genderbent! F/A/C/E request with lots of orgy sex! boy/boy, girl/girl, boy/girl!
anonymous
March 30 2010, 13:11:24 UTC
I love me some FACE, but this time, England and France are genderbent. They demand that the boys sleep together and they get to watch and direct. The boys have each other (preferably seme!Canada), and then have their mentors.
-England and France are in bed 'having fun' when France (who's kinky as hellXD) gets the idea of including the boys (yay for extra lesbian sex? ^^) -The boys are teenagers (set before the American Revolution). -Lots of fantasizing about their youth, innocent eyes, etc? Make sure to remark that they are young women but they are boys -England and France direct them through the entire experience (what they do to each other and to them) -After AmericaxEngland and CanadaxFrance, they change partners and France rides America//Canada enters England veeery carefully
Bonus?. England and France have a bet on who will top of the two of them, and Canada naturally gets on top of America
I prefer Marianne for fem!France's name ^^
someone's bound to notice where this comes from xD
I Have Seen Them Gentle [1/?]
anonymous
April 4 2010, 02:09:56 UTC
So this is a little later than expected, and I don’t know how frequent I can promise to be with updates. I’m doing a huge multi-chapter fill right now, and I’m about 2/5ths of the way through at 66 pages. Oh, right, and this is my first attempt at writing yuri of any kind. That said, I might as well post what I have as of now. I hope you guys enjoy it. Title comes from Sir Thomas Wyatt’s “They Flee From Me”, and Fem!England's name comes from Fate/stay night. /lame
It should really come as no surprise to Arturia that she gets her best inspiration in bed, Marianne thinks to herself, eyeing the polished silver tea set in the corner of the room as she tickles Arturia’s belly with a quill.
“Mari - oh, God, just - will you get on with it already -”
Marianne’s eyes slide over Arturia’s spread-eagled, blindfolded form. Her lips quirk up in a sort of half-smile, and she tickles Arturia’s stomach with one ghostlike flick of her wrist. “I was thinking,” she says, “when you so rudely interrupted me.”
OMG,OP loves you, anon. The descriptions are captivating, every little detail you included, from the mariner's rope to the tea set; their voices are so on, Arturia (nice name, BTW!) being all prim and uptight but not-so-secretly kinky as hell, and Marianne's voice "dark chocolate and aged lace", and her myriad of lovers...I'm specially intrigued by Marianne, actually, because it always amuses me how easy France is to keep....France-y, no matter his formXD
Oh, and..*God*, when Marianne seduces her; her actions and her *words*. That kind of thing, about the boys' big eyes, etc, is exactly what OP wanted starry eyes*
am I the only one amused by how quickly Arturia climaxed when she finally gave in and visualized Marianne's narration?
I Have Seen Them Gentle [2/?]
anonymous
April 4 2010, 19:35:37 UTC
“We…we’ll do what they want,” Arturia insists, and Marianne leans back on her heels as she unties Arturia’s blindfold. “We won’t - oh, cover yourself up.”
Marianne smiles, ignoring Arturia as one of her own hands sneaks down to fondle herself. “You have my word,” she purrs, a little hitch in her breath as she starts to pant. “We won’t do anything but - ah - what they desire, dear AngleterreIt seems that Arturia has to force herself to look into Marianne’s eyes, and her gaze switches between Marianne’s eyes and the manicured, delicate hands probing between her folds. “…All right, fine,” Arturia mumbles, her eyes falling to the place between Marianne’s legs
( ... )
Moar yuri porn, yayy! Fuck, but I'm totally lesbian for Marianne...she's so sexy (and wickedXD)
I lol'd at the fact Marianne mourns the bussiness attire of Arturia; of course fem!France would love beautiful dresses and beautiful women in them; and out of them. The way she coos and pampers Matt...the poor teen's head is gonna explode at that rateXD
I loved the silent communication between the women, no matter how reluctant Arturia was at first...and Alfred! So cute, with his wide grins and wide eyes...and what an atittudeXD
Marianne, you are NOT subtle, but I love youXD. Dear God, if she'd been grabbing Matt's arm and hugging it close to her breasts, the picture would've been completeXD. And now with candles...that's too subtle for Alfred, Marianne, dear; the atmosphere will totally go over his head, remember?XD but Matt will probably notice and be extremely embarassed and increasingly so as the women flirt with his idiotic clueless brother and he sees what's coming their way...which is always a good thing
Now, why was this the sexiest thing in the entire chapter? I have no idea. But just imagining fem!England saying that dressed as a man, with the usual disapproving frown, in this particular context of semi-courtship of the boys...wow. REALLY hot
...Lol, I actually just put that in because my dad used to jab my elbow with a fork or knife if I put my elbow on the table and I was writing that part and was like "Hmm okay how should I establish the character dynamic between Arturia and Alfred HI TRAUMATIZING CHILDHOOD MEMORIES OF POKED ELBOWS"
That said, I'm glad you're enjoying this, OP! It's so much fun to work on - which I need, because my other fill is just so heavy-handed and serious.
