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[Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 1a/3 anonymous December 31 2009, 19:23:52 UTC
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=10259394#t10259394 America finds out about the Zimmerman Telegram and is not pleased with Mexico. Eventually results in non-con with a really possessive/yandere America?

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The news was not going to be taken well. England knew this much the moment America barged into the conference room, unexpected and uninvited, several steps ahead of his boss--who had been the one England's men had been planning to present with their findings.

"Mr. President, this is a private meeting," England protested, glaring at America.

America smiled brightly at England's blatant disapproval and hugged him so hard England thought a few of his ribs were being cracked. "England, you know there can't be a meeting about me without me present!"

England shoved the younger nation away, fuming. "It's not about you!"

"Alfred Jones is the country. Anything involving the U.S. has everything to do ( ... )

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[Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 1b/3 anonymous December 31 2009, 19:24:53 UTC
America stopped talking, either out of respect to the President's order or offense at not being humored. Many of his previous bosses--in spite of knowing what America was--never could seem to get over the fact that America wasn't as young as he appeared. Therefore most avoided thinking about it too much by acting paternally. This president didn't let him get away with anything. England had to wonder where he stood, in America's opinion. The President himself did not give the impression of liking America very much, appearing more the type who, upon landing presidency, was deeply dismayed to learn the country had a personification; few people were ever comfortable seeing firsthand the results of their actions, having expected them directed to a nameless and faceless mass of people ( ... )

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[Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 1c/3 anonymous December 31 2009, 19:26:32 UTC
Notes: During WW1, the British were severely limiting German communication. The United States, not yet in the war and not wanting to join, tried to keep good terms with Germany by allowing diplomats use of government telegram cables, through which the coded Zimmerman Note was sent (January 19th, 1917). The British had been watching US cables, copied the telegram right away, and had it decoded by mid-February. It was reported to then President Woodrow Wilson on February 23rd before becoming public news on March 1st ( ... )

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Re: [Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 1b/3 anonymous December 31 2009, 22:43:28 UTC
Lemme just 'oooh' and 'aww' over this for a minute.

Damn, I love it --everything. I read this feeling the heavy air around England and Wilson.

I really love this.

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Re: [Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 1b/3 anonymous January 1 2010, 06:41:38 UTC
this is really good
Or worse, whine about Mexico "cheating" on him with Germany

please update this soon!~

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[Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 2a/3 anonymous January 31 2010, 03:44:23 UTC
His new guardian had ordered him to stay away from his southern neighbor.

This rule was hard on America: in the days before England had arrived, New Spain had been the only person among America's companions; all the others were animals he'd found on his land. Not because there were no humans in his country--there were many. They did not like America and did their best to ignore him.

So when America wandered farther than usual one day, and saw a girl older than him who somewhat resembled his people, but--unlike them--spoke to him, America lingered. He had no clue what she was talking about, but the sound of her voice was comforting, so he visited her many times, until England came and America started obeying him.

<><><><><><>Night fell in DC ( ... )

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[Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 2b/3 - fixed version anonymous January 31 2010, 03:59:57 UTC
"Then you want what Spain wants? You want them all gone?"

"I do not want them gone, but there's no changing what's done. I want you, standing on your own, without your father, but now is not the time. It's too soon."

America did not hear what answer New Spain gave, if she had one. England pulled her close, whispering something, then he kissed her. It was not a casual peck, like a greeting or farewell. This was on the lips and lasting, something America had only seen France do. And he decided then that England's warning about staying away from New Spain because her father was dangerous must have been a lie, and his guardian just didn't want to risk New Spain liking America better.

<><><><><><>America and his boss learned of Germany's attempt on a Friday. Leaving Oklahoma in charge of the twins, America set out to confront Mexico. He tracked her down by Tuesday ( ... )

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[Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 2c/3 - fixed version anonymous January 31 2010, 04:01:55 UTC
Dammit, he was taller than her now! He knew he still looked very young, but no way could he possibly look like a child. Face burning, America said, "I've never kissed anyone. I want to kiss you ( ... )

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Re: [Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 2c/3 - fixed version anonymous February 10 2010, 06:58:15 UTC
*o* Please continue!!! And have my firstborn

(btw, not OP)

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Re: [Part 4] America/Mexico - The Zimmerman Note 2c/3 - fixed version anonymous April 29 2010, 08:34:07 UTC
I am now faced for the first time in my life with the strange sensation that the person on the other side of a story thinks the exact way I do. Therefore I have no choice but to ask, after promising myself I never would: "Anon, are you me?"

And now that I have exhausted today's pool of elaborate prose, I can only say that I am very, very giddy at what I have read of this fill. I await impatiently at the rest of it <333

Even if I sort of don't, because the request says "non-con" and I can't possibly bear that thought --actually, I can. I can bear and accept and head-canon the concept of dearest Al abusing my country, but I can't possible read it. Except I would, because I'm masochistic like that. So I'm hoping that the "non-con" will turn instead into some terrifying, delicious hate-sex with biting and scratching and kitchen tables.

tl;dr? You're awesome. Keep with the good work. And perfectly consensual hate-sex FTW.

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