Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses
anonymous
October 10 2009, 00:10:00 UTC
Estonia jumped awake when he heard the dull thud from the next room. He rubbed his eyes trying to get his sleep addled mind to focus. He stumbled over to the next bedroom to check on Latvia, running his hand along the wall to catch himself as his drowsy mind occasionally forgot which foot to move. As he had suspected the preteen had fallen out of bed again from tossing about in his sleep. Neither he nor Lithuania had gotten much sleep due to the young boy's daily night terrors. Not that they would have anyway. Their time joined in servitude to Russia and subsequent battle for independence held enough painful memories to give them ALL nightmares enough to last a lifetime
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses
anonymous
October 10 2009, 00:12:56 UTC
“Hey, I’m here now. Raivis, look at me. It’s Eduard. Remember you’re in Estonia at my house. You’re safe. Safe. Raivis. Safe. Okay? No more danger
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses
anonymous
October 10 2009, 19:49:33 UTC
Poor these boys... this must be so hard for them. Actually I really love the part when it's Eduard who comforts his brothers, normally in these fanfictions, it's Toris job to comfort, but hey I love it so much and thank you for filling this wonderful comforting story. You had just made my day!
Re: Writer Anon-Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2?
anonymous
October 10 2009, 21:49:13 UTC
Thanks! It's my first fill so I'm glad that I did ok. I sort of got inspired after I posted the story, and planned to write a small epilogue to wrap things up. But it ended up a little longer than that and is more like a second half. If you are interested, I could post the other half of the story. I think the first part ends well, but the second part gives some more insight into the characters, especially about the decision whether to stand together or not.
Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2
anonymous
October 11 2009, 14:46:23 UTC
Eduard awoke the next morning to Raivis roughly shaking him awake. “Eduard,” he whined. “Hurry and wake up already. C’mon you’ve got to stop him
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2
anonymous
October 11 2009, 14:48:39 UTC
A little while later Eduard heard a timid knock rap lightly on his door while he was changing. Quickly buttoning up his slacks he called, “Come in” as he reached for a shirt
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2
anonymous
October 11 2009, 14:52:09 UTC
Eduard had turned away and walked into the other room after a polite terse greeting to Poland, giving him the bare minimum of courtesy. A dull ache tightened his chest and throat. He stood there his eyes closed with his hands balled in fists trying to will the emotion away. Suddenly he felt gentle arms embrace him from behind, hands clasped the top of his shoulders from the front as he felt someone’s cheek rest against his back. He reached up with his right hand to lightly pat the hand resting on his left shoulder. ‘Ah, Raivis,’ he thought. He opened his mouth to speak soothing words when a familiar scent wafted up to him. The cologne Toris wore. It was not Raivis but Toris who held him. It was Toris who broke the silence first
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Ending)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 14:56:21 UTC
Feliks glanced back up to the large front window and smiled as he tucked a small card into the front pocket of Toris’ luggage. He turned leaving it there on the front step as he walked back down the front walk to his car. A taxi came chugging in behind his vehicle and he turned to greet the newcomer as he paid the driver and got out
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Ending-small Epilogue)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 15:01:47 UTC
Norway sat next to Finland chatting quietly over coffee and some of Denmark’s tinned biscuits that he had brought with him to the home that Finland shared with his fellow Nordic nation Sweden. Suddenly the short slender man stopped speaking as his eyes glazed over and he stopped mid-sentence. A moment later recognition returned to his gaze and he shivered as if suddenly cold. It all happened so fast that Norway wondered if the event had even happened at all
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Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Author's Notes)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 15:17:20 UTC
Regarding Epilogue- So what's going on with Tino when his eyes glaze over? Here's a little bit of interesting Finnish folklore that I threw in for fun. It's called Etiäinen! (In Finnish folklore, an Etiäinen is a spirit sent forth by a shaman or by a person in great distress. It will appear either where the shaman wishes or find the person with whom the sender has the strongest emotional bond. An Etiäinen also means a precognitive vision or dream: someone can, for example, see or hear a family member or a guest coming before the person in question really arrives. For people in Lapland and other parts of Finland too etiäinen is a completely normal phenomena. It can be compared to someone knowing it will rain soon. If it's looked at from a biology point of view it can be explained as an instinct that in harsh natural conditions developed in people who really needed it.)* -Description courtesy of Wikipedia.
Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Ending-small Epilogue)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 19:20:55 UTC
*totally applaud the wonderful ending of part 2!!!* Thank you once again so much! It was totally worth reading this all, btw are you also gonna post this on fanfiction.net or at Hetalia club? ^^
Comforts and kisses. >3<
Bonus: It must take place after Russia was terrorizing these poor brothers. ;A; Smut is totally fine by me. ^^
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You had just made my day!
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*waits patiently for it*
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So what's going on with Tino when his eyes glaze over? Here's a little bit of interesting Finnish folklore that I threw in for fun. It's called Etiäinen!
(In Finnish folklore, an Etiäinen is a spirit sent forth by a shaman or by a person in great distress. It will appear either where the shaman wishes or find the person with whom the sender has the strongest emotional bond. An Etiäinen also means a precognitive vision or dream: someone can, for example, see or hear a family member or a guest coming before the person in question really arrives. For people in Lapland and other parts of Finland too etiäinen is a completely normal phenomena. It can be compared to someone knowing it will rain soon. If it's looked at from a biology point of view it can be explained as an instinct that in harsh natural conditions developed in people who really needed it.)*
-Description courtesy of Wikipedia.
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Thank you once again so much! It was totally worth reading this all, btw are you also gonna post this on fanfiction.net or at Hetalia club? ^^
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