Kind of a Cinderella-esque story, but we love 'em, right?
anonymous
November 3 2009, 17:08:27 UTC
England/America (in that order, if need be) where England is a prince and America is the peasant (so, yeah, human names!).
Prince Arthur is in love with Alfred and tries his hardest to impress him a la his riches and all that jazz, but to no avail! Not to mention he's secretly doing it as he's already engaged (the who is up to anon) AND it's against court wishes to marry a peasant. What ever will he do?!
Bonus: There is another person courting Alfred! (don't feel obligated to the bonus, as there's already a decent amount of conflict with out it, I feel) ^_^
Re: Kind of a Cinderella-esque story, but we love 'em, right?
anonymous
November 4 2009, 23:48:40 UTC
his reminds me of Sleeping Beauty a bit. =O Where Prince Phillip meets Aurora in the forest and they fall in love, and Phillip thinks that Aurora is a peasant.[and so does Aurora duhhh~ xD]
The Troubles of Alfred F. Jones [2/?]
anonymous
November 15 2009, 15:02:16 UTC
Thank you so much OP! I'm really happy that you like it. I hope you like this as much (I think I suck at Alfred's PoV but lets see how this goes) Hey guys! My name is Alfred F. Jones and I’m having some trouble. Perhaps you could listen and help me out
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Y-Y-Y-YOU FILLED THIS AND DIDN'T LINK IT TO THE FILL PART, YOU MEAN YET WONDERFUL AND LOVELY AUTHOR ANON!!!!! I COULD HAVE BEEN READING FAIRY TALE GOODNESS DAYS AGO, MAN!!!! Ah well, THIS IS AWESOME!!!
OP ADORES you for doing this and picking it up so soon after I requested it, THANK YOU! *internet hugz* And I totally burst out laughing at this: "you could cut my fucking balls off" particularly because not more than a paragraph before you had Arthur being all poetic and lovey dovey, AWESOME COMEDY TIMING RIGHT THERE, I LOVE IT!!! XDDDD Oh, and you added a BALL!! I can't believe I didn't think of that, FANTASTIC! I also love how totally smitten Arthur is and it's just so cute and-GAH! X3333
The only thing I can really say is that there are a lot of run on sentences, but that's just me being a grammar nazi, IT'S STILL KICK ASS!!! *glomps* I can't wait for more, oh beautiful author anon~!
Prince Arthur is in love with Alfred and tries his hardest to impress him a la his riches and all that jazz, but to no avail! Not to mention he's secretly doing it as he's already engaged (the who is up to anon) AND it's against court wishes to marry a peasant. What ever will he do?!
Bonus: There is another person courting Alfred! (don't feel obligated to the bonus, as there's already a decent amount of conflict with out it, I feel) ^_^
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Anyways I like the idea of it~seconded.
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Can't wait for more~
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Y-Y-Y-YOU FILLED THIS AND DIDN'T LINK IT TO THE FILL PART, YOU MEAN YET WONDERFUL AND LOVELY AUTHOR ANON!!!!! I COULD HAVE BEEN READING FAIRY TALE GOODNESS DAYS AGO, MAN!!!! Ah well, THIS IS AWESOME!!!
OP ADORES you for doing this and picking it up so soon after I requested it, THANK YOU! *internet hugz* And I totally burst out laughing at this: "you could cut my fucking balls off" particularly because not more than a paragraph before you had Arthur being all poetic and lovey dovey, AWESOME COMEDY TIMING RIGHT THERE, I LOVE IT!!! XDDDD Oh, and you added a BALL!! I can't believe I didn't think of that, FANTASTIC! I also love how totally smitten Arthur is and it's just so cute and-GAH! X3333
The only thing I can really say is that there are a lot of run on sentences, but that's just me being a grammar nazi, IT'S STILL KICK ASS!!! *glomps* I can't wait for more, oh beautiful author anon~!
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