Re: USUK - Jealousy [1/1]
anonymous
January 19 2010, 10:39:38 UTC
-LET ME GO YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -but again, his resistance was nothing compare to the other’s strength. The slaps just continue, no matter how hard he fought or how bad his curse became. After quite sometime, he was too tired to fight; his pain in his butt soon became unbearable. Crying so hard, his curse change into begging, and before he known it, he was no longer cursing, just begging and pleading between his tear. When he was finally gave up, the American’s hand stopped. Though it took him long to recognize that, he slowly gathered himself together. It was only then that he felt incredible humiliation. He moved away from America, yet his pain stopped him to do so
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Re: USUK - Jealousy [1/1]
anonymous
January 21 2010, 23:56:15 UTC
Mhmm.. spanking is a kink of mine. I'm not completely sure about the charactirazion of Alfred, reminds me more of Ivan, but I loved the spanking-description and the humor <3
(Psst, just advise - next time you post a fill, make spaces between the sentences every time you hit enter anyway. It makes it easier to read. Many ppl never reads fill that's just all text, because it's tiring to the eyes. You'll get more readers and reviews that way :3)
Re: USUK - Jealousy [1/1]
anonymous
October 2 2012, 05:06:30 UTC
I don't know if I agree with your formatting, Anon. It brings me back to the dark, dark days of Cry, the Beloved Country and no quotation marks. *shivers*
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the right request here http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/4567.html?thread=7316695#t7316695
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(Psst, just advise - next time you post a fill, make spaces between the sentences every time you hit enter anyway. It makes it easier to read. Many ppl never reads fill that's just all text, because it's tiring to the eyes. You'll get more readers and reviews that way :3)
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But other than that, you did pretty well.
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