With Or Without [Part 1/?]
anonymous
March 10 2010, 09:32:50 UTC
[Goingtohellgoingtohellohgodhell.... This is among only three requests I have ever seen in any kink meme that I would be ashamed to ask or fill for un-anon'ed. You win Brave!Requester and Brave!Seconder.]
Alfred slowly opened his eyes, only to quickly close them with a gasp; the pain in his head was excruciating.
Ugh......why did he feel so out of it? The last thing he remembered was visiting Arthur, trying to smooth over some trouble they'd been having recently. He had forgotten what he'd done exactly to upset the other nation this time, it always felt like there was something that had Arthur upset with him
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Re: With Or Without [Part 1/?]
anonymous
March 10 2010, 10:01:03 UTC
Oh wow! I`m really glad someone attempted this anon! I look forward to the next part.
I think your characterization so far is really good - I love Alfred`s thoughts on not wanting to be a disappointment, and not wanting to show when he`s hurt. Tsundere is not near as fun to put up with as fandom seems to make it at times!
Looking beautiful! I love your writing style and characterisations; and the fact that you don't just jump into the fun stuff. That makes it a good story, setting it up and such!
Anyway, I am so thrilled that someone is actually filling this!!
Re: With Or Without [Part 1/?]
anonymous
March 10 2010, 14:23:45 UTC
*flail* The build-up here is excellent, but it's also making me die of anticipation! (and don't worry, the rest of us are going to hell right alongside you. I'll bring some chips and dip.)
Re: Author's Notes aka 'What Circle of Hell Should We Inhabit?'
anonymous
March 12 2010, 09:23:12 UTC
ARTHUR YOU ARE SO FUCKED UP. YESSS.
Author!anon, this non!OP is rooting for as much kink as possible, especially some spanking. Some daddykink would be much appreciated as well. Please update soon! :)
I do think we'll be in the second circle of hell, with all the other perverts. Orgy, anyone?
Re: Author's Notes aka 'What Circle of Hell Should We Inhabit?'
anonymous
March 12 2010, 13:27:34 UTC
I urge you to go there. Seriously, this is all kinds of epic, because I could just see Arthur pulling something like this, and, well, the further he tries to infantilize him, the more he can build him back up and "mold" him... am I making any sense? (probably not, I just woke up). But yeah. I love you, and I'm sure many of us other hell-dwelling anons do as well.
Re: Author's Notes aka 'What Circle of Hell Should We Inhabit?'
anonymous
March 13 2010, 03:14:54 UTC
I love you all the more for giving this a plot. You're just excellent.
I agree with a previous poster - AB/DL seems to play well into that Arthur's trying to accomplish. And since you've opened this up for so much twisted psychological content, you're really capable of pushing this as far as you want. And I'll follow you. Actually, the more I read of the wiki page, the more I'd like to see Al forced into something more AB. Especially with the relevant paraphernalia. Male lactation and spanking? My God, how did you get into the dark corner of my mind I don't tell anyone about?
*raises hand* If this anon could be selfish enough to put a request out there, I'd ask that the diaper play not include scat, or at least not focus on it. And - separate thought, here - after that delicious last line... will we be allowed to see the aftermath?
\o/ Twisted Arthur seems to be a thing with me....as does Abused Alfred.
Ah, the vast darkness of kinky minds, at least we're all in this together in a sense.
And yeah, I wasn't planning on focusing on coprophilia. (As that is not really anon's thing) And it isn't selfish, Author!Anon likes input from people so she knows where to go in the story with certain elements.
I was thinking of showing the aftermath, yes. I've got a few scenarios currently playing 'rock, paper, scissors' in my head to determine what's gonna come out on top.
Re: Author's Notes aka 'What Circle of Hell Should We Inhabit?'
anonymous
March 14 2010, 19:32:16 UTC
As an anon who is following this post, I would say that DL is favorable in this situation to AB/DL, as far as squicking goes. Maybe America discovered a secret kink of his own XD I just think Ab is a little too much against America's personality in a sense? I just eprsonally think it would fit better. I hope my input helps ^^
The plot does seem to make it less shocking--and totally more epic!! Lol, I feel bad for Alfred though...
You seem to be doing very well with this and all, and I'm really not the type to give people restrictions and stuff...plus the whole AB/DL thing does make sense...*nods*
Arthur attempts to bring US back to his youth and dependency on him. dub-con/non-con
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Alfred slowly opened his eyes, only to quickly close them with a gasp; the pain in his head was excruciating.
Ugh......why did he feel so out of it? The last thing he remembered was visiting Arthur, trying to smooth over some trouble they'd been having recently. He had forgotten what he'd done exactly to upset the other nation this time, it always felt like there was something that had Arthur upset with him ( ... )
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I think your characterization so far is really good - I love Alfred`s thoughts on not wanting to be a disappointment, and not wanting to show when he`s hurt. Tsundere is not near as fun to put up with as fandom seems to make it at times!
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Anyway, I am so thrilled that someone is actually filling this!!
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*waits eagerly for the next part*
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This set up is delicious already, please update soon.<3
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as you can see anon I am really excited about this fill
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Author!anon, this non!OP is rooting for as much kink as possible, especially some spanking. Some daddykink would be much appreciated as well.
Please update soon! :)
I do think we'll be in the second circle of hell, with all the other perverts. Orgy, anyone?
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I agree with a previous poster - AB/DL seems to play well into that Arthur's trying to accomplish. And since you've opened this up for so much twisted psychological content, you're really capable of pushing this as far as you want. And I'll follow you.
Actually, the more I read of the wiki page, the more I'd like to see Al forced into something more AB. Especially with the relevant paraphernalia.
Male lactation and spanking? My God, how did you get into the dark corner of my mind I don't tell anyone about?
*raises hand*
If this anon could be selfish enough to put a request out there, I'd ask that the diaper play not include scat, or at least not focus on it.
And - separate thought, here - after that delicious last line... will we be allowed to see the aftermath?
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Ah, the vast darkness of kinky minds, at least we're all in this together in a sense.
And yeah, I wasn't planning on focusing on coprophilia. (As that is not really anon's thing) And it isn't selfish, Author!Anon likes input from people so she knows where to go in the story with certain elements.
I was thinking of showing the aftermath, yes. I've got a few scenarios currently playing 'rock, paper, scissors' in my head to determine what's gonna come out on top.
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You seem to be doing very well with this and all, and I'm really not the type to give people restrictions and stuff...plus the whole AB/DL thing does make sense...*nods*
So go for it! And have a good time with it! ^_^
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