bad friends trio: high school edition
anonymous
August 20 2009, 08:21:07 UTC
okay, thanks to an wicked awesome pic i found on pixiv (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=big&illust_id=5213422) i want to read a high school fic with the trio where gilbert is a girl (who goes by gilbert, for the CGS unit of magnetomotive force, and whose real name no one knows or dares mention in the case of the teachers). see, i can't help but think that gilbert would be the kind of chick that guys could get along with and still think more than friendly thoughts about. cool to hang out with, like one of the guys, but still be...woah, you know? so, i figure, antonio and francis also seem the like the type to not like the idea of guys ogling their best friend...
This is why you don't have a boyfriend 1.1
anonymous
August 23 2009, 04:28:22 UTC
"Guys, spring break, nude beach," Francis suggests one day the moment they were dismissed for lunch, people chatting about while others fled to the canteen for food. "Yes or yes?"
"How about a big 'fuck no'," Gilbert tells him, shoving her notebook into her book bag. "I'm not taking my top off unless someone's paying me!"
"Quick, Antonio, give her some gold," Francis demands from the Spaniard who grins and shakes his head.
"I'm seriously broke. I can't take money from underclassmen all the time," Antonio informs them, slinging his backpack over his shoulder as he eyes Gilbert. "Besides, it's not like you've got something we haven't seen before
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dude. this is fucking awesome. and i think you've got Gilbert as a teenager pretty much down. and a part 2 from francis's side would be great too. but seriously, awesome. oh antonio....and these three, you've really managed to translate them into high school students and still have them be them. (conquistador=bully really made me laugh...and poor az...gotta wonder what the inquisition here was though). and i'd be very happy to see a few more scenes if it's alright with writer!anon? also? the spork was fucking inspired.
Re: This is why you don't have a boyfriend 1.2
anonymous
June 13 2010, 03:15:17 UTC
No clue why this doesn't have more comments, because it's brilliant. All the little calls back to history were hilarious, and you absolutely nailed the BFT. Love it :)
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"How about a big 'fuck no'," Gilbert tells him, shoving her notebook into her book bag. "I'm not taking my top off unless someone's paying me!"
"Quick, Antonio, give her some gold," Francis demands from the Spaniard who grins and shakes his head.
"I'm seriously broke. I can't take money from underclassmen all the time," Antonio informs them, slinging his backpack over his shoulder as he eyes Gilbert. "Besides, it's not like you've got something we haven't seen before ( ... )
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NEEDS MORE LOVE <3333333333333333
The chracterisation of each character is just absolutely fucking brillant!
And you wrote Gilbert absolutely AWESOME! <3
I wish there was a second part ; A ;
And oh god, I ship Ame x Pru like a ho on heat, I loved the little bit of it in here *D*
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