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And that’d been where Alfred had told him he’d pass.
Kiku sighed, tallied on a small notepad, how many more were Ludwig going to scare away? “It’s alright Mr. Alfred-”
Alfred cuts him off, “So what were you doing earlier?”
Kiku gapes at him, as if he’s asked a rude question and what he’d been doing previously had not been rude at all but rather the epitome of polite. Alfred gives him a flat look
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Elastic people [50/?]
anonymous
January 25 2010, 18:37:19 UTC
Stray silence, minutes. The bell rings. They don’t hear it.
“Not even if it’s what you always wanted to hear?”
Say it say it say it say it-!Alfred lips part, more than he’s wanted, more than- how are people capable of feeling desire to this extent, Arthur always tells him he’ll say what Alfred what he wants to hear but then it’s
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Elastic people [51/?]
anonymous
January 25 2010, 18:39:19 UTC
“It doesn’t matter because it’s not true Arthur!”
But Alfred is losing his grip, Arthur clutching tightly onto him, latching himself, sliding, his arms pained by coming into contact with Alfred at all, more so than Alfred’s hand had been- “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry- forgive me-“
“NO!” Alfred yells, tries to pull Arthur from him, away because- “You said I could! You said I can hate you forever, you said I don’t have to forgive you, so I won’t Arthur- I won’t ever-” little brother, if you’ll just do this for me, if you’ll just put this in your mouth- is tearing, crying, “Get off get off get off! Get away from meBut Arthur won’t let go, yes, he’d said this then too, so instead Alfred tears at his face, covers it, he doesn’t want to see- this hadn’t been what he’d wanted to see
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anonymous
January 25 2010, 21:47:04 UTC
*brushes away tears* Gosh, I didn't expect Alfred to react so violently. But that is a usual reaction if told that the guy you're having sex with is your blood brother, right? ;___; I just thought he was above that TAT
As always, thanks for updating woah sooo fast! I'm reading this update before going to school so I'll probably end up thinking of this all day. There better be updates when I go home, 'kay?
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anonymous
January 25 2010, 21:51:13 UTC
O_O Oh my gosh, you spoil us rotten, anon! Not that I'm against it, quite the opposite really! And I think this fic is nearing its end already? Awww. ): Unless you plan on writing beyond the school year? Why not? Sequel! :3
Oh gosh anon why are you so amazing? This. Just. This. This is just... the best fic of these two that I've ever read. God all that emotion at the end; makes my heart hurt ;;
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anonymous
January 27 2010, 03:20:55 UTC
Anon... this is a person who is very icked out by incest in ways you cant imagine. But this... OMG this fic... This is so amazing!!! It's so darn painful and beautifully written and ohhhh.... oh Arthur. I just want to hug him! And Alfred, that poor confused boy. And the other characters are wonderful and fit nicely into this plot. Their mother is a fantastic villain. You just hate her as much as Arthur does. i wonder how Alfred will react when he sees her about this. Oh God, how will she react to Alfred knowing? This is all so intense and bound to end in a potentially tragic way that I can't stop re-reading this story!
One thing I noticed is that Mattie isn't in the story, which led me to a really disturbing conclusion. Dare I ask... i-is their mom pregnant with Matthew? If so... oh God, my heart cannot be more broken than it is now.
Oh... And for the record, bottom!Alfred is my kink... It's so hot and not many people write it, but this entire fic is just full of it and I love it
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anonymous
January 27 2010, 05:49:54 UTC
I usually stand away from incest like a 100mile radius thing but your fic changed every thing. The way you write, how the characters express themselves - it's so gripping!
It looks tastefully done, omg. I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting anxiously what's going to happen next. I hope Arthur doesn't end up being suicidal orz.
Elastic people [52/?]
anonymous
January 28 2010, 00:54:42 UTC
Alfred thinks big brother is upset at him. Alfred knows occasionally the bigger boys pick on him because they like to make Arthur mad, and since hurting Arthur doesn’t get to him at all they turn to Alfred
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Elastic people [53/?]
anonymous
January 28 2010, 00:57:17 UTC
He’s envious.
This person, that Arthur loves so much, this little brother that he has endeared to him so much. This person Alfred does not remember being. This person that up until now Arthur has been looking at, loved deeply deeply, to lie to hurt to cut, the present Alfred to protect.
