Everything depraved and yandere wanted!
anonymous
August 9 2009, 02:55:11 UTC
A Nation is deeply and obsessively in love with America. For whatever reason (shyness, bad history, Alfred's geography!fail, or they hide it very well, IDK), neither Alfred or anyone else knows about it. The obsession gets worse when they think Alfred is getting too close to someone else.
This Nation can't take it anymore and drugs Alfred, so they could have at least one night together even if Alfred doesn't remember. One night turns into two, into three...and the yandere also gets increasingly possessive. They love Alfred and is the only one he needs, why does he does he bother with all those worthless others?
Then Alfred, after mentioning to the others his concern over "missing days and nights," disappears.
How it ends - with a creepy sad ending or a rescue - is up to anon.
Kinks: yandere love, dub/non-con, drug-use, mind-games, kidnapping, suspense, plz! The yandere could be anyone
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Eyes Wide Open [1/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 15:07:04 UTC
He had a dream. It was a nice dream, he decided as sleep relinquished its hold on him, because he was pretty sure it wasn't a nightmare, even if the details eluded him. Or maybe it was a nightmare, a particularly devious one that was hiding its face from him, because, for some reason, his body was aching, even though he didn't have the time to do much the day before. There was yet another boring meeting, awesome hamburgers for lunch (because it was his turn to do the catering), more meetings, and then
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Eyes Wide Open [1.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 15:32:33 UTC
America was just gorgeous when he was sleeping. Oh, sure, he was always gorgeous, the golden boy with the infectious smile and eyes as blue as the endless sky they were always affixed on. Somehow, though, he seemed even more beautiful asleep, and he just couldn't resist leaning in to steal another kiss. And another. And another. America made a small sound, lips curling slightly into a smile, causing the butterflies in his stomach to renew their fluttering
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Eyes Wide Open [2/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 16:48:58 UTC
Like a true hero, he was right as rain, fit as a fiddle by the time the next chapter rolled about. The second time he fought off sleep to rejoin the land of awakening, he found himself refreshed, if desperately in need of the toilet and a couple of glasses of water. As if to reward him for suffering through that morning, there was even a note on the nightstand informing him that the morning meetings were cancelled because it turned out that everybody was suffering from a hangover that morning. Though he still couldn't remember exactly what happened during the night, his imagination worked to fill in the blanks with amusing images of a drunk England blabbing out his innermost secrets (again
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Eyes Wide Open [2.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 17:10:27 UTC
Today, America smiled at him. At him. At him. For a moment, he panicked, wondering if America remembered anything from the night before. Fortunately, it didn't seem to be the case, though America seemed really, really happy all day.
The only downside to this was that America was smiling at everyone else too. Liet had told him before, reminicing about his time spent under America's employment, that America was just like that. When he was happy, he wanted everyone to be happy with him. When he'd pointed out that that sounded rather idiotic, that it was impossible to make everyone happy, Liet just smiled sadly.
"At least he tries."
Liet. Liet loved America too, right? And America, the eternally clueless America, could remember Lithuania's name. Was there something there? Liet'd denied it when he asked, but of course he would deny it. Liet knew that he was totally head over heels for America, so there was no way he'd ever admit it. After all, Liet used to be his too, and he knew well enough not to fight with him over the things he
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Re: Eyes Wide Open [2.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 17:58:13 UTC
Oh... my God. This type of fic usually isn't my cup of tea, but YOU MAKE IT MY CUP OF TEA, ANON. YOUR WRITING. IT IS AMAZING. YOUR CHARACTERIZATIONS, EACH PART OF THE CHAPTER MOVING FROM AMERICA'S TO RUSSIA'S POV; I AM IN LOVE.
Eyes Wide Open [3/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 18:48:03 UTC
He didn't know why his stomach was making such a huge protest about taking another bite of the hamburger, but he thought maybe it was time to ban trade unions. His body wasn't allowed to go on strike! He wasn't France, after all. But somehow, not even the extra bacon and cheese helped rouse his appetite, so he spent the rest of his lunch hour sipping listlessly at his coke
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Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 19:16:54 UTC
He'd worried for a bit about how he was going to get the pills into America, but things worked out in the end: America didn't suspect a thing. Everyone thought he was really sweet and considerate for volunteering to send America back to the hotel, but the best part was that America himself thought that he was really sweet and considerate to send him home
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a different anon says:
anonymous
August 9 2009, 19:41:23 UTC
author!anon...I was so sure before, that it was Russia...but then you made a comment up-page about "Are you sure it's Russia?" and then I was confused...
But...
I think I've got it now. Not gonna spoil it for everyone else. Just wanted to let you know, I'm onto you. ; )
(Unless it really is Russia, then...I'm just reading into things too far...D: )
Re: a different anon says:
anonymous
August 9 2009, 19:43:46 UTC
oiufhd I TOTALLY MISSED THAT ABOUT `are you sure it`s russia` but then that LINE and I thought, `Russia would`t say that` and ...dsfhoihfoushdfi oh god if it is who I think who it is, author-anon, you are a genius...
Re: Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 20:08:15 UTC
This anon is very conflicted and confused XD
Most of this fill points to it being Russia. Anon dislikes rape-truck!Russia but loves Territorial!Russia. So... conflicted.
