I'd like something in between. XD...sorry if that's hard, but some dark moments, some fluffy ones? Losing the war will be tough on America, obviously, and there'd be some punishment, but I don't want England to be an unfeeling monster; it's still his little brother he'd dealing with, you know?
Inquirer!Anon
anonymous
February 11 2010, 03:28:47 UTC
Alright, I think I get what you want from that direction, now how far do you want their 'relationship' to go? Strictly Father/Son thing or slowly growing into something else or something OP had in mind specifically?
xD Sorry about the questions, I've got a beginning almost done and I just don't want to screw up how you want the piece to feel.
(Captcha says 'thrums next'. O_o I think it's threatening me.)
Re: OP again
anonymous
February 13 2010, 23:41:43 UTC
It really shouldn't be that easy, considering England is supposed to have hanged America's most prominent father figure like that. I would expect some extreme trauma.
The Will To Power [Prologue]
anonymous
February 14 2010, 23:13:59 UTC
The Will To Power “...the will to grow, spread, seize, become predominant - not from any morality or immorality but because it is living and because life simply is will to power...” - Paraphrased from the works of Friedrich Nietzsche
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Re: The Will To Power [Prologue]
anonymous
February 15 2010, 06:06:31 UTC
Wow. I can only imagine how that hurt American anons, considering I'm not one of them and I felt a big spark of anger there. Poor Washington! I don't know what England can do to reconnect with America after killing him... I'm really interested, please continue! will we be seeing what the other losers of the war (mainly France, but also Spain and Prussia) are up to?
and anon just realized that maybe the French Revolution won't happen, or won't happen like it did; nor will Spain's colonies declare independence either. This fill has the potential to be epic!
The Will To Power [Part One - The Hubris of Independence]
anonymous
February 15 2010, 10:57:45 UTC
"He who permits himself to tell a lie once, finds it much easier to do it a second and third time....he tells lies without attending to it, and truths without the world's believing him. This falsehood of tongue leads to that of the heart, and in time depraves all its good dispositions." -Thomas Jefferson ***How odd that such a normally cheerful room could seem so empty when one was unused to sitting in it alone. The blond gentleman shifted in his armchair, watching the tranquil country landscape from the room‘s single window. The embodiment of the Kingdom of Great Britain had grown used to the constant company of the house’s lively inhabitant while visiting. Arthur had always patiently borne the chatting, laughing, and shouting for as long as possible before bringing his young charge back into line. It was with dark humour that he realised how much he missed it, now that there was a chance that he’d never hear it again
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So far the England in my head is still very Imperialistic!Conquering!Ambitious!, but because he has a soft spot a mile wide for America he can still be redeemed.
And America.....;_; He will be needing many huggles.
There will be more on how the rest of Europe as well as how exactly the other colonies are affected, prolly won’t go in-depth till the third part. Writer!Anon is proud because this is the first story she has actually planned out that far.
But Anon was right about France and the Spanish colonies’ revolutions. There was also the Irish whose rebellion in the 18th century was influenced by their success. Then Australia only became a major center to deport criminals after the Revolution, as before they had been sent to America.
Also, no French Revolution? = No Napoleonic Wars = No dissolution of the Holy Roman Empire I think hardcore HRE/Ita shippers just started cheering for Iggy.
Re: Notes~
anonymous
February 15 2010, 13:41:41 UTC
F5!!!!! Oh god. I've wanted a fic like this for a while, but I'm nowhere near skilled enough to think through all of the changes a failed rebellion might have caused the world, so I've never attempted to write one.
PROPS, anon. mad props. Please update soon. Also, you've put images of a fully-grown HRE/Ludwig in the black cape and the hat. That there is sexy, anon.
captch says "irresponsible dummy" - I guess it doesn't like the fact that I'm reading the kinkmeme instead of doing homework...
hooked like a druggie~~
anonymous
February 15 2010, 15:46:13 UTC
F5ing LIKE A LOON
I love this fic to pieces. Arthur's mixed voice of condescending paternalistic and loving feelings is perfect, anon. I love that, nevertheles,s he is not holding back on his punishment, executing everyone and planning to restrict liberties, tax like crazy (um, Arthur, you might wanna change policies since that was what started the whole mes sin the first place...) and all that. I can't wait to see the first real interaction between them when he opens the door to that room!
Also, this anon is very very happy to know that we'll be seeing Europe, no independant colonies for the time being, and that you have all this planned out. No French Revolution intrigues this anon, because the unrest was there and wonders how Francis will take care of it...and HRE!! I had forgotten about that! What will Napoleon be, now? And seeing that HRE won't die...I'm worried that another, unexpected nation(s) will. Specially now that England has reaserted his power...
Re: Notes~
anonymous
February 15 2010, 22:00:53 UTC
I love this part; you have England's voice pitch-perfect, and the mention of America screaming it the background is creepy enough to make the whole thing a little uncomfortable.