But isn’t that a cowardly argument?
To disregard yourself because some memories are blurred, indistinct, youth and time are not the best of allies but are not the best of enemies either. Alfred cannot truly give into it either, another rationalization that brings nothing but agony, sorrow, imprisonment.
Wasn’t it cowardly to begin with?
I’ll hurt you because I love you so much and we must not be- I’ll hurt you because I love you so much and you’ve hurt me.
Is this what you want Arthur?
Big brother.
Alfred does not know if it is a lie, if it a truth. The way Arthur would look at him hoping, the way Arthur would touch him wanting, the way Arthur had smiled back whenever Alfred would do just about whatever he wanted. Do you want to date?Before
( ... )
previous parts 1-41: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11813.html?thread=28546853#t28546853
BECAUSE I POST TOO MUCH. new thread ok, ok. i'm sorry!
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And that’d been where Alfred had told him he’d pass.
Kiku sighed, tallied on a small notepad, how many more were Ludwig going to scare away? “It’s alright Mr. Alfred-”
Alfred cuts him off, “So what were you doing earlier?”
Kiku gapes at him, as if he’s asked a rude question and what he’d been doing previously had not been rude at all but rather the epitome of polite. Alfred gives him a flat look ( ... )
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“Not even if it’s what you always wanted to hear?”
Say it say it say it say it-!Alfred lips part, more than he’s wanted, more than- how are people capable of feeling desire to this extent, Arthur always tells him he’ll say what Alfred what he wants to hear but then it’s ( ... )
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But Alfred is losing his grip, Arthur clutching tightly onto him, latching himself, sliding, his arms pained by coming into contact with Alfred at all, more so than Alfred’s hand had been- “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry- forgive me-“
“NO!” Alfred yells, tries to pull Arthur from him, away because- “You said I could! You said I can hate you forever, you said I don’t have to forgive you, so I won’t Arthur- I won’t ever-” little brother, if you’ll just do this for me, if you’ll just put this in your mouth- is tearing, crying, “Get off get off get off! Get away from meBut Arthur won’t let go, yes, he’d said this then too, so instead Alfred tears at his face, covers it, he doesn’t want to see- this hadn’t been what he’d wanted to see ( ... )
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I really enjoyed your writing and your fast updates, a really big thanks you to you.
*go back to dabbing her tears*
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As always, thanks for updating woah sooo fast! I'm reading this update before going to school so I'll probably end up thinking of this all day. There better be updates when I go home, 'kay?
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"Say die and I will die. You don’t believe me? Then try, try, say die and watch me die. -- Die then, die!"
Oh, anon. Please tell me my mind's not pulling pranks on me; tell me it's what I think it is because if it is you just won my heart.
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AMERICAN REVOLUTION!
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You're really great, authoranon! Showering us with frequent updates <333333
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One thing I noticed is that Mattie isn't in the story, which led me to a really disturbing conclusion. Dare I ask... i-is their mom pregnant with Matthew? If so... oh God, my heart cannot be more broken than it is now.
Oh... And for the record, bottom!Alfred is my kink... It's so hot and not many people write it, but this entire fic is just full of it and I love it ( ... )
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It looks tastefully done, omg. I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting anxiously what's going to happen next. I hope Arthur doesn't end up being suicidal orz.
Keep going anon!
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This person, that Arthur loves so much, this little brother that he has endeared to him so much. This person Alfred does not remember being. This person that up until now Arthur has been looking at, loved deeply deeply, to lie to hurt to cut, the present Alfred to protect.
But isn’t that a cowardly argument?
To disregard yourself because some memories are blurred, indistinct, youth and time are not the best of allies but are not the best of enemies either. Alfred cannot truly give into it either, another rationalization that brings nothing but agony, sorrow, imprisonment.
Wasn’t it cowardly to begin with?
I’ll hurt you because I love you so much and we must not be- I’ll hurt you because I love you so much and you’ve hurt me.
Is this what you want Arthur?
Big brother.
Alfred does not know if it is a lie, if it a truth. The way Arthur would look at him hoping, the way Arthur would touch him wanting, the way Arthur had smiled back whenever Alfred would do just about whatever he wanted. Do you want to date?Before ( ... )
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