AU conquistador!Spain/teen!Romano
anonymous
April 1 2010, 08:42:15 UTC
So, basically... Spain abducts Romano during one of his conquests just for the hell of it and keeps him as his "pet" of sorts. He doesn't treat him badly, though, more like this creepy devotion I'll-do-anything-for-you-you're-so-pretty sorta thing.
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 18:40:29 UTC
"He's very pretty," Spain keeps says, "he's very pretty. Why so pretty? Those eyes. Soft hair. Very, very soft. I like it." And he keeps on smiling, with his lips curved up. When he does that, his eyes crinkle at the edges and his eyes take on a glaze.
I sit still because he's my boss but that doesn't mean I don't feel creeped out.
There's a boy sleeping on the five feet away and Spain just keeps watching him, the way his chest rises and falls from breathing, the way his arm twitches at random intervals, the way his lips part just slightly. Any moment now, Spain will touch him. His fingers are tentative because he doesn't want to hurt the kid but he's already stopped himself at least ten times. I didn't bother to keep track after that
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 19:39:40 UTC
O____O Author Anon....that may have been the creepiest characterization of Spain I'll ever read.........*shivers* he didn't even react to gold! Very good, especially for a non-nation narrator. ^-^
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anonymous
April 4 2010, 03:38:18 UTC
OP here and loving you.
I'm such a sucker for twisted!Spain and I'm a sucker for things being told in different perspectives and you did both well here, and the shortness of it all makes it all the more intriguing ♥
Twisted, not-right-in-the-head Spain = ultimate yes.
Bonus: it's told in an outsider's perspective
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I sit still because he's my boss but that doesn't mean I don't feel creeped out.
There's a boy sleeping on the five feet away and Spain just keeps watching him, the way his chest rises and falls from breathing, the way his arm twitches at random intervals, the way his lips part just slightly. Any moment now, Spain will touch him. His fingers are tentative because he doesn't want to hurt the kid but he's already stopped himself at least ten times. I didn't bother to keep track after that ( ... )
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Author Anon....that may have been the creepiest characterization of Spain I'll ever read.........*shivers* he didn't even react to gold!
Very good, especially for a non-nation narrator. ^-^
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so deliciously dark.
author - you have captured my heart.
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Secondly that was ridiculously well written.
Third-Marry me.
that is all.
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I'm such a sucker for twisted!Spain and I'm a sucker for things being told in different perspectives and you did both well here, and the shortness of it all makes it all the more intriguing ♥
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Your Spain is creepy, but I like it. <33
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