Destiny - 1/2
anonymous
November 22 2009, 07:46:35 UTC
A/N: sorry OP, I got this scene in my head and this is what happened… warning: genderswitch, a bit dramatic. ---
There was something in the fire.
The girl’s eyes flew open in a gasp and she breathed heavily, short cropped black hair sticking to a creased forehead. Cold sweat covered her clammy skin, and she frowned, hands shaking as she tried to keep her fingers in their proper seal position.
The sacred fire crackled on fiercely in front of her, and she blinked hard, letting the comforting warmth eventually slow the racing of her frantic heart.
For months now, there was a malevolent warning in the messages the Kami were sending.
-A war time poster flying free from a telephone pole.-
Normal, uncomplicated images… which shouldn’t have spoken of revolution, and yet, they did.
-A clatter of old cans being thrown down.-
Like the sparkling of light through a brilliant crystal, the visions always scattered into fragments when she woke from her meditation.
-Two figures. A hand outstretched. And everything burned.- The world was
( ... )
Re: Destiny - 2/2
anonymous
November 22 2009, 21:26:25 UTC
I thought this might be one of those hilarious parodies, but I was really surprised by the tone of this. I really like the idea of the Nation-tans as normal girls who become their countries. Great piece of writing, anon!
Re: Destiny - 2/2
anonymous
November 23 2009, 01:11:02 UTC
Wow.... o__o That was... surprising. Wow. So intensive and... beautiful too. Idk, somehow the mood of the fic just sucked me in. I didn't expect it at all but this fill is so going to be favourited.
I would just love fanart/fancomics, but fic and such is fine too.
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There was something in the fire.
The girl’s eyes flew open in a gasp and she breathed heavily, short cropped black hair sticking to a creased forehead. Cold sweat covered her clammy skin, and she frowned, hands shaking as she tried to keep her fingers in their proper seal position.
The sacred fire crackled on fiercely in front of her, and she blinked hard, letting the comforting warmth eventually slow the racing of her frantic heart.
For months now, there was a malevolent warning in the messages the Kami were sending.
-A war time poster flying free from a telephone pole.-
Normal, uncomplicated images… which shouldn’t have spoken of revolution, and yet, they did.
-A clatter of old cans being thrown down.-
Like the sparkling of light through a brilliant crystal, the visions always scattered into fragments when she woke from her meditation.
-Two figures. A hand outstretched. And everything burned.- The world was ( ... )
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And it was with the rising feeling of awe and frightening wonder, that the girl realised they were from a dream. Her dreams ( ... )
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And I will love to read any continuation or sidestory or anything to do with this universe... (Hint, hint)
Oh, and I love fic just as well as fanarts, really - I should have worded the request better, I think. Sorry about that!
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Great fill Anon~
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Approving el oh el for Greece being "Luna". xDb
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'Spagetti and meatball head', indeedy~~
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Beautiful anon, absolutely beautiful.
And the use of the nation flag color in the uniforms? Brilliant
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