And then there was that not-so-subtle hint that it isn't Russia.... Confused. I have a vague idea who this might be, but there are a lot of usual suspects when it comes to a nation being obsessed with America-- so I could be wrong.
Either way, ignore me. I love this fill and I want to have Writer!Anon's babies <3
OP: The suspense is killing me! Thank you, writer!anon!
anonymous
August 9 2009, 20:33:08 UTC
I did not expect this to be picked up so quickly, or that such a talented writer!anon would fill this! Your writing and characterizations are incredible. You could feel the suspense, the mystery, the obsession - everything I was looking for in each and every word. This is an amazing piece of art (yes, art) that you've given us to enjoy, writer!anon.
What I really have to commend you is definitely the suspense/mystery. Yes, I adore the underlying sexiness and creepiness, but you're definitely keeping us on our toes! Is it Russia? It seems like it is. But maybe it's not. You've left me as in the dark as America and as fascinated with this as the obsessor!
I'll stop here, because I will probably go on and on about the brilliance of this. I applaud you. Thank you so much for this, writer!anon. I eagerly await the next installment.
Re: Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 21:35:54 UTC
This is quite the mystery you given us, I wonder who this mysterious assailant may be? The vodka comment made me think of Finland. (Should I be ashamed of myself?) I honestly have no idea though. At least I feel like I can rule out Russia (too obvious, or are you trying to mislead us?) and England (unless the man refers to himself in the third person). I can't wait for the next chapter <3
Re: Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 22:49:17 UTC
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF KEYBOARD SMASH!!
Dear author!anon, I thought I knew. Yes, yes, I thought, "Oh, Russia. How obvious." Then you slapped me in the face with your AWESOME. My heart skipped a beat.
I re-read this, anon. And I realized. Yes. You. YES. YES!!! I will not say anymore. But, I know, anon. At least, I think I know... And I love you for it. Oh, how I adore you...
I am so in love with what you have written. I read this on a whim and I was surprised beyond my wildest dreams. YOU ARE MY CUP OF TEA, ANON!
Let me just say, that the INTERACTION between America and Russia... their dialogue is very amusing.
"I am trying to get more tourists to come to spend their tourist money, so is like flirting, da?" Ho ho... Oh, Ivan~ You write him very well.
This Nation can't take it anymore and drugs Alfred, so they could have at least one night together even if Alfred doesn't remember. One night turns into two, into three...and the yandere also gets increasingly possessive. They love Alfred and is the only one he needs, why does he does he bother with all those worthless others?
Then Alfred, after mentioning to the others his concern over "missing days and nights," disappears.
How it ends - with a creepy sad ending or a rescue - is up to anon.
Kinks: yandere love, dub/non-con, drug-use, mind-games, kidnapping, suspense, plz! The yandere could be anyone ( ... )
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The only downside to this was that America was smiling at everyone else too. Liet had told him before, reminicing about his time spent under America's employment, that America was just like that. When he was happy, he wanted everyone to be happy with him. When he'd pointed out that that sounded rather idiotic, that it was impossible to make everyone happy, Liet just smiled sadly.
"At least he tries."
Liet. Liet loved America too, right? And America, the eternally clueless America, could remember Lithuania's name. Was there something there? Liet'd denied it when he asked, but of course he would deny it. Liet knew that he was totally head over heels for America, so there was no way he'd ever admit it. After all, Liet used to be his too, and he knew well enough not to fight with him over the things he ( ... )
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F5ING FOREVER!!
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But...
I think I've got it now. Not gonna spoil it for everyone else. Just wanted to let you know, I'm onto you. ; )
(Unless it really is Russia, then...I'm just reading into things too far...D: )
Anyway, this is going great! I love it! <3
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Most of this fill points to it being Russia. Anon dislikes rape-truck!Russia but loves Territorial!Russia. So... conflicted.
And then there was that not-so-subtle hint that it isn't Russia.... Confused. I have a vague idea who this might be, but there are a lot of usual suspects when it comes to a nation being obsessed with America-- so I could be wrong.
Either way, ignore me. I love this fill and I want to have Writer!Anon's babies <3
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What I really have to commend you is definitely the suspense/mystery. Yes, I adore the underlying sexiness and creepiness, but you're definitely keeping us on our toes! Is it Russia? It seems like it is. But maybe it's not. You've left me as in the dark as America and as fascinated with this as the obsessor!
I'll stop here, because I will probably go on and on about the brilliance of this. I applaud you. Thank you so much for this, writer!anon. I eagerly await the next installment.
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KEYBOARD SMASH!!
Dear author!anon,
I thought I knew. Yes, yes, I thought, "Oh, Russia. How obvious." Then you slapped me in the face with your AWESOME. My heart skipped a beat.
I re-read this, anon. And I realized. Yes. You. YES. YES!!!
I will not say anymore. But, I know, anon. At least, I think I know... And I love you for it. Oh, how I adore you...
I am so in love with what you have written. I read this on a whim and I was surprised beyond my wildest dreams. YOU ARE MY CUP OF TEA, ANON!
Let me just say, that the INTERACTION between America and Russia... their dialogue is very amusing.
"I am trying to get more tourists to come to spend their tourist money, so is like flirting, da?"
Ho ho... Oh, Ivan~ You write him very well.
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