In the Dappled Sunshine - LietPol
anonymous
January 24 2010, 00:58:05 UTC
Set in the mid-1700's, just before the first partition when Poland and Lithuania were forced apart.
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"What would you do if you were a human?"
"Eh?" Poland craned his head back, peering over at Lithuania. They were both sprawled on the grass under the shelter of a large tree, listening to the wind rustling the leaves and enjoying the warm summer day. "Like, what're you talking about, Liet?"
Lithuania sighed, looking unusually serious. Things were going so wrong lately. He wasn't sure how much longer their boss could hold off Russia and Austria. He reached over, lacing his fingers through Poland's where they rested in the cool grass. "I just... wondered. If we weren't countries. If we could actually grow up and live lives..."
Poland propped himself up on one elbow, brow furrowing as he looked down at their clasped hands. "What brought this on? It's, like, totally unlike you to be this serious."
"Nevermind," Lithuania sighed again, morosely, staring up at the leaves. After a moment, Poland shrugged and flopped back into the
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ooooh, interesting! I never thought about the possible implications of human=free will. OPanon loved this and is intrigued fruther nowXD Poland's complete shallowness at the beginning was very good. He also doesn't seem to realise how bad things really are looking for him and his friend. The setting really reminds me of "those carefree youthful days", it has a certain melancholy of times less complicated and spent in the sun and all. Very good And they are so cute!! =^:^=
_________
"What would you do if you were a human?"
"Eh?" Poland craned his head back, peering over at Lithuania. They were both sprawled on the grass under the shelter of a large tree, listening to the wind rustling the leaves and enjoying the warm summer day. "Like, what're you talking about, Liet?"
Lithuania sighed, looking unusually serious. Things were going so wrong lately. He wasn't sure how much longer their boss could hold off Russia and Austria. He reached over, lacing his fingers through Poland's where they rested in the cool grass. "I just... wondered. If we weren't countries. If we could actually grow up and live lives..."
Poland propped himself up on one elbow, brow furrowing as he looked down at their clasped hands. "What brought this on? It's, like, totally unlike you to be this serious."
"Nevermind," Lithuania sighed again, morosely, staring up at the leaves. After a moment, Poland shrugged and flopped back into the ( ... )
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Poland's complete shallowness at the beginning was very good. He also doesn't seem to realise how bad things really are looking for him and his friend. The setting really reminds me of "those carefree youthful days", it has a certain melancholy of times less complicated and spent in the sun and all. Very good
And they are so cute!! =^:^=
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Thank you so much, it's so hard to find a new, good fanfiction about those two...
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