Dreaming of Reality pt. 1
anonymous
August 10 2009, 01:55:01 UTC
This is writer!Anon's first ever kink meme fill and first non drabble uk/us ~ Writer!Anon is also too lazy to think up a not lame title but its the story that matters not the title right “Well, it looks like you’re doing better than a few weeks ago. It’s a good thing I found you, or you might have keeled over. Haha. Then who would the world have to call an idiot, right?” Arthur, England’s furry browed representative laughed with a pat to Alfred’s back. The sharp pat was enough to cause the American to lurch forward a bit. Having only recently recovered from a deep rooted recession, Alfred was still feeling a bit under the weather. Forcing a smile, Alfred looked over his shoulder at Arthur. “Y-Yea,” he stammered
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Dreaming of Reality pt. 2
anonymous
August 10 2009, 02:01:04 UTC
He was on the phone again in an instant, arranging an emergency jet be prepared for immediate departure when he arrived back home. Not delving into a detailed reason, he only said that he needed to go to America as fast as the plane could take him. The whole flight, Arthur sat restlessly in his seat. Minutes seemed like hours, and Arthur hoped he was overreacting; however, when he arrived at Alfred’s home, he was distressed to find he hadn’t
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Dreaming of Reality pt. 3
anonymous
August 10 2009, 02:06:40 UTC
However, not long after Arthur left, Alfred dragged himself to England with a head cold, seeking the kind touches and gentle concerned attitude that Arthur had given him not too long ago. Before stepping up to Arthur’s house, Alfred stood mystified. Something was different, though he could not put his finger on just what had changed. For the longest time, he simply stood at the edge of Arthur’s driveway, gawking at the great castle like house. An eerie wind blew, as if pushing Alfred towards the home. Spooked, he quickly scurried up the driveway to the door. Using the knocker attached to the door, he knocked. “A…Arthur!” he called out, masking his slight nervousness
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Dreaming of Reality pt. 4
anonymous
August 10 2009, 02:14:46 UTC
Arthur guided Alfred into his bedroom, releasing him upon entering. He then loosened his tie, stretching an arm out towards the ceiling. “Hnn...” he groaned. But Alfred was distracted, staring off into space again. “You alright?” Arthur asked, still concerned
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Dreaming of Reality pt. 5
anonymous
August 10 2009, 02:21:42 UTC
Arthur and the faeries looked to one another. Then a small smile snuck onto Arthur’s face. “You can see them? Really?” Receiving a nod, Arthur suddenly leaped on top of Alfred and hugged him tightly, laughing joyously. “Alfred! I’m so happy! You can actually see them!” Pulling away, Arthur stared at Alfred. It was the happiest he had ever seen the Englishman in his life
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Re: Dreaming of Reality pt. 5
anonymous
August 10 2009, 13:47:57 UTC
Although the story itself fill the request perfectly and it was well written, I felt the ending was an abrupt one. Prior to the last paragraph, description was rich and the emotion and action of each character were thoroughly explored. However by the time the last paragraph was read, it feels like all the feelings were rush (I suspect you wished to finish sooner?).
Perhaps an Epilogue could better explain the disappointment felt by England and the confusion for America?
I hope you find this opinion somewhat helpful anon, I do commend you for filling this and I am grateful for the story.
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Perhaps an Epilogue could better explain the disappointment felt by England and the confusion for America?
I hope you find this opinion somewhat helpful anon, I do commend you for filling this and I am grateful for the story.
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