Re: [Russia/Canada]Victory is a matter of perspective [2/6]
anonymous
June 26 2010, 00:43:51 UTC
Sorry, forgot the numbers! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
“You won by one goal! One!”
“I still kicked your ass.”
That did it; in less than two strides Russia threw his full weight onto Canada’s back, body checking him against the lockers, effectively pinning there. Canada wheezed more out of surprise than pain - after so many years of hockey against Russia, he was as used to being crushed by him as one could be.
When Russia spoke next, his lips were so close to his ear Canada could feel it brushing against his cooled skin. “Now, please shut up.” Canada shivered when the sound of Russia’s thick accent reached him, but it wasn’t from the cold of being pushed against hard metal
( ... )
Re: [Russia/Canada]Victory is a matter of perspective [3/6]
anonymous
June 26 2010, 00:45:32 UTC
Russia gripped his shoulders, and when he looked at him his pupils were dilated he almost couldn’t see their color. Canada gulped, adrenaline telling him to act instead of think. Do not think Matthew, donotthinkdonotthinkdonotthink
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Re: [Russia/Canada]Victory is a matter of perspective [4/6]
anonymous
June 26 2010, 00:46:35 UTC
Russia sat on the bench with his legs open, touching himself idly while Canada sat beside him. Russia gave him a look Canada couldn’t read, and pulled him over him thighs, kissing his lips softly.
But, awkward as it was, it was already one of the best sexual experiences Canada ever had.
A cool digit probed his muscle ring gently, slick lube and warming at the touch. It slid in, and he took a deep breath to relax himself. He knew Russia was watching him, but he didn’t want to see another unreadable look and pressed his forehead to Russia’s shoulder. Another finger entered him, and along with the other they stretched and rubbed and went even deeper, deeper, until-
“Fuck.” He felt Russia’s smile on his skin. Damn bastard
( ... )
Re: [Russia/Canada]Victory is a matter of perspective [5/5]
anonymous
June 26 2010, 00:48:22 UTC
Not only forgot the numbers, but also counted them wrong. Sorry about that guys.Canada crossed his arms in front of his chest and watched Russia drink his tea in small sips. His hair was still wet; it took them over an hour to clean it. “I have a question
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anonymous
June 26 2010, 02:38:24 UTC
fgjkweryt34io wefmweklsncsdufn c sjdmncxfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff. ILU so much right now. This pairing! Gloating hockey Canada! Gentle Russia! falling over during sex. *flailingmotions* ILU
captcha: "sauciest almost" Canada was certainly saucy.
Re: [Russia/Canada]Victory is a matter of perspective [5/5]
anonymous
July 7 2010, 02:24:11 UTC
Hi anon, you're awesome - you made a fic that makes me happy in my pants and my brain. :D
One: HOCKEY SEX. 'nough said. Two: Russia that wasn't a rapetruck. ♥ Three: Winning the game didn't automatically meant Canada topped, and when given the choice he decided to bottom. Subverting the "whose dick goes where = power" trope ftw! Four: The not taking-all-of-Russia's-cock-at-first during the sex was both hot and made my accuracy!anon self glee. Five: Imperfect sex - the fall made me laugh irl.
There were a few odd word choices - "lapse of conscience," instead of "attention" or some such, "eyes running" instead of "moving" or "going" - that made me "^_^?" but didn't throw me out of the story. I don't know if those are false friends or intentional, but it might be useful to add in another editing sweep for things like that. Yanno, if you care. >>; THAT SAID your grammar is generally excellent so you get a reason Six: GRAMMAR YAY. Smut + Grammar = my OTP
But seriously this is awesome & you're awesome. LOTS OF LOVE.
Re: [Russia/Canada]Victory is a matter of perspective [5/5]
anonymous
July 9 2010, 02:17:47 UTC
First of all, THANK YOU, LOVELY! You're too kind!
About the word choices, well, you see, I'm just so used to them that I never thought it could sound odd to someone else. I'll try to be more careful from now on, thank you for pointing it out for me!
Bonus 1: Canada keeps making gloating over winning the match
Bonus 2: The only way to shut him up is sex-- or not.
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“You won by one goal! One!”
“I still kicked your ass.”
That did it; in less than two strides Russia threw his full weight onto Canada’s back, body checking him against the lockers, effectively pinning there. Canada wheezed more out of surprise than pain - after so many years of hockey against Russia, he was as used to being crushed by him as one could be.
When Russia spoke next, his lips were so close to his ear Canada could feel it brushing against his cooled skin. “Now, please shut up.” Canada shivered when the sound of Russia’s thick accent reached him, but it wasn’t from the cold of being pushed against hard metal ( ... )
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But, awkward as it was, it was already one of the best sexual experiences Canada ever had.
A cool digit probed his muscle ring gently, slick lube and warming at the touch. It slid in, and he took a deep breath to relax himself. He knew Russia was watching him, but he didn’t want to see another unreadable look and pressed his forehead to Russia’s shoulder. Another finger entered him, and along with the other they stretched and rubbed and went even deeper, deeper, until-
“Fuck.” He felt Russia’s smile on his skin. Damn bastard ( ... )
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captcha: "sauciest almost" Canada was certainly saucy.
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One: HOCKEY SEX. 'nough said.
Two: Russia that wasn't a rapetruck. ♥
Three: Winning the game didn't automatically meant Canada topped, and when given the choice he decided to bottom. Subverting the "whose dick goes where = power" trope ftw!
Four: The not taking-all-of-Russia's-cock-at-first during the sex was both hot and made my accuracy!anon self glee.
Five: Imperfect sex - the fall made me laugh irl.
There were a few odd word choices - "lapse of conscience," instead of "attention" or some such, "eyes running" instead of "moving" or "going" - that made me "^_^?" but didn't throw me out of the story. I don't know if those are false friends or intentional, but it might be useful to add in another editing sweep for things like that. Yanno, if you care. >>; THAT SAID your grammar is generally excellent so you get a reason Six: GRAMMAR YAY. Smut + Grammar = my OTP
But seriously this is awesome & you're awesome. LOTS OF LOVE.
*bookmarks*
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About the word choices, well, you see, I'm just so used to them that I never thought it could sound odd to someone else. I'll try to be more careful from now on, thank you for pointing it out for me!
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