"So I've seen a lot of fics where America is a virgin (which I love by the way), but I'd like to see something slightly different.
Somehow some of the nations get on the topic of who's slept with Alfred, and find out that none of them have. The twist, he's never slept with any of them, because he's always been with Matt.
The brothers have always known that they'd never want anyone except each other each other. And I mean always.
I want to see sweet, committed, time tested love! Smut is not necessary (but always appreciated)."It started, not in at a summit, but during a meeting with the EU. It also did not start with Francis
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Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [3a/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 14:26:40 UTC
This is where anon kills the cute. Ye be warned. I swear, the fluff is back by 1812, as strange as that sounds.Alfred may not be an old nation or country, but his lands, and therefore than part of him, are old. He only remembers it vaguely, mostly the feeling comes to him in dreams which flee in the face of morning. He can almost remember the feeling of being intertwined with his neighbours, some of whom are dead and gone, others of whom are just gone
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Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [3b/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 14:30:00 UTC
Alfred, perhaps out of kindness or perhaps just because his Alfred, doesn't give him a chance to respond, “because, you tyrant,” is Alfred's frosty reply, “why would he want to stay with you, you don't even like him.” Matthew winces a bit at that, and Arthur looks so far beyond livid that the Canadian can't help but worry someone is going to die tonight
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Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [3c/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 14:35:31 UTC
Matthew, more out of obligation than any real conviction tries to protest, which seems to fuel Alfred on, “honestly, though. I'm the only person who's ever going to fight for you. Arthur only took you from France because he wanted to upset Francis, but it didn't work.” This is where Matthew struggles, because he doesn't want to hear all those nasty little thoughts which come to him at night, or when he's alone given voice by the person he thought he could trust most in this world
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anonymous
March 29 2010, 16:23:19 UTC
The intensity of this section is perfect. Alfred's possessiveness, and the ease with which he emotionally wounds Matthew, is honestly kind of breath-taking (and scary).
Love what you have so far, can't wait for the next part.
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anonymous
March 30 2010, 02:33:54 UTC
USA!anon here thinks that this type of psychotic, possessive behavior towards Canada is perfect regarding the revolutionary war. "We want you to rebel with us, so we're just going to take over. Be in Quebec around noon. Please serve our favorite cake! And none of that tea crap!!! <3 Benny Arnold & the Boys"
In short, I love what you've done here!
And don't ever get me started on 1812. We're still in denial that our nice, sweet Canadian neighbors could've ever burnt down our capital. They're just too darn likable! It was all the work of the British Empire's forces. Those bastards! *shakes fist*
Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [4a/?]
anonymous
March 30 2010, 01:13:05 UTC
Arthur is running through the burning streets, desperately peering into any blond face he passes, hoping to find Matthew, he doesn't, and the blond man swears violently as he encounters a group of American soldiers. Luckily, they fail to notice him, and he continues on, trying to remember where Matthew's patrol had been
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Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [4b/?]
anonymous
March 30 2010, 01:18:22 UTC
This is why, with reserves of strength he didn't even know he had, Matthew pushes away, landing on his side. He quickly scrambles back until his back hits a wall, and Matthew sighs, glad for the support. Alfred, who is just so childish, looks so apologetic and hurt it almost makes Matthew cry, but he can't cry, not for Alfred or Arthur or Francis, so he laughs
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Re: Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [4b/?]
anonymous
March 30 2010, 03:02:07 UTC
Yay!!! You updated so quickly, yay!, yay!, yay!!!! (*notice the fangirling*)
The interpretation of York--I LOVE IT!!!-, how obsessive and crazy Alfred is, how Matthew still forgives him, ahhh, and Arthur's protectiveness (LEAVE OR YOU GET GUTTED!!!) = <3
Oh, I wonder how Alfred will react when Washington is burning (and who's going to burn it? Matt? Arthur? oh, I'm so excited)
And, I agree with authoranon, time-tested is good and makes the end so much sweeter!!! Plus, I think you shouldn't worry too much about getting to the fluff, just get there when you get there.
:D :D :D I'm going to go study for that test tomorrow, now but, man, reading this fic was worth the long cramming time ahead. .
Re: Love is a Thing Only to Become and Eternally Be [4b/?]
anonymous
March 31 2010, 11:37:01 UTC
The testing in this part just makes that happiness they reach that much sweeter. To use a quote from my favorite web page of love quotes: The hardest-learned lesson: that people have only their kind of love to give, not our kind. ~Mignon McLaughlin, The Neurotic's Notebook, 1960
Though, considering how obsessive Alfred is at this point, I can see some worries popping up for Arthur when their relationship comes out that might need to be soothed.
"So I've seen a lot of fics where America is a virgin (which I love by the way), but I'd like to see something slightly different.
Somehow some of the nations get on the topic of who's slept with Alfred, and find out that none of them have. The twist, he's never slept with any of them, because he's always been with Matt.
The brothers have always known that they'd never want anyone except each other each other. And I mean always.
I want to see sweet, committed, time tested love! Smut is not necessary (but always appreciated)."It started, not in at a summit, but during a meeting with the EU. It also did not start with Francis ( ... )
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Love what you have so far, can't wait for the next part.
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And you still keep everyone in such good character! (I D'awwed at their first meeting.)
Loved this and can't wait to see where it goes from here!
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"We want you to rebel with us, so we're just going to take over. Be in Quebec around noon. Please serve our favorite cake! And none of that tea crap!!! <3 Benny Arnold & the Boys"
In short, I love what you've done here!
And don't ever get me started on 1812. We're still in denial that our nice, sweet Canadian neighbors could've ever burnt down our capital. They're just too darn likable! It was all the work of the British Empire's forces. Those bastards! *shakes fist*
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*looks forward to future funny/fluff/porn*
Captcha: Strong policy ... very accurate.
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The interpretation of York--I LOVE IT!!!-, how obsessive and crazy Alfred is, how Matthew still forgives him, ahhh, and Arthur's protectiveness (LEAVE OR YOU GET GUTTED!!!) = <3
Oh, I wonder how Alfred will react when Washington is burning (and who's going to burn it? Matt? Arthur? oh, I'm so excited)
And, I agree with authoranon, time-tested is good and makes the end so much sweeter!!! Plus, I think you shouldn't worry too much about getting to the fluff, just get there when you get there.
:D :D :D I'm going to go study for that test tomorrow, now but, man, reading this fic was worth the long cramming time ahead. .
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Though, considering how obsessive Alfred is at this point, I can see some worries popping up for Arthur when their relationship comes out that might need to be soothed.
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