China/America: Skin Painting
anonymous
April 8 2010, 20:01:38 UTC
America on his stomach in China's bed while China uses ink and brushes to paint words and images on his back while weaving tales for America about the things he's creating on his living canvas.
Eventually that paint gets messed up... ;-)
Bonus: Despite the tales he's telling America the things China is drawing are actually ancient spells of healing and protecting...and perhaps a little possessive in orientation as well. While not the only reason for it the sex helps bind these spells to America. (America must have no idea that this is going on but does feel more safe and protected when it's over.)
Tactile [1/5]
anonymous
April 9 2010, 10:32:18 UTC
I hope this quick fill sated your interest, OP. First time writing China/America, so you will forgive me for the eventual inaccuracies.“Once upon a time, there were no rivers and lakes on Earth, but only the Eastern Sea, in which lived four dragons… the Long Dragon, the Yellow Dragon, the Black Dragon and the Pearl Dragon
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Tactile [2/5]
anonymous
April 9 2010, 10:33:34 UTC
The strange, almost hypnotic feeling of a brush being pressed on his back, the soft scent coming from the mattress (almost like incense, but not as pungent… something nice, lighter), China’s soft voice… everything was making him feel a bit drowsy, but in the good way.
“Hmmm” he murmured, closing his eyes again. “You’d better draw that dragons manly and American…”
China’s reply was a soft hum.
“A white-haired woman, kneeling on the ground with a thin boy on her back, murmured ‘Please send rain quickly, God of Heaven, to give our children rice to eat’… For there had been no rain for a long time
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Tactile [3/5]
anonymous
April 9 2010, 10:34:35 UTC
The smallest shift, the way the brush would incline to the right before being lifted up, the contact with new paint -every detail was heightened in America’s senses, and he fought valiantly against arching up again.
Through the light haze that had taken control of his brain, he heard China continue his story in the same deep, alluring voice.
“The other Dragons followed closely and flew towards the Heavenly Palace. Being in charge of all the affairs in Heaven, on Earth and in the sea, the Jade Emperor was very powerful. He was not pleased to see the dragons rushing in” China smiled and leaned forwards, hand pressing gently on America’s back, feeling the soft shiver. “ he stared at them ‘Why do you come here instead of staying in the sea and behaving yourselves?’ he asked
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Tactile [4/5]
anonymous
April 9 2010, 10:35:39 UTC
He vaguely wondered if he should ask ‘why’, but somehow he didn’t care -what he wanted was China’s touch on him again, not just that of the stupid brush, so he moved closer, lifting himself up to press his lips against those of the dark haired Chinese man
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Not!OP, but ...
anonymous
April 9 2010, 11:16:00 UTC
I really like this. This is so sexy, and I can really feel the age difference here, both between America and China, as well as between China and, well, most everyone else. I really like your China's quiet insight and wisdom, as well as an America that really wants recognition and acceptance -- to be seen and watched and desired for himself. Very cool, anon. GJ ^_^b
I kind of laughed at America remembering to demand the rest of the story (and that the dragons be kickass). Oh America. <3
thank you so very much ^^ *hearts* i'm glad you liked how i wrote it (and the details about america's need to be seen, and china's age, etc :D) *happy*
I know who you aaaaare ^^
anonymous
April 9 2010, 11:19:57 UTC
You may not usually write either of them, but you captured them very well in this story - especially America, I could really imagine him saying those things! As the other commenter said, I love how you portrayed the differences in their ages and attitudes, especially, it's one of the best things about China/America.
And the body painting... and the sex... so awesome! I'm going to pass out of awesome now <3
And of course at the end where he hasn't been painting dragons at all <3 So perfect! I love it!
Re: Tactile [5/5]
anonymous
April 9 2010, 13:32:24 UTC
Best damn thing to wake up to in the morning after a terrible nightmare. NotOP, but this is amazing and made me damn happy. I LOVE how you've portrayed China here, it's something I don't see enough, and the story and descriptions, and just the interaction. Noommmmm. That was delicious and so sensual. ♥ Thanks for writing this. c:
Oh Anon this was...this was so beautiful, so perfect, so...everything. I think I'm in love with the characters, with the story...with you!
This just hit every single one of the buttons I was aiming to have pushed with this one.
The way you used the age difference and weaved the magic throughout the whole process right up to that extremely hot climax and the calm possessiveness at the end.
Re: Tactile [5/5]
anonymous
April 9 2010, 22:59:42 UTC
THIS!
Oh, god, yes, thank you anon! I'm so glad somebody did this one justice-I remember looking at the request and being interested. World needs more good China/America and you just contributed in a big way XD
.....and now I kinda wanna be painted on or paint on somebody.
Eventually that paint gets messed up... ;-)
Bonus: Despite the tales he's telling America the things China is drawing are actually ancient spells of healing and protecting...and perhaps a little possessive in orientation as well. While not the only reason for it the sex helps bind these spells to America. (America must have no idea that this is going on but does feel more safe and protected when it's over.)
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“Hmmm” he murmured, closing his eyes again. “You’d better draw that dragons manly and American…”
China’s reply was a soft hum.
“A white-haired woman, kneeling on the ground with a thin boy on her back, murmured ‘Please send rain quickly, God of Heaven, to give our children rice to eat’… For there had been no rain for a long time ( ... )
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Through the light haze that had taken control of his brain, he heard China continue his story in the same deep, alluring voice.
“The other Dragons followed closely and flew towards the Heavenly Palace. Being in charge of all the affairs in Heaven, on Earth and in the sea, the Jade Emperor was very powerful. He was not pleased to see the dragons rushing in” China smiled and leaned forwards, hand pressing gently on America’s back, feeling the soft shiver. “ he stared at them ‘Why do you come here instead of staying in the sea and behaving yourselves?’ he asked ( ... )
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I kind of laughed at America remembering to demand the rest of the story (and that the dragons be kickass). Oh America. <3
Why does your writing seem so familiar? O.o
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I dunno, I usually write italy...
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And the body painting... and the sex... so awesome! I'm going to pass out of awesome now <3
And of course at the end where he hasn't been painting dragons at all <3 So perfect! I love it!
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NotOP, but this is amazing and made me damn happy. I LOVE how you've portrayed China here, it's something I don't see enough, and the story and descriptions, and just the interaction. Noommmmm. That was delicious and so sensual. ♥ Thanks for writing this. c:
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This just hit every single one of the buttons I was aiming to have pushed with this one.
The way you used the age difference and weaved the magic throughout the whole process right up to that extremely hot climax and the calm possessiveness at the end.
This was so beautiful...just purely beautiful.
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Oh, god, yes, thank you anon! I'm so glad somebody did this one justice-I remember looking at the request and being interested. World needs more good China/America and you just contributed in a big way XD
.....and now I kinda wanna be painted on or paint on somebody.
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