"smooches in". ...RECAPTCHA THE GREAT FORESHADOWING MACHINE
I'm currently writing white claudia, in the Past-Parts Part II section, page 16. That's the fic I was referring to when I said I had a piece that was 66+ pages long - though now it's more like 72+, actually.
I Have Seen Them Gentle [3/?]
anonymous
April 5 2010, 19:31:54 UTC
Alfred blinks, his lips pursing in puzzlement (and oh, she imagines how sweet they must taste, how soft and pliant). “Sure, I guess,” he says, standing. “I’ll go get a candle from the kitchen, just wait a minute.”
Marianne sends a sly, grateful smile over her shoulder as Alfred walks away (“Alfred, don’t you dare leave this room without pushing your chair in!”) and through the doorway separating the parlor from the rest of the house. Marianne smiles to herself and lifts her head, the tip of her nose and a bare brush of lips caressing the blinds as she slides them shut until the heels of her gloved hands touch.
“That’s much better,” she chirps, turning around and beaming at the shadows of her companions.
“If you call not being able to see each other better,” Arturia mutters again.
“Oh, Arturia, you should be happy about this!” Marianne chirps, pouting into the darkness as she takes her seat. “I mean, you’re blind as a bat anyway, now you don’t even need your glasses!”
Oh, but I loved the descriptions of the boys' faces here, and the women's recreation in them. Matt's nervous atittude that suggests he suspects something's up contrasts amusingly with Alfred's total naivete about the whole thing. Till the end, that is; that was an exceptionally hot kiss, and I lol'd at Al's reaction (funny and veyr true to lifeXD) Good god, Marianne' here is doing all the work! Good thing she's good at thisXD. She's seducing everyone, one at a time. And did I mention the FrUK banter? because I love it ♥ oh, and every single mention of their established relationship. because roguh lesbian sex is not something you hear about every day ;)
They demand that the boys sleep together and they get to watch and direct. The boys have each other (preferably seme!Canada), and then have their mentors.
-England and France are in bed 'having fun' when France (who's kinky as hellXD) gets the idea of including the boys (yay for extra lesbian sex? ^^)
-The boys are teenagers (set before the American Revolution).
-Lots of fantasizing about their youth, innocent eyes, etc? Make sure to remark that they are young women but they are boys
-England and France direct them through the entire experience (what they do to each other and to them)
-After AmericaxEngland and CanadaxFrance, they change partners and France rides America//Canada enters England veeery carefully
Bonus?. England and France have a bet on who will top of the two of them, and Canada naturally gets on top of America
I prefer Marianne for fem!France's name ^^
someone's bound to notice where this comes from xD
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It should really come as no surprise to Arturia that she gets her best inspiration in bed, Marianne thinks to herself, eyeing the polished silver tea set in the corner of the room as she tickles Arturia’s belly with a quill.
“Mari - oh, God, just - will you get on with it already -”
Marianne’s eyes slide over Arturia’s spread-eagled, blindfolded form. Her lips quirk up in a sort of half-smile, and she tickles Arturia’s stomach with one ghostlike flick of her wrist. “I was thinking,” she says, “when you so rudely interrupted me.”
“You’re thinking? When I’m like ( ... )
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You started it.
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Also, best detail ever: "Arturia jerks and gasps in the thick mariner’s rope, trembling." I'm caught between maniacal laughter and just ... guh. XD
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That's a pretty accurate description of how I feel toward this fill. Fantastic, can't wait for more. ♥
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You have no idea how many kinks you're fulfilling right now.
