Not Skinny Enough Yet
anonymous
January 14 2010, 21:05:50 UTC
It was a normal enough day for America, as she marched into the conference room chomping on a hamburger. Canada had been commenting a lot lately on her unhealthy habits and the fact that he though (maybe sorta kinda) that she might be putting on a little weight, but she'd brushed him off. It was just Canada, after all
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Not Skinny Enough Yet 2/?
anonymous
January 15 2010, 23:59:30 UTC
Author!anon would like to warn OP that updates might be slow...
America stood on the scale, completely naked and staring at the red numbers in shock. Was she really...?
No, it was just muscle, that was it. Muscle was heavier than fat, and since she'd been exercising so much lately, it must be that. Though, she thought, as she poked at her stomach, isn't muscle also firmer?
A frown spread on her face. She was getting fatter. There was no way around it, and this made her shoulders sink.
What on earth could she do about it? Maybe it was all the food- okay then, no problem, she'd just cut back, cut back a lot. And maybe she wasn't exercising enough- that was fine, she'd start doing it a lot more.
Everything would be okay, she reassured herself, as she slipped back on her clothes. By the next meeting, everyone would be surprised, because she would be thin again....
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Since the whole thing happened at a meeting, you could've gotten other nations' reaction to America punching England, but I believe its fine as it is.
But anon!writer you made me have a good laugh with your fill! For that I thank you greatly! :]
Can I ask you one thing, will you consider to continue this?
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America stood on the scale, completely naked and staring at the red numbers in shock. Was she really...?
No, it was just muscle, that was it. Muscle was heavier than fat, and since she'd been exercising so much lately, it must be that. Though, she thought, as she poked at her stomach, isn't muscle also firmer?
A frown spread on her face. She was getting fatter. There was no way around it, and this made her shoulders sink.
What on earth could she do about it? Maybe it was all the food- okay then, no problem, she'd just cut back, cut back a lot. And maybe she wasn't exercising enough- that was fine, she'd start doing it a lot more.
Everything would be okay, she reassured herself, as she slipped back on her clothes. By the next meeting, everyone would be surprised, because she would be thin again....
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England better feel guilty for making her feel self-conscious!
writer!anon I understand. I don't mind the wait but I hope you don't just leave it undone. I hate it when that happens!
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Aww, America why??
Anon I like where its going! But I just hate cliffhangers!
Oh please I want to know what happens next!
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