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A Place You Can't Scratch [1/?] anonymous April 18 2010, 19:46:01 UTC
Original Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13125.html?thread=33560901#t33560901

Which called for Russia/Lithuania non-con in Russia's POV with a valid psychological reason for the rape.

This is probably nothing like what OP wanted, but I tried. .__. Just keep in mind that What Russia thinks is happening =/= What's actually happening. It all started with an itch ( ... )

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A Place You Can't Scratch [2/?] anonymous April 18 2010, 19:47:39 UTC
“Anyone could know that,” Russia pressed the gun up further.

“N-no!--no one but you and my brothers know. I-I’ll show them to you,” and with that, Lithuania quickly fumbled to unbutton his shirt, and turned around to show the other.

The scars were there; they were still dark slashes against his otherwise unsoiled, milky skin. Russia took the opportunity to run a gloved finger down his back, tracing them. He didn’t think that the imposter would have thought far ahead enough to replicate the scars. This was harder than he thought it would be.

“How did you get the scars?”

Lithuania shivered. “You p-I fell onto a glass table and it broke.”

Russia took notice of how Lithuania said he had fallen instead of Russia pushing him-which admittedly was what had happened. Russia didn’t really remember why he pushed the boy so hard, but they had been arguing and he was drunk ( ... )

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A Place You Can't Scratch [3/?] anonymous April 18 2010, 19:49:28 UTC
Russia took the other’s hand and led him over to the couch, before gently pushing him down to the cushions. The other was so beautiful, Russia thought. He was really lucky to have someone who loved him as much as he loved them-that is, if this wasn’t an imposter ( ... )

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A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 18 2010, 19:51:25 UTC
Russia pulled out and noted the blood on his dick, but he wasn’t particularly bothered by it. It happened often when he and Lithuania made love, so he casually took a handkerchief out of his pocket and wiped it off, before putting his clothing back on ( ... )

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 18 2010, 21:14:02 UTC
You have set off my mothering instinct. *sigh* This whole business is so depressing, what with how Bloody Sunday messed Russia up so bad.

*goes off to cuddle Liet* Poor kid... T^T

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 19 2010, 22:41:47 UTC
I'm sorry. D:

Though, I suppose if it made you sad then I did my job. o:

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 20 2010, 17:27:12 UTC
That you did. That you did. *soul flies away*

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 19 2010, 05:18:08 UTC
Oh, anon. You are now officially my hero.

You managed to capture the exact Russia that I have in my head, not the sadistic bastard who enjoys torturing whatever comes his way, but a delirious and sometimes just blank-going person. I was very skeptic as I saw the prompt, since this POV is rarely good written, but you managed and so well!

Oh, and I loved the fact that the scars were not a result of slow tormenting of poor Lithuania, but rather a result of an "accident".

Great job, thanks for writing this!

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 19 2010, 22:44:57 UTC
Aw, thank you. <3 I didn't want to use the 'cliche' he was whipped thing that seemed to have spread itself through the fandom.

I'm glad you liked it. :3

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 20 2010, 14:19:26 UTC
Oh, wow, this was great. I loved how you got inside Russia's head, making his actions make perfect sense, in their own twisted way - that he really does love Liet, he just has no clue that he's hurting him. And Lithuania's responses were spot-on. I just about started crying when Russia noticed the 'tears of joy'.

Excellent fill, I'll be over here trying not to sniffle.

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Re: A Place You Can't Scratch [4/4] anonymous April 20 2010, 23:08:04 UTC
Thanks anon. :D I'm sorry that I almost made you cry, but it can't be helped. >> And if it means that you liked it, then I'm satisfied. :3

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