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It was depressing that, after going trough all this trouble, he still had to eat his lunch alone. This wouldn’t do, like, at all. He would have to be more emphatic, or something, or Arthur wouldn’t get it, and come on, how stupid could someone be, at this rate it would take ages before they could take this to the next level. Or, like, any level at all. Because Arthur was stupid. Alfred was getting back to the meeting room, when he saw Francis and Antonio stalking him again ( ... )
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“Which, believe me, you won't be able to even if you try,” Francis said. Alfred decided to ignore this before he could fully consider the implications.
“...right.”
“So,” Antonio said “You'll tilt your head until your lips are almost touching, and when you’re almost feeling the cheap beer on his breath, when you almost taste his lips, you'll stop. Francis, allow me to demonstrate.”
“But of course,” Francis said.
“Now wait a minute,” America started, but Antonio raised one authoritative finger, and he stopped, biting his lower lip.
Antonio turned to Francis. He held his chin gently with the tip of his fingers, looking straight at Francis’ eyes, and Alfred had to remind himself he was doing on purpose. The guy was dangerous, how could anyone turn on and off an expression like that, and- ( ... )
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“Wrong?” Arthur whispered, and his eyes looked huge and green and scared and Alfred shook his head, a little frantic:
“Yes, I was supposed to wait for you to kiss me first, and now I went and- uh, do you mind if we try this again? I kinda lost my focus here, and-”
“Oh,” Arthur said, and then, a little stronger, “Oh, I see,” and then he pulled Alfred by his tie:
“You're such an idiot,” he grunted, and kissed him full on the mouth. Alfred's eyes widened.
Just for one second. Then his eyes were closed, and he held Arthur's shoulders and pulled him against his chest:
“HA,” he said when they stopped to breath. “I knew it would work!”
“... what?”
“My super awesome cunning plan! And, baby, I think I can die happy now, coz I've just seen a piece of heaven.”
Arthur laughed, a little nervous:
“What“Hey, Arthur, do you have a map? Because I just keep getting lost in your eyes ( ... )
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*insert incoherent noises here*
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The chat-up lines were so cheesy, so terribly bad that they were good. Alfred was far from smooth. But he got there in the end. And how you wrote Arthur was perfect - not too blushy, not too tsundere, just with an ounce of independence and grumpiness and something which just makes Arthur him and it was just so him. How you wrote Alfred was also just brilliant... Not smooth, still a hero, barging his way in, using lines he doesn't realise are cheesy... amazing. You really nailed both of them!
The ending was perfect.
And all this, coming from someone who doesn't really ship them that much. STUNNING, I SAY.
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And France and Spain were... very, very lovely. Incredibly so.
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AAAAAAAAAAAAWWW~ <3<3<3
Marry me?
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