Re: The Companion [3.6/??]
anonymous
April 14 2010, 23:43:38 UTC
First and foremost, let me tell you that you have a talent for writing suspense. Even though it was already known that America wasn't going to escape, I was on the edge of my seat thinking, "Is he going to be able to make the call.... OH SNAP, RUSSIA!"
Re: The Companion [3.6/??]
anonymous
April 15 2010, 02:19:49 UTC
Holy buckets, America. I'm scared for the poor kid, completely at the mercy of a very unstable yet complex Russia.
Russia can make the trombone sexy. Somehow.
It's much more difficult to make us believe in a Russia who plays the trombone instead of a Russia who spends long, lonely hours with a cello, but it fits my headcanon as well as America and his ukulele or England playing the spoons.
The Companion [4.1/??]
anonymous
April 21 2010, 18:29:46 UTC
America couldn't remember waking up, only that he was suddenly in an otherworldly amount of pain, and that he wasn't in his own bedroom. There was no in between for sleep and wakefulness, only hurting and oblivion. He shut his eyes tightly and rolled onto his side, trying to relieve the agony that was crowding his thoughts. The change was negligible at best.
The soft clinking noise of the door unlocking drew his attention, if only momentarily, away from his brooding. He sat up as best he could, smoothing down the sheets while plastering on a mocking smile. It would've been nice to have another paperweight to chuck.
The door slid open to reveal Russia, not that America had been expecting anyone else. A gleaming pipe was tucked beneath his arm, like a morning newspaper. A silent I dare you, urging America to try rebelling, a wordless threat that such actions would not be tolerated again
( ... )
Re: The Companion [4.3/??]
anonymous
April 21 2010, 18:32:13 UTC
"Oh, I get it," America muttered back, tucking a lock of hair behind his ears and letting his gaze fall to the floor. "But what I was asking was if it looked bad or not
( ... )
The Companion [4.4/??]
anonymous
April 21 2010, 18:33:15 UTC
America shuddered, his heart fluttering. He looked around the room, doing anything he could to avoid looking at Russia. He took in the boxes again, thought about the little baubles and bits they held. Those things were for him. Small toys meant for him amuse himself with in his cage, like the mirrors and cuttlebones birds were so prone to play with
( ... )
The Companion [4.5/??]
anonymous
April 21 2010, 18:34:22 UTC
"Hey, I got a great idea," America piped up.
"Tell me more," Russia prompted.
"C'mon now, hear me out just for a few─ Oh, wait." America found his tongue momentarily tied, stumbling over confused words. "Er, well I was thinking, you say a lot of creepy things."
"And you say many blunt things." Russia fell back on the mattress, arms spread out on the sheets, legs still hooked over the edge of the bed.
"But that's me, we're talking about you." America's smile bloomed into a full on movie star grin. "I'm going to help you not say such creepy things, it'll be fun
( ... )
The Companion [4.6/??]
anonymous
April 21 2010, 18:36:09 UTC
"You're hurting me," America lied, starting to rethink his plan to become buddy-buddy with Russia.
If America and Russia were to become friends, it would be a permanent relationship. Once you made a friend, they would always be your friend. Even on the battlefield, with guns leveled at each other's chest, you couldn't simply erase what had been. Memories, thoughts, feelings and experiences would always live on
( ... )
Re: The Companion [4.7/??]
anonymous
April 21 2010, 23:29:58 UTC
Didn't find this fill in time to give my input, but the one I wanted won anyway. XD Cello~~
The way you write Russia is very close to my headcanon!Russia. There fore, I love him, even if he does scare the hell outta me on occasion.
It's kinda funny that you update on Wednesday. I have a friend who I beta for who does the same thing. XD Obviously, you are not her, but it's still funny.
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On that note: Russia. Playing Tchaikovsky. On the Cello. <- headcanon Specifically, Nocturne (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IhCrtoFuylY&feature=related) while a record plays the orchestra part in the background... Plz?
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Russia can make the trombone sexy. Somehow.
It's much more difficult to make us believe in a Russia who plays the trombone instead of a Russia who spends long, lonely hours with a cello, but it fits my headcanon as well as America and his ukulele or England playing the spoons.
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a combination "mentally unstable person + cello" reminds me about this guy - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zh1yXC5AZHE&feature=related (from 00:19) XD
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The soft clinking noise of the door unlocking drew his attention, if only momentarily, away from his brooding. He sat up as best he could, smoothing down the sheets while plastering on a mocking smile. It would've been nice to have another paperweight to chuck.
The door slid open to reveal Russia, not that America had been expecting anyone else. A gleaming pipe was tucked beneath his arm, like a morning newspaper. A silent I dare you, urging America to try rebelling, a wordless threat that such actions would not be tolerated again ( ... )
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"You've thrown dirt in my eyes before, both metaphorically and physically, but I have never said you are dirt in my eyes ( ... )
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"Tell me more," Russia prompted.
"C'mon now, hear me out just for a few─ Oh, wait." America found his tongue momentarily tied, stumbling over confused words. "Er, well I was thinking, you say a lot of creepy things."
"And you say many blunt things." Russia fell back on the mattress, arms spread out on the sheets, legs still hooked over the edge of the bed.
"But that's me, we're talking about you." America's smile bloomed into a full on movie star grin. "I'm going to help you not say such creepy things, it'll be fun ( ... )
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If America and Russia were to become friends, it would be a permanent relationship. Once you made a friend, they would always be your friend. Even on the battlefield, with guns leveled at each other's chest, you couldn't simply erase what had been. Memories, thoughts, feelings and experiences would always live on ( ... )
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The way you write Russia is very close to my headcanon!Russia. There fore, I love him, even if he does scare the hell outta me on occasion.
It's kinda funny that you update on Wednesday. I have a friend who I beta for who does the same thing. XD Obviously, you are not her, but it's still funny.
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I love the story so far~
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Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=39508121#t39508121
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