Re: Too Old [Part 1c/?]
anonymous
February 21 2010, 02:56:17 UTC
Alfred smiled around the cock in his mouth and continued to suck quite happily. He knew well by now that it was prudent for him to hold Arthur’s hipbones, stroking them lightly with his thumbs
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Too Old [Part 2/?]
anonymous
February 21 2010, 02:59:41 UTC
Jealousy surged through Arthur’s veins. He should have guessed. He should have known that bloody frog wouldn’t be able to keep his hands off of Alfred. He should have been more vigilant, more protective. His mind raced too quickly to keep up; exactly how many of Alfred’s ideas had come from Francis? How much of this was even his idea? Had Francis violated the boy as he was about to let Arthur do? Of course he had! He was Francis for God’s sake. How many times had it been
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Re: Too Old [Part 2b/?]
anonymous
February 21 2010, 03:00:35 UTC
It struck him suddenly that he was praying over the very same bed in which he had stolen away Alfred’s innocence. He recoiled in horror, staring at the accursed sheets for a long minute, fists clenching and unclenching. The guilt was finally too much, it took over, poured through his veins more quickly than blood
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Too Old [Part 3/?]
anonymous
February 21 2010, 03:02:11 UTC
Arthur didn’t remember falling asleep, only remembered thinking that he would never fall asleep with those cries echoing in his brain, but apparently, he had
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Too Old [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
February 21 2010, 03:03:48 UTC
Arthur didn’t spare a glance at the boy in the street. “Indeed. He’s simply had a nightmare, Mary. Do not be too stern with him if he misbehaves today.”
“Of course not, Master Kirkland.”
Arthur walked over to Alfred and kissed the top of his head, fighting the urge to vomit in the disgust he held for himself.
Alfred made one last half-hearted attempt to cling to Arthur’s shirt, but was easily pried off of it once more.
Mary came and hoisted the boy up. “Say your goodbyes, Alfred,” she encouraged softly, not knowing anything of the implications.
“Goodbye, Alfred,” Arthur said, hardly looking at the two of them before leaving.
Mary held fast as Alfred wailed.
That's all for now, but more is on the way! Writer!anon has definitely not forgotten the SECOND part of the kink >>
God, I saw this request and hoped someone would fill it just for the hilarity of the bonuses, but this is amazing! I can't wait till it gets to present day; especially if you go for the bonuses, lol.
Oh, wow, It's been ages since that request, I'd totally forgotten I'd even made it, lol.
Don't worry about the human names- I only mind when human names are used with historical-type fills, which for some reason throws me right out of the fic. Human names are great here.
Anon, I love you forever! Alfred is so innocent and not innocent at the same time and Arthur is so torn and tormented. *_* I especially love that hint that Alfred initiated everything- very much fits the scenario I had in mind.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next part- this fill is delicious.
Re: Too Old [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
February 22 2010, 02:11:35 UTC
Wow. Just wow.
I love England's emotions--guilt and love especially--and feelings about France and America's naivety yet desiring England.
I am anticipating the next part so much! (I keep imagining the next time England visits to be after Al's growth spurt to create America's idea of being 'too old'.) I am definitely stalking this fic.
Re: Too Old [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
February 22 2010, 21:01:42 UTC
shota is not my thing but...this was just so perfect. GOD ARTHUR IS SUCH... ajdkslajdlska. this is self-torture. just the right amount of guilt that i love. i'm hooked and i can't wait to see older! alfred. &you <33
Re: Too Old [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
February 27 2010, 21:47:37 UTC
Guh, this is too perfect. J-just everything. Arthur's guilt and want and Alfred's inability to understand and perhaps in a sense his sense of love really has been skewed by Arthur...
O-oh man am I waiting until you get to Present day - so excited~
Re: IMPORTANT NOTE FROM WRITER!ANON
anonymous
March 6 2010, 06:57:54 UTC
Oh hey, writer!anon; s-some of us are being patient, anyways. ♥ Good luck with your thesis; that ... is probably as much fun as it sounds, huh? I know how it feels -- to some of us, at least -- so don't let them crush your soul~!
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“Of course not, Master Kirkland.”
Arthur walked over to Alfred and kissed the top of his head, fighting the urge to vomit in the disgust he held for himself.
Alfred made one last half-hearted attempt to cling to Arthur’s shirt, but was easily pried off of it once more.
Mary came and hoisted the boy up. “Say your goodbyes, Alfred,” she encouraged softly, not knowing anything of the implications.
“Goodbye, Alfred,” Arthur said, hardly looking at the two of them before leaving.
Mary held fast as Alfred wailed.
That's all for now, but more is on the way! Writer!anon has definitely not forgotten the SECOND part of the kink >>
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Don't worry about the human names- I only mind when human names are used with historical-type fills, which for some reason throws me right out of the fic. Human names are great here.
Anon, I love you forever! Alfred is so innocent and not innocent at the same time and Arthur is so torn and tormented. *_* I especially love that hint that Alfred initiated everything- very much fits the scenario I had in mind.
I'm eagerly awaiting the next part- this fill is delicious.
*loves*
Recapcha: ...diddling.
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I love England's emotions--guilt and love especially--and feelings about France and America's naivety yet desiring England.
I am anticipating the next part so much! (I keep imagining the next time England visits to be after Al's growth spurt to create America's idea of being 'too old'.) I am definitely stalking this fic.
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&you <33
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O-oh man am I waiting until you get to Present day - so excited~
F5 Bonanza~!
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Trufax.
Good luck with your thesis!
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