Deeper [7/?]
anonymous
October 22 2009, 22:50:44 UTC
He bends his head and tongues a teasing, barely-there path down Alfred’s neck. His eyes flutter shut as his ears drink in Alfred’s mewl when lips close over a hardening nipple and suckle.
Arthur smirks as Alfred keens and struggles to move his hands, nipping coaxing the nub in his mouth to hardness. He can’t look away from Alfred’s face, from the rose-red flush and the way his tongue flicks across his lips. He’s never seen Alfred like this, so genuine, open, and sweet
( ... )
Deep [8/?]
anonymous
October 23 2009, 03:57:42 UTC
“Yeah….” Alfred says, and Arthur loves the sleepy little smile that tries to flicker over that beautiful face.
“Do you want me to bring you out?”
“No….” Alfred’s voice is a wisp of air, and Arthur inhales a sharp, deep breath as his cock twitches. “Just…felt intense,” Alfred finishes with a murmur. Arthur brings a thumb down to brush at Alfred’s temple, feeling Alfred melt and purr beneath his fingers as he sinks in further - Arthur hopes he’s not going in too deep.
“Alfred,” Arthur murmurs, “You’re going to close the book now, and you’re looking up and around the room with its sky-blue walls and throw pillows and whatever else makes you feel most relaxed. You feel the magic in the room, Alfred - can feel it reading your very thoughts and giving you what you desire. Alfred…tell me what it’s giving you
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Deeper [9/10]
anonymous
October 23 2009, 19:48:41 UTC
Arthur doesn’t really pay attention to himself as he coats his hands with lube and strokes himself slick and wet for Alfred, ignoring the pleasant ripples that flutter through his body from his cock. He just watches and listens - and then Alfred arches his back as he slides into himself to the second knuckle. “Arthur,” he gasps, sounding so thin and stretched, so very closeAnd Arthur feels himself fall away from his own body. He surges forward, snatching Alfred’s wrists as he leans up to kiss his mouth. “Your hands,” he pants, as he pulls Alfred out of his own body, “are tied above your head.” He puts Alfred’s wrists above his head, crossed, to emphasize the point. “And as you watch me, I reach down and put a cock ring on you.” Arthur watches that lovely cowlick bob as Alfred tilts his head a little, groaning as Arthur’s fingers circle the base of his prick. “It’s tight, so tight, that you won’t be able to come until I take it off
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Deeper [10/10]
anonymous
October 23 2009, 20:03:54 UTC
“I’m going to count to five,” Arthur murmurs against Alfred’s bellybutton. “And every time you feel my lips against your skin, you’re going to feel energy rushing up through you, and into you. When I kiss your lips and reach ‘one’, you will open your eyes, fully awake and out of your trance.
“Five.” He presses his lips to Alfred’s bellybutton. “Four.” His chest, and the steady, strong heart that beats beneath the cage of his bones. “Three.” His throat, gentle brush of lips against the Adam’s apple. “Two.” A whisper of a word, a brush against his jaw.
“One.” He moves more than speaks the last word against Alfred’s lips, and then presses down. He feels Alfred’s eyelashes flutter and hears the sharp intake of breath; strong arms circle up around Arthur’s shoulders, pressing their bodies together as they kiss
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Re: Deeper [10/10]
anonymous
October 23 2009, 23:24:28 UTC
oh, omg, oh. You are amazing, anon. I love proper hypnosis, I'm fascinated by it but I never considered it a kink of mine - you've changed that! (I have a lecture on it next week... that might be a little awkward XD)
Beautifully written, to me the the whole script was very realistic and oh, my god, it was so hot I think I may have been staring at my screen with a slightly dazed expression the whole way through. ♥!
I'm going to be reccing the hell out of this when you de-anon :D
Re: Deeper [10/10]
anonymous
October 24 2009, 02:52:21 UTC
Oh my, I loved this. But what I loved especially was that their relationship was completely mutual. That England wasn't doing anything against America's will, just that America trusted him to do it. ♥
Re: Deeper [10/10]
anonymous
October 24 2009, 08:35:47 UTC
...I-I never knew how erotic hypnosis could be.. until I saw this!!! I've worked with a friend on hypnosis before, especially with THIS VERY induction and, wow, I cannot express how much I am loving this fill!
I was hesitant on reading this just because I was thinking that it'll be based on the stereotype, but this proved me wrong.
"Drugs are for Losers...
...and Hypnosis is for losers with big weird eyebrows!"
[quoted from a show called Futurama]
England topping someone with hypnosis (preferable America but doesn't have to be)
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Arthur smirks as Alfred keens and struggles to move his hands, nipping coaxing the nub in his mouth to hardness. He can’t look away from Alfred’s face, from the rose-red flush and the way his tongue flicks across his lips. He’s never seen Alfred like this, so genuine, open, and sweet ( ... )
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“Do you want me to bring you out?”
“No….” Alfred’s voice is a wisp of air, and Arthur inhales a sharp, deep breath as his cock twitches. “Just…felt intense,” Alfred finishes with a murmur. Arthur brings a thumb down to brush at Alfred’s temple, feeling Alfred melt and purr beneath his fingers as he sinks in further - Arthur hopes he’s not going in too deep.
“Alfred,” Arthur murmurs, “You’re going to close the book now, and you’re looking up and around the room with its sky-blue walls and throw pillows and whatever else makes you feel most relaxed. You feel the magic in the room, Alfred - can feel it reading your very thoughts and giving you what you desire. Alfred…tell me what it’s giving you ( ... )
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But this? This is incredible. I'm very interested, anon- quite good (and, admittedly, arousing) writing. I can't wait to read more.
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I'm just going to camp here alright? *waits for next part*
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“Five.” He presses his lips to Alfred’s bellybutton. “Four.” His chest, and the steady, strong heart that beats beneath the cage of his bones. “Three.” His throat, gentle brush of lips against the Adam’s apple. “Two.” A whisper of a word, a brush against his jaw.
“One.” He moves more than speaks the last word against Alfred’s lips, and then presses down. He feels Alfred’s eyelashes flutter and hears the sharp intake of breath; strong arms circle up around Arthur’s shoulders, pressing their bodies together as they kiss ( ... )
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That was hot, sweet and sexy. -nosebleeds all over laptop- Uwaaaaa~
CAPTCHA: the saluting. How fitting!
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Beautifully written, to me the the whole script was very realistic and oh, my god, it was so hot I think I may have been staring at my screen with a slightly dazed expression the whole way through. ♥!
I'm going to be reccing the hell out of this when you de-anon :D
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Lovely work.
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I've worked with a friend on hypnosis before, especially with THIS VERY induction and, wow, I cannot express how much I am loving this fill!
I was hesitant on reading this just because I was thinking that it'll be based on the stereotype, but this proved me wrong.
Thank you Writer!Anon, thank you!!!
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You make me really happy. I like reading accurate fills.
reCAPTCHA said: driven Al (it seems a sequel is needed)
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