My brain comes up with odd kinks
anonymous
January 25 2010, 17:02:08 UTC
Anyways, Latvia has finally snapped and end up going crazy. He ends up taking his best friend with him and turn him into his obedient little slave. (Bonus if Peter is submissive b/c seme!Latvia is just hot]
The other nation find out and they are horrified/amused by the New Latvia and his pet...
Re: Under the Darkness Ch.1 Part 2
anonymous
January 12 2011, 02:34:24 UTC
But all his day dreaming couldn’t amount to the preparation and planning he had been doing in the months leading up to this day. This day was when Peter would be coming over to Raivis house for a play date. Raivis had all the necessary preparations’ in his house. He had the heavy sedative that he would put into Peters lunch to knock him unconscious, sure it had cost him some big money but what was that when he considered the alternative to the drug? He knew he couldn’t just hit his little pet over the head, that may damage him and Raivis certainly didn’t want to break his pet even before the fun started. Raivis even had a special room for Peter. A room made completely of steel with no windows and a heavy iron door. Raivis knew Peter’s body was made of steel just as his fort was and Raivis wanted to make sure that his pet couldn’t escape
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The other nation find out and they are horrified/amused by the New Latvia and his pet...
I bet Russia would be proud of his handiwork...
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As for constructive criticism, the only thing I would really suggest is to space out the paragraphs and dialogue so it's easier to read.
Will be waiting for more ;D
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