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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

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Part 5: England/America - shota anonymous July 21 2009, 16:38:42 UTC

Original request, for "warm, fluffy, 100% consensual shota":
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=14399498#t14399498

I'm posting the fill as a reply to this. If anyone else fills this, please feel free to post under this comment as well!

Re: all for you (2/2) anonymous July 22 2009, 04:26:36 UTC

*faints*

Anon, I love you. I shouldn't love this so much but that was so hot.

Great fill anon, great fill. And I love the ending, with them asking each other if it was weird.

Re: all for you (2/2) anonymous July 22 2009, 15:24:54 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm really happy you liked it! I imagined them confessing their secret kinks to each other, seeing how compatible those kinks could be, and deciding to give a little roleplay a whirl.

Another fill, shota included, will be with you momentarily. anonymous July 22 2009, 03:07:20 UTC

Just let me get it punched up. (And fix the text entry on my computer. It's gone all wonky)

... anonymous July 28 2009, 20:54:39 UTC

... where is this shota you promised us.

>->

*crawls back into hole*

another!anon says: anonymous July 29 2009, 15:33:34 UTC

I am quite excited for this shota as well. I might take a crack at it if this anon doesn't return, though. :)

HERE IT IS: Something In Between (1/I dunno yet.) anonymous July 30 2009, 21:19:16 UTC

SORRY GUYS. AUTHOR ANON IS MADE OF FAIL AND HAD TO WORK EXTRA HOURS THIS WEEK. HERE IS THE SHOTA I PROMISED. (Dear god, why can I never resist the urge to write shota...)

Also, imagine Alfred to be whatever age you wish. I had the idea for him to be on the way to maturity (as will be apparent later), but not all the way there yet by a long shot.

~~~~~

Arthur stepped off the boat and breathed in the smell of forest, of sand, of warm sun and frosty mountains. He truly loved the smell of America.

Speaking of whom...

This was strange. Alfred was usually tripping over his own feet to run out and greet him. Now, he didn't even see the boy anywhere. He took off his hat and scanned the area, searching for that small golden head that should be rocketing toward him any minute now--

"ARTHUR!"

"What--"

WHAMArthur landed on his face with something very giggly (and a whole lot heavier than he remembered) latched onto his back. He pushed himself up, stuck between catching his breath and trying not to breathe dirt, and reached around him to ( ... )

Re: HERE IT IS: Something In Between (1/I dunno yet.) anonymous July 31 2009, 03:57:29 UTC

~~~~~

"Now, steady, and for god's sake, aim before you shoot."

"I know how to do that, Arthur. I swear, you never take me seriously."

"I'm just showing you how to aim properly."

"You've been doing that since we got here. I think I can handle it."

Arthur relented, and stepped back. Alfred fired, and sure enough, hit the target dead-on. Arthur was genuinely surprised. Perhaps he's grown even more than I thought.

Shot after shot sounded from Alfred's gun. Every target Arthur had set up fell, with scary accuracy. Alfred rolled his shoulders to shake off the effects of the recoil, and Arthur couldn't blame him. The gun was smaller than most, but still packed a punch.

He's still so small, though, when you get right down to it.Finally, right about the point when Arthur began to wonder if he was going to have to get new targets, it seemed Alfred had gotten bored ( ... )

^^That's supposed to be "Something In Between (2/?)^^ anonymous July 31 2009, 03:58:42 UTC

I hate livejournal sometimes.

Re: HERE IT IS: Something In Between (1/I dunno yet.) anonymous July 31 2009, 04:45:19 UTC

Oh yass... TYVM, author!anon. I like where this is going. >_>
Setting up some angst, I see? Carry on...

Re: HERE IT IS: Something In Between (1/I dunno yet.) anonymous July 31 2009, 05:00:10 UTC

A bit, yes. I personally can't handle too much angst at once. (XD I'm such a sucker for happy endings...so yeah, I guess you could call it angst, but it's gonna get resolved, since I'm writing it.)

And I am glad that someone likes it so far. Keeps me motivated.

Re: HERE IT IS: Something In Between (1/I dunno yet.) anonymous July 31 2009, 05:08:52 UTC

I'm glad to see you started to fill this!

Wonderful so far, I look forward to more!

Something In Between (3/?) anonymous July 31 2009, 05:57:22 UTC

~~~~~

A couple of days passed in relative calm. Alfred hadn't forgotten to put the towels back in the bathroom, and Arthur had managed to put the events of that evening behind him...mostly.

The whole thing would have been so much easier if every move the boy made, if all the subtle changes in his posture (no longer curved the way it used to be), his voice (still very high, but now completely without the lisp of childhood), the way he carried himself (he seemed so sure of himself, so ready to take the world head-on) hadn't been so damned prominentThey were on horseback now, riding through the exquisite countryside, gazing at the mountains in the distance and silently contemplating what lay beyond. Alfred caught sight of a hawk soaring into the distance, and he got his horse into a fast gallop following the bird ( ... )

Re: Something In Between (3/?) anonymous July 31 2009, 06:10:54 UTC

Hnnnnnnnngh...

What are you doing to me author!anon?
Your prose. I like it. Your pacing. I like it. Your characterizations. I like it.
I'm not sure how precocious Alfred is... so many questions still linger in my mind. You make me want to missfire so I can tell the rest of the kink meme how much ILU.

....author-anon is too flattered for words. anonymous July 31 2009, 16:54:53 UTC

She hasn't done something this involved in ages, and I mean, it's one thing for people to like the story, but when the prose, and pacing, and characterizations (which she was so worried about you have no idea) are all complimented, too, it just...AGH. *goes to finish part 4*

Incidentally, in regards to Alfred's precociousness, author-anon also (as if she wasn't going to hell already) literally just finished the last day of working in a child care center before writing this. Kids perceive a lot more than she previously gave them credit for.

Re: Something In Between (3/?) anonymous July 31 2009, 08:16:20 UTC

I like where this is going

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