France/America (Hold Still 2/?)
anonymous
August 27 2010, 03:18:30 UTC
He feels France’s thumb brush over the head of his cock, teasing. America wants more, he’s wanted more since France tied him to the bed and brushed his hair back with a light smile. He tries to take what he wants by thrusting up sharply. France - and he should’ve guessed, really - pulls his hand away equally as sharply. America groans
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Re: France/America (Hold Still 2/?)
anonymous
August 27 2010, 05:05:48 UTC
I read this hotness and immediately thought: "Well, it's definitely not hard-core kinky, and not quite soft-core kinky, which leaves ... 'vanilla kinky'?" And then I cried a little inside at how much of a pervert I am. :'D
That's not a complaint at all, actually; I just noticed your description and had to comment. XD But damn, this really is hot; you describe the anticipation, frustration, and tension so well that the reader feels it, too. <3
And this is just the right kind of kinky for both of these guys, at least in my head-canon. Especially France! :D
Re: France/America (Hold Still 2/?)
anonymous
August 28 2010, 13:59:16 UTC
Vanilla kinky! That's exactly what it is. The type of stuff that's normally kinky, but done in a vanilla way. There's a new word in my vocabulary.
Authornon, I'm totally with the rest of the reviewers here. Super hot, and America's voice comes through really well <3. Also, loved the way you described wax-pain vs. biting-pain... totally how I experience it!
Re: France/America (Hold Still 2/?)
anonymous
August 27 2010, 05:11:38 UTC
I... I... *O* It's beautifully written and lovely and bawww, I can't wait for you to write more~~ I think I'm in love with the way you use language, dorogoya. -swoons-
I don't know, but I would think being tied to the bed, having hot wax dropped on you, and then teased crazy might count as a kink!
But oh, oh, in any case I do love this. There so needs to be more France/America and more France/America like this, and I think it's utterly fantastic. I love how on the edge and desperate America is, which still trying to hold onto his pride, and just how devilish and yet gentle France is. Much love author-anon!
Re: France/America (Hold Still 2/?)
anonymous
August 27 2010, 13:19:39 UTC
Wow wow wow I love this. Muchly. Especially betwene these two! There's a lot of trust and affection coming off them, and also they're perfectly IC in this situation; America trying to be good and prove that he can do as France says, but still getting frustrated and desperate, and France...dear France! So hot and kinky, and yet, loving too. Only he would be able to restrain himself in that position they find themselves at the end...just to increase America's desperated, flushed, beautiful image. This is one of the best fills about "France is the most skilled at sex", because it shows us, not tells us. I also laughed like an idiot with his late "eventually" xD
France/America (Hold Still 3/4)
anonymous
September 5 2010, 00:20:19 UTC
France rocks against him once he’s buried deep, resumes nipping over America’s chest and ribs. America writhes, moans, oh god, so hot and tight and everything he’s been waiting for, if only he could get France to move a little faster... France reaches up to untie the silk binds around America’s wrists; he finds himself able to thrust back even with his hips shuddering. He wraps his hand around his cock, doesn’t care when France scoffs a little between thrusts because he’s waited what seems like hours and he wants this now
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France/America (Hold Still 4/4)
anonymous
September 5 2010, 00:22:04 UTC
America’s fingers are stiff and cramped and he’s only dimly aware of what he’s doing with them. He feels France’s cool fingers close over his own burning hand and the contrast makes his hand spasm tight and shut on his cock
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France tops, America eagerly bottoms, all other details are up to you potential author anon! Just make it kinky somehow, please?
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More please?
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That's not a complaint at all, actually; I just noticed your description and had to comment. XD But damn, this really is hot; you describe the anticipation, frustration, and tension so well that the reader feels it, too. <3
And this is just the right kind of kinky for both of these guys, at least in my head-canon. Especially France! :D
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Authornon, I'm totally with the rest of the reviewers here. Super hot, and America's voice comes through really well <3. Also, loved the way you described wax-pain vs. biting-pain... totally how I experience it!
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But oh, oh, in any case I do love this. There so needs to be more France/America and more France/America like this, and I think it's utterly fantastic. I love how on the edge and desperate America is, which still trying to hold onto his pride, and just how devilish and yet gentle France is. Much love author-anon!
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I also laughed like an idiot with his late "eventually" xD
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waxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
anon this fill is the exact sort of kinky that I like.
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So damn hot, anon. <3
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