Broken Betrayal [1/7]
anonymous
August 24 2009, 17:39:12 UTC
I think I tried to remain on the light side, after all. I didn’t use any boiling oil, nor did I have Germany insert shards of glass inside Italy, nor use any big torture device or animals. I still hope this is good even if I didn’t really go all out. Also, it’s a bit short. I feel a bit dirty after writing this…There was a soft dripping noise in the background. It was almost too far to be heard, but with the deep silence, every single drop echoed distinctly as it fell down, hitting the slimy floor and soon being followed by another
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Re: Broken Betrayal [7/7]
anonymous
August 25 2009, 02:09:26 UTC
You have amazing writing. But honestly, I wish I didn't read this.
I started reading it, and didn't want to finish it, but I did anyway. I guess it was curiousity, but fuck. :/ I was honestly cringing, I felt like crying, and I continuously took breaks in the middle of reading going "NONONONONONONONONONO D:" while covering my face like it was actually going to help.
This is a major compliment by the way. Because I can watch Imprint, I can watch Ichi the Killer, I can watch The Audition, I can watch pretty much anything and not have anywhere near the reaction I had to this.
I am not sure if it's because I read many stories of Ludwig and Feliciano having fluffy moments and such, but then the way I see Ludwig has been changed instantly after reading this. My brain can never un-read this. Just... no.
And this sounds like an insult, but I mean this as a compliment, because you have a major talent in writing gore.
Re: Broken Betrayal [7/7]
anonymous
August 29 2009, 02:31:12 UTC
I am really glad you made reference to the Italians declaring war on Germany after their surrender to the Allies in WWII... I've never seen it mentioned else where in the fandom.
In spite of me needing to skim over some parts due to the nature of the fic, I could tell This was really well written. You have a lot of great detail.
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But honestly, I wish I didn't read this.
I started reading it, and didn't want to finish it, but I did anyway.
I guess it was curiousity, but fuck. :/ I was honestly cringing, I felt like crying, and I continuously took breaks in the middle of reading going "NONONONONONONONONONO D:" while covering my face like it was actually going to help.
This is a major compliment by the way.
Because I can watch Imprint, I can watch Ichi the Killer, I can watch The Audition, I can watch pretty much anything and not have anywhere near the reaction I had to this.
I am not sure if it's because I read many stories of Ludwig and Feliciano having fluffy moments and such, but then the way I see Ludwig has been changed instantly after reading this. My brain can never un-read this. Just... no.
And this sounds like an insult, but I mean this as a compliment, because you have a major talent in writing gore.
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i'm truly, utterly sorry. uh, i just hope i didn't kick you away from any future gerita you might find...
i mean, you shouldn't take this too... uh... er...
... sorry. *fails*
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but all the same i love it it was amazing way to go i love you writeranon!!!
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In spite of me needing to skim over some parts due to the nature of the fic, I could tell This was really well written. You have a lot of great detail.
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