England gets his feelings hurt by another nation, which in turn upsets chibiAmerica, who proceeds to seek vengeance on Englands behalf and totally pwns the other nation all by his little self, giving England bragging rights forever over the nation.
Extra points for: Historic basis to the hurt feelings England finding out what America is doing when the other nation comes begging for relief and forgiveness.
The Perfect Height
anonymous
December 26 2010, 21:07:57 UTC
It's not... quite what you asked for, but I couldn't resist. I hope it pleases <3America and Canada sat next to each other, identical expressions of awe on their faces. This was, after all, the first time either of them had gotten to see England and France actually interact
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Re: The Perfect Height
anonymous
December 31 2010, 00:13:47 UTC
Thank you, both for the compliment (I can't help it, I adore writing for these four) and for correcting my newbie mistake (this is only my second fill). Eventually I'll figure out where things go xD;
Re: The Perfect Height
anonymous
December 31 2010, 01:06:19 UTC
Is it weird that I can see this happening in canon? All the little details like France getting angry at England was saying when he owned Canada, England being smug over America's defence, the name Awesomesauce because oh chibi!America and the last little bit of dialogue between England and America was funny.
Also another thing about posting, thanks for posting it the Fills list, that's how I found it, but also fills for requests in closed parts (like anything 14 or below really) go in the Past Part Fills 5 post. That way there is enough comment space so anons can say whether they liked it or not. Because this Part only has ten comments left before it's full, so there may be people who like your fill but unable to comment. It's really confusing I know, I had to get a mod to fully explain it to me with the links and everything.
Re: The Perfect Height
anonymous
December 31 2010, 16:14:09 UTC
America’s eyes glazed over and a little bit of drool dripped from the corner of his mouth. Canada for the first time wished they weren’t related. It wouldn’t be the last.
Pfff, what the hell is this awesomeness. The kids' conversation was fantastic, and the adults behaved more immaturely than them. I like Alfred's new name, and I think it should stay; I like that England was smug here, and not the whimpy hurt thing I imagined reading the prompt, lol.
Re: The Perfect Height
anonymous
January 19 2011, 02:56:02 UTC
I will reply quickly before the comment space runs out - you are awesome and this fill definitely got more than a few chuckles out of me. The ending was just perfect! 8D
Extra points for:
Historic basis to the hurt feelings
England finding out what America is doing when the other nation comes begging for relief and forgiveness.
(Did I do this right? I hope so.)
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(for future reference, perhaps post it to the fills list as well as the finished fills? More people check the fills list)
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Also another thing about posting, thanks for posting it the Fills list, that's how I found it, but also fills for requests in closed parts (like anything 14 or below really) go in the Past Part Fills 5 post. That way there is enough comment space so anons can say whether they liked it or not. Because this Part only has ten comments left before it's full, so there may be people who like your fill but unable to comment.
It's really confusing I know, I had to get a mod to fully explain it to me with the links and everything.
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Pfff, what the hell is this awesomeness. The kids' conversation was fantastic, and the adults behaved more immaturely than them. I like Alfred's new name, and I think it should stay; I like that England was smug here, and not the whimpy hurt thing I imagined reading the prompt, lol.
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