nodded and pushed himself from the ground back up onto his feet, all the while trying to hold in the tears that were still fighting bravely for being spilled. It was as if he couldn’t stop now that he had begun, and he just kept his gaze on the ground in hopes of the guy overlooking his wet cheeks ( ... )

How to leave the closet (6/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 20:38:18 UTC

“N-no. No, of course I don’t,” he mumbled, and a second later he added: “As a matter of fact my best friend is gay.” It was so silly, and the way it came out clearly showed he was telling a lie. But Alfred didn’t seem to mind. He just smiled ( ... )

Re: How to leave the closet (6/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 21:19:43 UTC

OMG! I love this story so much authoranon! Please update soon!

Re: How to leave the closet (6/?) anonymous November 22 2009, 21:39:37 UTC

I love this story and the whole idea so much! I look forward to seeing more and the smut teehee

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