I've seen people asking for mafia!italia to go mafia to protect Germany. I've seen people asking for mafia!italia and knight!prussia to take revenge for germany. I've seen people asking for mafia!italia and inquisitor!spain to take revenge for Romano.
I want to see mafia!romano doing his best to protect italy, this time. XD i know i'm not original, but i think i've been missing this. Besides, mafia!romano is sexy as hell.
so, revenge for hurting italy (and not crack!hurt, but the painful kind of it)
Bonus: i don't care if it's just brothers or italicest or add whatever pairing you want (like, sparo and gerita) as long as romano goes EVIL on the ass of those who hurt his bro.
Bonus2: if you want to add someone else, i'd like to see yakuza!japan.
For You [1/?]
anonymous
August 13 2009, 08:17:27 UTC
Nngh, writer!anon is so tired. Well, I'm trying my best to work in those bonuses, but I'm not sure the way I worked in Yakuza!Japan is the way you were thinking. :/ I hope you enjoy anyway?Romano leant against the wall and sighed, blowing out a stream of cigarette smoke
( ... )
OP was away from computer for three days, and coming back and finding THIS... OH GOD, writer!anon. you made my month *loves*
it's exactly as i wanted it, with Romano, and feli being hurt (urgh, forgive me, italy...) and the intensity of the feelings and of the narrative... *incoherent fangasming*
oh, poor mafia!underling. XD but he said it right, did he? Romano might not be really IN the mafia, but he's THE mafia, in the end, because he's a Nation.
oh, this is getting better and better *dies*
oh, you placed the yakuza as the opposite party? interesting choice *_* i really want to know how this is going to develop itself, most assuredly is going to be just as awesome as the rest until now was. :3
Romano's feelings and everything, it's so realistic *hearts* you're keeping up the awesome work and i'm just on the edge of my seat here :3
For You [3/?]
anonymous
August 13 2009, 08:19:15 UTC
Cautiously, carefully, slowly, Romano pushed the door open, cringing as it creaked loudly. He let out a small huff of exasperation at the sound, then looked forward.
A hallway, devoid again of life.
Romano stared down the hallway silently.
Still no movement.
He frowned, deeper, and then slowly began to walk down the hallway, the two members of the Mafia following him.
The door closed.
Romano turned, quickly, staring at the shut door with wide eyes. He strained his senses, listening for the slightest of movements.
The slight swish of cloth moving through air was his only warning, but it was enough.
Romano spun back around, instinctively raising his arm to protect his hand-and his gun.
There was a sharp clinkRomano stared up at the sharp blade of the knife, caught by pure luck on his gun. Then he looked at the person who had attacked him
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Re: For You [3/?]
anonymous
August 15 2009, 13:52:34 UTC
Another reader here!
HOMG! This is just! Woa~~~~~~~~~
Totally likes how you put in here, that the nations themselves also has a responsibility, even if they couldn't really control the mafia/yakuza, because they're still their people. Also, since Italy was also Japan's friend and ally, it makes a lot of sense.
Loving the pacing here. The cliff hangers were all placed just right. Can't wait for the next one! \o/
recaptcha says: divinity power. that is you, writer!anon.
oh, first of all, i did single reviews for each chapter, but this gets a bit longer. I’m sorry if I didn’t review before, but I had jumpy connection and it didn’t allow me to post anonymous comments on the meme, not even after logging out… *dies*I loved Japan's line there, about him not controlling his yakuza as much as romano cannot control his mafia. it's fitting with their mentality and how the Nations are, and it's a different kind of mindset from how it has been showed by other people, I really like this idea. it shows they are the Nations yakuza and mafia were born in, but they have nothing more than a vague thread of control or relations with them anyway
( ... )
For You [4/?]
anonymous
August 15 2009, 21:21:20 UTC
Thank you guys~ I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far, and I hope that you'll like the next installation!Romano rushed off the plane the moment it was safe, muttering hasty curses under his breath, shoving bullets into his gun
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Re: For You [4/?]
anonymous
August 16 2009, 01:04:15 UTC
F5F5F5F5F5-------------------
Writer!anon, it's been quite some time since I've last used the F5 button. Now, it's being pressed and mashed beyond recognition. *calms nerves down*
The hospital isn't going to be happy about the bloody mess. xD But I guess it's a given, besides, they're in the hospital anyway. That aside... *resumes F5 button-mashing*
For You [5/?]
anonymous
August 21 2009, 04:34:17 UTC
I apologize for the delay, but with school starting up, it may very well take longer to get these out. Hopefully not; I think we're nearing the climax and the end~! T-thank you so much for the comments! OP, I'm absolutely thrilled that you're enjoying it so much asfksldn you're Italian? *sweats* I hope I'm not messing up your country(s) personalities too badly! ^^;Romano sat awake that entire night, sitting in a chair he had dragged to the bedside, head propped up on one hand. That way, with the door open, he could not only see his brother, but he could also see some way down the hall, from the angle he sat
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Re: For You [5/?]
anonymous
August 22 2009, 08:23:57 UTC
Oh oh oh!!! Please more! This is getting highly interesting!
