Goodbye, Brother [4/?]
anonymous
April 14 2010, 05:42:56 UTC
A light thump on America’s head makes the boy pout at his father figure. “You cheeky little brat,” England mutters, no malice in his words, only that warm, loving affection America greedily devours like a hungry babe. “What happened to the sweet boy I remember? You’ve turned into a scoundrel, America,” he teases gently
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Goodbye, Brother [5/?]
anonymous
April 14 2010, 05:49:53 UTC
He bites his lower lip anxiously when England doesn’t say anything, becoming increasingly frustrated with the silence. The tears come back, and once he sees this, England closes his eyes and shakes his head, a secret smile on his face. “America, don’t be spoiled. I love all my children,” he says gently, with the air of a wise father figure and America feels that old, funny little ache return
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Re: Goodbye, Brother [5/?]
anonymous
April 14 2010, 13:37:59 UTC
The cute, brotherly years were adorable, anon. I love your writing. I know the next parts are going to be fantastic, and I can't wait to read about America's puberty (and perhaps his changing feelings toward England). I am loving this fill!
Re: Goodbye, Brother [5/?]
anonymous
April 14 2010, 14:16:19 UTC
I'm amused how everyone is commenting on the cute when there's so much DARK UNDERCURRENT here. <3 How America doesn't understand about the servants, 'get rid of the competition' . . . yeah. Heee. For completely different reasons. Goo job so far, anon, I look forward to the rest.
Re: Goodbye, Brother [5/?]
anonymous
April 14 2010, 15:27:21 UTC
I'm utterly fascinated at the darker parts of America's posessiveness, even when he's so young; get rid of the competence indeed. Interesting that he seems to keep this goal of 'protecting England' in mind even after the independenceXD. Aw, and the sweetness ♥ Little America has acquired a taste for embarassed blushing England, hehe. And England, you really can't defend yourself against all that cute together, can you? I liked the detail about the salves, by the way ;)
Re: Goodbye, Brother [5/?]
anonymous
April 15 2010, 23:13:07 UTC
Random!Author!anon is glad OP is finding this to her tastes :D
FFFF that's exactly why, despite liking USxUK like crazy, I shy away from writing it xD In my head, I can't help but think of them as being *real* brothers which in turn equals incest, orz orz. Anywho, the "brotherly years" had to be written for the sake of my soul, as I could not bring myself to write straight out smut without giving this fill some semblance of plot lolol.
Expect the start of puberty chapters tonight, as I am still in university so, cannot write right now :DDD
Re: Goodbye, Brother [5/?]
anonymous
April 16 2010, 01:36:50 UTC
Oh dear, I'm not the original OP D: ... but oh how much I wish I was!! But... this doesn't make me love it any less xD Seriously though... you just continue with it and I know you'll make it good. And.. don't worry they're not 'real' brothers so.. it's not incest, everything is fine and well for our conscience XD Also... the plot is necessary! It just wouldn't be the same without it...and dear lord, you're gonna have some big dentist bills to pay xD ....Was going to go to sleep soon *it's 2:35 already* but.... since puberty chapters start tonight I may stay a little longer xDD
Goodbye, Brother [7/?]
anonymous
April 18 2010, 09:34:58 UTC
But not because he dislikes the Northern nation, or because he finds him appalling, and not even because Canada is about two inches or so taller than him
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Goodbye, Brother [9/?]
anonymous
April 18 2010, 09:43:05 UTC
As if America would let Canada take England’s love away from him. Ha! France should just come and take his province back with him, otherwise America would do something really mean to the Northern nation. Besides, England was bound to get bored of Canada soon, he was France’s territory, and there was nothing England hated more than the proclaimed nation of love. America didn’t like him either; he was the one who gave England all those injuries. Every time France came to visit him (on the off chance that America changed his mind on who he wanted as a big brother), America made sure to slam the door on his face
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Goodbye, Brother [10/?]
anonymous
April 18 2010, 09:48:01 UTC
Holding his pillow to his chest, America shuffles his feet nervously. “England, can I sleep together with you?” he asks shyly, not looking at his colonizer in the eye
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Can't wait for the next update!
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Ah, can't wait for the next update.
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Aw, and the sweetness ♥ Little America has acquired a taste for embarassed blushing England, hehe. And England, you really can't defend yourself against all that cute together, can you?
I liked the detail about the salves, by the way ;)
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FFFF that's exactly why, despite liking USxUK like crazy, I shy away from writing it xD In my head, I can't help but think of them as being *real* brothers which in turn equals incest, orz orz. Anywho, the "brotherly years" had to be written for the sake of my soul, as I could not bring myself to write straight out smut without giving this fill some semblance of plot lolol.
Expect the start of puberty chapters tonight, as I am still in university so, cannot write right now :DDD
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But... this doesn't make me love it any less xD Seriously though... you just continue with it and I know you'll make it good. And.. don't worry they're not 'real' brothers so.. it's not incest, everything is fine and well for our conscience XD Also... the plot is necessary! It just wouldn't be the same without it...and dear lord, you're gonna have some big dentist bills to pay xD
....Was going to go to sleep soon *it's 2:35 already* but.... since puberty chapters start tonight I may stay a little longer xDD
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