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Lessons (Part 1, 1/?) anonymous January 27 2010, 09:24:11 UTC
Prompt: France teaches Canada bedroom arts, and the ways Canada uses them in, ahem, "negotiations" with other countries afterwards. (Part 6)

The bunny went little sideways on me, focusing more on education and its application than smut, whoops. ^^; Anyway, I’ve a bit of a history!kink, so notes will follow. (Yes, you read the title correctly, this is part one of hopefully only two; the other won’t be as massive, but it’ll be a while before it’s finished.)

Warnings for Wikipedia history and internet-assisted French, so corrections are always welcome. :)

Enjoy!

(Ukraine = Katya, Netherlands = Lars van der Meer, Seychelles = Leone.)

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1749

"Matthieu?"

The colony looked up from his breakfast. "Yes, Francis?"

"You know that the political situation in Europe is.. unstable. Aix-la-Chappelle was a loss for us - for you - and I don't know if I can protect you anymore. The last war drained my resources, but I have to protect my people too, and ( ... )

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Lessons (Part 1, 2/?) anonymous January 27 2010, 09:28:23 UTC
August 1814

Alfred shoved his brother against a brick wall. "Goddamn it Matt, what are you doing here ( ... )

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Lessons (Part 1, 3/?) anonymous January 27 2010, 09:34:15 UTC
1985"Your brother being a brat again ( ... )

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Lessons (Part 1, 4/?) anonymous January 27 2010, 09:41:52 UTC
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"I cannot teach you everything about pleasuring a woman, kitten, so I took the liberty of engaging a friend of mine for the night."

"Francis, that's- That's awkward."

A kiss on the tip of his nose. "I told her that I was looking for someone to introduce my darling little brother to the art of making love, and she recommended herself. She seemed quite pleased at the prospect of having both of the Bonnefoys. If you prefer, I can stay?"

"That's.. not necessary." He knows he's blushing, but can't help continuing. "Maybe next time?"

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1977

Katya smiled at him as he knelt between her legs, feathered kisses along her thighs. "And here I thought you'd be a clueless virgin, Matvey."

He smiled against her skin. "Four centuries with only Alfred and Arthur for nation-company would get a bit boring."

"True." She ran a finger along his stray curl, watched his eyes drift closed. "Ivan'll kill us if he finds out."

"Just hold him off long enough to remind him I'm not Al, and we'll be fine."

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"Cooking is important, kitten. I ( ... )

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Lessons (Part 1, 5/6) anonymous January 27 2010, 09:52:23 UTC
1849

"England?"

"Ah, Matthew, just who I wanted to speak to." Arthur smiled. "Congratulations on how well the province has been going, since the Union. Lord Elgin tells me that elections have been a little rough, but we'll pull through, eh?"

He shook his head, smiling. "England, my governor-general sent me with a message."

"What?" He frowned. "Why couldn't he send it himself?"

Canada fought the urge to flinch. Steel, he thought to himself. Canada was only a province, but he had to stand up for his people. "He will be signing the Rebellion Losses Bill." He straightened his shoulders.

England frowned. "But he disagrees with it."

"Yes. However, it is the will of the people and the government, if not the elites, so he is giving his assent."

His head shot up. "Lord Elgin is opposing both the Compact and the Clique?"

"Yes, sir. He is adapting Lord Durham's recommendations, if you remember."

"Of course I remember! But responsible government is still an experiment in Nova Scotia, how in the blazes does he expect this to work in your ( ... )

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Lessons (Part 1, 6/6) anonymous January 27 2010, 10:01:21 UTC


1931

Matthew knocked on the door, waited for the man inside to say "Come in." He stepped into the office, closed the door behind him. "Afternoon, Francis."

"Ah, Matthieu! To what do I owe the pleasure?"

"I'm on my way back from London, and I just wanted to say.. I got it. I'm functionally independent, with my own foreign relations and everything. I thought you'd like to-" He trailed off as a brilliant smile appeared on Francis' face, as the older nation walked away from the window and folded him into his arms.

"Congratulations, Matthieu."

"Thanks. I, uh..." He swallowed. Now or never, boyo. He pulled back just far enough to see Francis' face, then leaned in for a kiss.