Re: Notes~
anonymous
February 24 2010, 22:34:15 UTC
"So far the England in my head is still very Imperialistic!Conquering!Ambitious!, but because he has a soft spot a mile wide for America he can still be redeemed."
I'm curious to see how you're going to accomplish that. As of now, I can't really see things going back the way they were between them when America was a baby colony. At best, I think Al would eventually settle down and behave himself like a "good little colony," but with no real warmth toward England.
Re: The Will To Power [Part One - The Hubris of Independence]
anonymous
March 30 2010, 03:08:01 UTC
*-* I am a terribel person for liking this. And I have an aweful sinking feeling going on. T^T Oh dear. So very very worried.
There was something like this on FF.net, only it was more from Canada's POV and ultimately led to Rebel!Canada. I thought this was the same on for a sec. XD
I'm happy that Iggy is at least partially sorry about what he did. *proceeds to pray he figures out he's being a giant douche*
Captcha: to lockable. *stutters incoherently and punches Captcha*
Also would like to see what effect it has on the rest of the world.
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xD Sorry about the questions, I've got a beginning almost done and I just don't want to screw up how you want the piece to feel.
(Captcha says 'thrums next'. O_o I think it's threatening me.)
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“...the will to grow, spread, seize, become predominant - not from any morality or immorality but because it is living and because life simply is will to power...” - Paraphrased from the works of Friedrich Nietzsche ( ... )
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*rubs hands together in glee*
Poor Alfred, my heart twisted at the ending.
Good luck with your paper! <3
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I'm really interested, please continue! will we be seeing what the other losers of the war (mainly France, but also Spain and Prussia) are up to?
and anon just realized that maybe the French Revolution won't happen, or won't happen like it did; nor will Spain's colonies declare independence either. This fill has the potential to be epic!
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***How odd that such a normally cheerful room could seem so empty when one was unused to sitting in it alone. The blond gentleman shifted in his armchair, watching the tranquil country landscape from the room‘s single window. The embodiment of the Kingdom of Great Britain had grown used to the constant company of the house’s lively inhabitant while visiting. Arthur had always patiently borne the chatting, laughing, and shouting for as long as possible before bringing his young charge back into line. It was with dark humour that he realised how much he missed it, now that there was a chance that he’d never hear it again ( ... )
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So far the England in my head is still very Imperialistic!Conquering!Ambitious!, but because he has a soft spot a mile wide for America he can still be redeemed.
And America.....;_; He will be needing many huggles.
There will be more on how the rest of Europe as well as how exactly the other colonies are affected, prolly won’t go in-depth till the third part. Writer!Anon is proud because this is the first story she has actually planned out that far.
But Anon was right about France and the Spanish colonies’ revolutions. There was also the Irish whose rebellion in the 18th century was influenced by their success. Then Australia only became a major center to deport criminals after the Revolution, as before they had been sent to America.
Also, no French Revolution? = No Napoleonic Wars = No dissolution of the Holy Roman Empire
I think hardcore HRE/Ita shippers just started cheering for Iggy.
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Oh god. I've wanted a fic like this for a while, but I'm nowhere near skilled enough to think through all of the changes a failed rebellion might have caused the world, so I've never attempted to write one.
PROPS, anon. mad props. Please update soon.
Also, you've put images of a fully-grown HRE/Ludwig in the black cape and the hat. That there is sexy, anon.
captch says "irresponsible dummy" - I guess it doesn't like the fact that I'm reading the kinkmeme instead of doing homework...
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I love this fic to pieces. Arthur's mixed voice of condescending paternalistic and loving feelings is perfect, anon. I love that, nevertheles,s he is not holding back on his punishment, executing everyone and planning to restrict liberties, tax like crazy (um, Arthur, you might wanna change policies since that was what started the whole mes sin the first place...) and all that. I can't wait to see the first real interaction between them when he opens the door to that room!
Also, this anon is very very happy to know that we'll be seeing Europe, no independant colonies for the time being, and that you have all this planned out. No French Revolution intrigues this anon, because the unrest was there and wonders how Francis will take care of it...and HRE!! I had forgotten about that! What will Napoleon be, now? And seeing that HRE won't die...I'm worried that another, unexpected nation(s) will. Specially now that England has reaserted his power...
excellent fill, I'm hooked
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I'm curious to see how you're going to accomplish that. As of now, I can't really see things going back the way they were between them when America was a baby colony. At best, I think Al would eventually settle down and behave himself like a "good little colony," but with no real warmth toward England.
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There was something like this on FF.net, only it was more from Canada's POV and ultimately led to Rebel!Canada. I thought this was the same on for a sec. XD
I'm happy that Iggy is at least partially sorry about what he did. *proceeds to pray he figures out he's being a giant douche*
Captcha: to lockable. *stutters incoherently and punches Captcha*
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