Ask Me Why - Part 2/?
anonymous
February 3 2010, 03:38:41 UTC
Arthur didn't answer him, just strode across the few feet that separated them before reaching his hand up to grab at Alfred's neck. He tugged the startled American down and crushed their lips together, shoving his tongue into Alfred's mouth only to find a lingering taste of green tea and ice cream that sent his anger soaring to knew heights. After a moment of confusion, Alfred joined the kiss, hands rising to tug at Arthur's waist. The Brit's hands crept down to Alfred's shoulders, then flattened over the fabric covering Alfred's chest before gripping the edges of the haori tightly. His hands tugged Alfred closer to him, but the moment Alfred felt it, his hands came up to grip Arthur's wrists firmly
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Ask Me Why - Part 3/?
anonymous
February 3 2010, 03:40:16 UTC
Arthur's fingers slid under the heavy fabric of the kimono, slid it off Alfred's shoulders and felt the younger man move his hands and lift himself a bit to help the slide of fabric. Arthur felt his own hardening cock meet Alfred's thrust as he lifted his hips, the American obviously under the impression that Arthur would tug the kimono entirely off before going further
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Ask Me Why - Part 4/?
anonymous
February 3 2010, 03:42:21 UTC
The Brit decided to be nice and raised his head as he withdrew his fingers, climbing up Alfred's body so that he could silence the younger man's complaints at the loss of those fingers with his mouth. Arthur got distracted for long moments by the taste of Alfred's tongue and the feel of smooth skin underneath his fingers, his hips moving in small jerks against Alfred's body. He remembered himself when he felt Alfred trying to snake his arms out of the sleeves of the kimono and while he did not try to stop the movement, his mind once more locked on to his original task and he broke the heated kiss. His hands went to undo his pants, freeing his cock with a sigh of relief even as Alfred succeeded in breaking free and reached for the bottle of lube
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Ask Me Why - Part 5/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 03:45:48 UTC
Alfred merely lay there, breathing raggedly as the silence stretched, fingers moving in idle patterns over Arthur's skin as his hips moved in small, circular motions, a plea for Arthur to continue. Arthur ignored it, felt those fingers begin to move upward, and Alfred managed to open his eyes and meet Arthur's gaze as they hit his shoulders
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Re: Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 06:12:33 UTC
seconding above reviewer -that was really really hot. and the way Alfred totally played Arthur was LOL. I think it's very IC of him, that teasing atittudeXD why is the idea of a guy as big as Al in a kimono attractive, I wonder? I just know it is, specially the yummy way you described it *is a sucker for Al's Big Blue Eyes*
And that final twist in which Japan becomes the sweetest guy on the planet? That was cute, anon. Really, really cute ^^
Re: Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
February 3 2010, 14:26:50 UTC
anon, this was 99% some of the most ridiculously hot smut ever, 1% me laughing hysterically when you said "weeping cock" and my brain went straight to uk/us in "Buttsex: The Musical."
OP IS SO HAPPY YES ~~~ That was PERFECT. ♥ Thanks so much writerAnon. *joysquee* I love how Alfred just KNEW. And the ending was so cute... ♥♥♥ My day is totally made now. :D
Re: Ask Me Why - Part 6/6
anonymous
March 6 2010, 00:36:10 UTC
Damn this is a hot hot hot hot hot hot fill O; I don't- Ican'teven-
Not only was this some AMAZING smut, authornon, your characterizations were spot-on and...gyyyuuuuh, they just *made* the fill. Arthur, in particular, was flawless; we got hot, aggressive, tsun-tsun UK and blushing, painfully embarrassed dere-dere UK, and both felt ENTIRELY in-character. There was never a moment where I thought, "Umm, no. Like that'd ever happen. He'd never do that! *wank outrage*" That's a rarity, anon! You handled it beautifully!
I know this is a short comment, but really, I can not praise this fill enough. It was made of yum and also of wibbles~~
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why is the idea of a guy as big as Al in a kimono attractive, I wonder? I just know it is, specially the yummy way you described it
*is a sucker for Al's Big Blue Eyes*
And that final twist in which Japan becomes the sweetest guy on the planet? That was cute, anon. Really, really cute ^^
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Awesome job, anon!
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That was PERFECT. ♥
Thanks so much writerAnon. *joysquee*
I love how Alfred just KNEW. And the ending was so cute... ♥♥♥
My day is totally made now. :D
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I loved the humor and teasing throughout...ADORED it.
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That was hot :D
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*Fans self*
Damn when Arthur started growling I melted and fell out of my computer chair.
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Not only was this some AMAZING smut, authornon, your characterizations were spot-on and...gyyyuuuuh, they just *made* the fill. Arthur, in particular, was flawless; we got hot, aggressive, tsun-tsun UK and blushing, painfully embarrassed dere-dere UK, and both felt ENTIRELY in-character. There was never a moment where I thought, "Umm, no. Like that'd ever happen. He'd never do that! *wank outrage*" That's a rarity, anon! You handled it beautifully!
I know this is a short comment, but really, I can not praise this fill enough. It was made of yum and also of wibbles~~
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