And the bastard moved his head to the side, kissing Matthew's cheeks instead. "Papa's so, so proud of you ( ... )

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Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous January 27 2010, 10:34:29 UTC
Historical Notes:Beginning: The 1749 Treaty of Aix-la-Chapelle marked the end of the War of Austrian Succession, which gave France back the parts of New France England had seized; England retained Nova Scotia, which it had held since 1713, hence Canada being split between the two. “Ahorn” is German for “maple”; they’re technically speaking French, so using French or English for “maple” would have been awkward ( ... )

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Urgh typos anonymous January 27 2010, 14:03:46 UTC
Aix-la-Chapelle was 1748, not 1749. >>;

If you catch any others, please let me know!

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous January 27 2010, 14:53:32 UTC
Um. Er. Anon is absolutely speechless and in awe of your brilliant characterisation for everyone. And I do mean everyone. Not just Matthew, but Francis actually teaching Matt exactly how to be a real Nation, outside of all the paperwork and legal shit. Because, face it, all of that has to come from somewhere.

I love the mask idea too, and how Matthew actually picks up on the fact that even though Francis is the one who is educating on the "mask", and how he needs an outlet for himself, his own mask actually grew onto him. Very astute, very... Like him, somehow?

I think I talk too much. But I absolutely love this fill; It has amazing plot, and even more amazing writing. fantastic job.

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous January 27 2010, 22:24:47 UTC
BRB stalking this fill forever. I'm not one for verbosity, so I'll just say this: holy moly--this is brilliant.

Keep it up!!

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous January 27 2010, 22:31:18 UTC
The sheer amount of PLOT in this is utterly staggerring and possibly the most amazing thing I have ever read about our dear Canada... Oh DEAR, all the HISTORY and the DRAMA and... you... have made me very happy indeed.

I am especially excited that, through it all, there are distinctly romantic undertones between France and Canada. I happen to love that couple immensely, and it is nice that Canada still cares about France through it all.

Really, thank you for this. I look forward to more.

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous January 27 2010, 23:46:55 UTC
oh god, oh god, oh god (hyperventilates). This fill is just made of win! I love the plot. I love the little flashes of lessons and their applications.

I love the fact that France is teaching Canada to be an actual nation. I love how that Canada is more 'prepared' than Gaudeloupe. I love the romantic undertones in their relationship. oh...and I feel so sad for Canada's little voice ("it wasn't supposed to be this way"). And all the history!!!! *wails around in joy*

:D This fill is epic. Thanks for writing it! :D :D :D :D :D

I'm going to stalk you now.

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous January 28 2010, 03:23:35 UTC
What everyone above said, anon! This is an immensely fulfilling fic, the depth of the characterization and history is wonderful. Can't wait to see how the next part develops.

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ABSOLUTELY SPEECHLESS anonymous January 28 2010, 23:02:30 UTC
This anon is absolutely speechless with wonder. This piece was perfect, from the strong historical facts behind it to the intimate parts of learning. Absolutely wonderful fic, I'd love to know who you are so I could stalk your journal. There's something really bittersweet here, about Matt's feelings for Francis, and how subtly Francis taught him everything but how to resist the same learnings from him.

I found the parts with his brother the hottest, which baffles this anon who is very much not an Americest shipper. I lol'd at Ukraine's part because of RussiaXD
My favourite line was
Arthur's combination of fear and desirability, on the other hand, works wonderfully with the rest of the worldand generally, this section was the most intriguing; I find Francis' take on what face the nations' present to others fascinating, Russia's fail and this, Arthur's brilliance. God, that line is also really hot because it's so true, Arthur presents himself as a mix between fearsome and alluring; I wonder if Francis thinks it also works on him, or ( ... )

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous February 14 2010, 04:35:52 UTC
kldfjhgjkdvhjdfgh Sorry I'm... totally speechless too. This fill is amazing. So much. So much feeling. So bittersweet. So right. God, the last scene depressed me... But I absolutely loved France teaching Canada, and all of those things were so... well, usefull. You can tell he speaks from experience... Like Canada figured, more than he wants to show.

Please, please, waiting with so much excitement for the next part! *g*

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Re: Lessons (Part 1, Notes) anonymous March 30 2010, 04:23:28 UTC
I mean... this is amazing, and the research you did is astounding. Your writing is excellent, your situations superb.
But I feel the need to mention that training and using sex for falsity and politics leaves a bad taste in my mouth and makes my stomach turn. Just my personal squick (probably one of the only ones I have, too...). whatevs. Like I said, a great story.

(reCAPTCHA 'pre-1967 shimmy'. Sounds like a dance move, no?)

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