I wonder how is Japan going to deal with this. Sure, Veneziano is his close friend, not to mention he's also dealing with Romano. But the yakuza are also his people and I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
and you're of course NOT butchering the italians! don't ever think like this anymore, you're working delightfully well X3
poor Romano who didn't sleep and is snappy *winces* and feli ;A; *cuddles* and isn't calm-on-the-surface japan hot? I just can't wait to see it unfolding :)
thanks again, awesomewriter!anon, i keep worshipping you ^o^
I've seen people asking for mafia!italia and knight!prussia to take revenge for germany.
I've seen people asking for mafia!italia and inquisitor!spain to take revenge for Romano.
I want to see mafia!romano doing his best to protect italy, this time. XD i know i'm not original, but i think i've been missing this. Besides, mafia!romano is sexy as hell.
so, revenge for hurting italy (and not crack!hurt, but the painful kind of it)
Bonus: i don't care if it's just brothers or italicest or add whatever pairing you want (like, sparo and gerita) as long as romano goes EVIL on the ass of those who hurt his bro.
Bonus2: if you want to add someone else, i'd like to see yakuza!japan.
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it's exactly as i wanted it, with Romano, and feli being hurt (urgh, forgive me, italy...) and the intensity of the feelings and of the narrative... *incoherent fangasming*
oh, thank you SO much *goes to read on*
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oh, this is getting better and better *dies*
oh, you placed the yakuza as the opposite party? interesting choice *_* i really want to know how this is going to develop itself, most assuredly is going to be just as awesome as the rest until now was. :3
Romano's feelings and everything, it's so realistic *hearts* you're keeping up the awesome work and i'm just on the edge of my seat here :3
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A hallway, devoid again of life.
Romano stared down the hallway silently.
Still no movement.
He frowned, deeper, and then slowly began to walk down the hallway, the two members of the Mafia following him.
The door closed.
Romano turned, quickly, staring at the shut door with wide eyes. He strained his senses, listening for the slightest of movements.
The slight swish of cloth moving through air was his only warning, but it was enough.
Romano spun back around, instinctively raising his arm to protect his hand-and his gun.
There was a sharp clinkRomano stared up at the sharp blade of the knife, caught by pure luck on his gun. Then he looked at the person who had attacked him ( ... )
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HOMG! This is just! Woa~~~~~~~~~
Totally likes how you put in here, that the nations themselves also has a responsibility, even if they couldn't really control the mafia/yakuza, because they're still their people. Also, since Italy was also Japan's friend and ally, it makes a lot of sense.
Loving the pacing here. The cliff hangers were all placed just right. Can't wait for the next one! \o/
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oh, first of all, i did single reviews for each chapter, but this gets a bit longer. I’m sorry if I didn’t review before, but I had jumpy connection and it didn’t allow me to post anonymous comments on the meme, not even after logging out… *dies*I loved Japan's line there, about him not controlling his yakuza as much as romano cannot control his mafia. it's fitting with their mentality and how the Nations are, and it's a different kind of mindset from how it has been showed by other people, I really like this idea. it shows they are the Nations yakuza and mafia were born in, but they have nothing more than a vague thread of control or relations with them anyway ( ... )
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Writer!anon, it's been quite some time since I've last used the F5 button. Now, it's being pressed and mashed beyond recognition. *calms nerves down*
The hospital isn't going to be happy about the bloody mess. xD But I guess it's a given, besides, they're in the hospital anyway. That aside... *resumes F5 button-mashing*
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oh, god, the suspence really HURT X( and romano is terribly adorable, with his reassuring italy ;A; it made my heart twist and go all gooey.
also, japan. oh, japan, you're also sexy.
author!anon, i keep repeating myself, but have all my internets and babies and everything for working this out *clings very close*
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T-thank you so much for the comments! OP, I'm absolutely thrilled that you're enjoying it so much asfksldn you're Italian? *sweats* I hope I'm not messing up your country(s) personalities too badly! ^^;Romano sat awake that entire night, sitting in a chair he had dragged to the bedside, head propped up on one hand. That way, with the door open, he could not only see his brother, but he could also see some way down the hall, from the angle he sat ( ... )
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I wonder how is Japan going to deal with this. Sure, Veneziano is his close friend, not to mention he's also dealing with Romano. But the yakuza are also his people and I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
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Show me more, Author!non-san, please!~~~
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and you're of course NOT butchering the italians! don't ever think like this anymore, you're working delightfully well X3
poor Romano who didn't sleep and is snappy *winces* and feli ;A; *cuddles* and isn't calm-on-the-surface japan hot? I just can't wait to see it unfolding :)
thanks again, awesomewriter!anon, i keep worshipping you ^o^
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