And how I love this so much. ♥♥♥
Yes ladies, teach those lovely boys how it is done. ♥♥♥
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OMG,OP loves you, anon. The descriptions are captivating, every little detail you included, from the mariner's rope to the tea set; their voices are so on, Arturia (nice name, BTW!) being all prim and uptight but not-so-secretly kinky as hell, and Marianne's voice "dark chocolate and aged lace", and her myriad of lovers...I'm specially intrigued by Marianne, actually, because it always amuses me how easy France is to keep....France-y, no matter his formXD
Oh, and..*God*, when Marianne seduces her; her actions and her *words*. That kind of thing, about the boys' big eyes, etc, is exactly what OP wanted starry eyes*
am I the only one amused by how quickly Arturia climaxed when she finally gave in and visualized Marianne's narration?
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Marianne smiles, ignoring Arturia as one of her own hands sneaks down to fondle herself. “You have my word,” she purrs, a little hitch in her breath as she starts to pant. “We won’t do anything but - ah - what they desire, dear AngleterreIt seems that Arturia has to force herself to look into Marianne’s eyes, and her gaze switches between Marianne’s eyes and the manicured, delicate hands probing between her folds. “…All right, fine,” Arturia mumbles, her eyes falling to the place between Marianne’s legs ( ... )
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... a very, very nice trap. Everything must go as planned. *A*
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I lol'd at the fact Marianne mourns the bussiness attire of Arturia; of course fem!France would love beautiful dresses and beautiful women in them; and out of them. The way she coos and pampers Matt...the poor teen's head is gonna explode at that rateXD
I loved the silent communication between the women, no matter how reluctant Arturia was at first...and Alfred! So cute, with his wide grins and wide eyes...and what an atittudeXD
Marianne, you are NOT subtle, but I love youXD. Dear God, if she'd been grabbing Matt's arm and hugging it close to her breasts, the picture would've been completeXD. And now with candles...that's too subtle for Alfred, Marianne, dear; the atmosphere will totally go over his head, remember?XD
but Matt will probably notice and be extremely embarassed and increasingly so as the women flirt with his idiotic clueless brother and he sees what's coming their way...which is always a good thing
Marianne slides her gaze ( ... )
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...Lol, I actually just put that in because my dad used to jab my elbow with a fork or knife if I put my elbow on the table and I was writing that part and was like "Hmm okay how should I establish the character dynamic between Arturia and Alfred HI TRAUMATIZING CHILDHOOD MEMORIES OF POKED ELBOWS"
That said, I'm glad you're enjoying this, OP! It's so much fun to work on - which I need, because my other fill is just so heavy-handed and serious.
"smooches in". ...RECAPTCHA THE GREAT FORESHADOWING MACHINE
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Marianne sends a sly, grateful smile over her shoulder as Alfred walks away (“Alfred, don’t you dare leave this room without pushing your chair in!”) and through the doorway separating the parlor from the rest of the house. Marianne smiles to herself and lifts her head, the tip of her nose and a bare brush of lips caressing the blinds as she slides them shut until the heels of her gloved hands touch.
“That’s much better,” she chirps, turning around and beaming at the shadows of her companions.
“If you call not being able to see each other better,” Arturia mutters again.
“Oh, Arturia, you should be happy about this!” Marianne chirps, pouting into the darkness as she takes her seat. “I mean, you’re blind as a bat anyway, now you don’t even need your glasses!”
“Why you -“Please don’t argue, please don’t argue…” ( ... )
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Oh, but I loved the descriptions of the boys' faces here, and the women's recreation in them. Matt's nervous atittude that suggests he suspects something's up contrasts amusingly with Alfred's total naivete about the whole thing. Till the end, that is; that was an exceptionally hot kiss, and I lol'd at Al's reaction (funny and veyr true to lifeXD)
Good god, Marianne' here is doing all the work! Good thing she's good at thisXD. She's seducing everyone, one at a time. And did I mention the FrUK banter? because I love it ♥
oh, and every single mention of their established relationship. because roguh lesbian sex is not something you hear about every day ;)
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