Much I do for my Gay-friend (1b/5)
anonymous
March 1 2010, 11:39:56 UTC
Hungary nodded, recalling the last conference, which really was just a nice name for locking them in one room to prevent them from running amok around while their bosses handled important things. Last time Poland finally succeeded in sneaking into the official meeting in a miniskirt, and the reactions were amazing. Jaws dropped, eyebrows roused, France and Prussia nosebleed, others stared, the almost whole world made afford at flirt, pick up, or molest Poland. Even Russia noted he might want to see Poland's troubled face once more, which meant something indeed
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Re: Much I do for my Gay-friend (1c/5)
anonymous
March 1 2010, 21:02:59 UTC
Oh dear. Poor Liet's going to be so confused! But it's his own fault for being so oblivious, you know?
I bet Lithuania has even lower self-esteem than Poland does, and loves him but doesn't want to get his hopes up ^__^ That's why he hasn't responded to any of Poland's attempts.
I hope their plan works! It sounds rather complicated, but I'm sure the girls are skilled enough. I love how Belarus is doing this to make Russia jealous XD And her knife-holster is scary! I hope she doesn't make Liet cry...
Well, at least you apologized for the spelling/grammar errors. But you really should look for a beta. Some quick suggestions: It's "effort", not "afford". It's "break", not "brake". And most other problems seemed to be typos, so I'm not repeating them here. Oh, and I don't really know what you meant by "oppression". I thought you might have meant "operation", but I wasn't sure.
Much I do for my Gay-friend (2a/5)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 08:40:05 UTC
Here! Some more! Still couldn't find a beta… so- I apologize once again! I checked it twice… but I'm sure I still have many mistakes. Hopefully they aren’t too bad. And for nice commenter that corrected me- thank you a lot!
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The world meeting was going on as usual- meaning a lot of flying objects, arguments, molestation attempts, and so on. Denmark got busy bothering and poking Norway, the Italys complained they are hungry, Japan took pictures of England and America arguing, Greece fell asleep, China was showing off his old man's Kung-fu style on Russia that tried to grab his vital regions, and Germany yelled loudly and called for order, failing miserably and ending up on the floor when he tried to seat back without noticing Prussia pulled his chair. No surprises so far, and no one seemed to notice the notes and giggling the girls shared, nor Poland's stressed and pretty unseal expression. Hungary looked at her watch. Two minutes to the break… one and a half
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Much I do for my Gay-friend (2b/5)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 08:42:29 UTC
When they finally got outside, Hungary let go of Poland's waist, and the blond grabbed it himself and rubbed it, rolling his eyes. "It was, like, totally unnecessary. I was fine
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Re: Much I do for my Gay-friend (2c/5)
anonymous
March 8 2010, 08:52:46 UTC
Nodding to each other, the girls went each to her way. Ukraine took a deep breath- not too deep, mind you- she wanted her shirt in one piece- and walked to her brother. This is time to have a little discussion with him about something so personal that even Belarus strange behavior and the chance to abuse Lithuania will be dismissed because…
"Little brother… I need your help at picking up some new bras…"
Re: Much I do for my Gay-friend (2c/5)
anonymous
March 9 2010, 00:02:32 UTC
Yes it's been updated! *Does a little happy-dance*
Lithuania is so clueless, I don't even know what to think. How could he not be suspicious of Belarus's lack of creeperness? I'd be disturbed, that's for sure. And Poland's so jealous it's cute. Hungary really is like a big sister to him, isn't she?
Spell-check!anon wants to fix some more words. You used "seat" a lot when you meant "sit". "Italys" would be "Italies". "Quite" should be "quiet". "Shell" is "shall". "Dose" is "does". "Lichtenstein" is "Liechtenstein". "Board" is "bored". And one grammar fix: "on Russia that tried to grab his vital regions" should use "who" instead of "that".
So most of those are probably typos, but I just wanted to make sure. It's sometimes helpful to read your writing aloud after you're done so you catch some mistakes yourself. You can be your own beta! It's what I always do.
I love how Hungary calls Poland "Polly". It suits him, don't you think?
Update soon! Can't wait to see Liet finally notice just how much Poland loves him.
(The eight canon girls help Poland to get Lithuania to notice him)
Forgive me for any grammer mistakes or typos. couldn't get a beta for my life.____________________ ( ... )
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I bet Lithuania has even lower self-esteem than Poland does, and loves him but doesn't want to get his hopes up ^__^ That's why he hasn't responded to any of Poland's attempts.
I hope their plan works! It sounds rather complicated, but I'm sure the girls are skilled enough. I love how Belarus is doing this to make Russia jealous XD And her knife-holster is scary! I hope she doesn't make Liet cry...
Well, at least you apologized for the spelling/grammar errors. But you really should look for a beta. Some quick suggestions: It's "effort", not "afford". It's "break", not "brake". And most other problems seemed to be typos, so I'm not repeating them here. Oh, and I don't really know what you meant by "oppression". I thought you might have meant "operation", but I wasn't sure.
Can't wait for the next update!!!
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Nodding to each other, the girls went each to her way. Ukraine took a deep breath- not too deep, mind you- she wanted her shirt in one piece- and walked to her brother. This is time to have a little discussion with him about something so personal that even Belarus strange behavior and the chance to abuse Lithuania will be dismissed because…
"Little brother… I need your help at picking up some new bras…"
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Lithuania is so clueless, I don't even know what to think. How could he not be suspicious of Belarus's lack of creeperness? I'd be disturbed, that's for sure. And Poland's so jealous it's cute. Hungary really is like a big sister to him, isn't she?
Spell-check!anon wants to fix some more words. You used "seat" a lot when you meant "sit". "Italys" would be "Italies". "Quite" should be "quiet". "Shell" is "shall". "Dose" is "does". "Lichtenstein" is "Liechtenstein". "Board" is "bored". And one grammar fix: "on Russia that tried to grab his vital regions" should use "who" instead of "that".
So most of those are probably typos, but I just wanted to make sure. It's sometimes helpful to read your writing aloud after you're done so you catch some mistakes yourself. You can be your own beta! It's what I always do.
I love how Hungary calls Poland "Polly". It suits him, don't you think?
Update soon! Can't wait to see Liet finally notice just how much Poland loves him.
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Oh, Lithuania, you hopeless, hopeless dumb brute. Why do I love you so? XD
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