England is actually a rose
anonymous
April 11 2010, 10:54:33 UTC
I want to see England is actually a rose under the disguise of human. America discovers one day by accident. He first teases him then helps look after him and finally falls in love with him.
Bonus 1: The thorns hurt America badly Bonus 2: No England loves America or America loves England since Revolutionary War. I want to see how they fall in love with each other gradually. Bonus 3: England blooms during their first kiss
Millennium [2/?]
anonymous
July 8 2010, 04:15:29 UTC
He moved quietly through the wood. His bare feet pressed precisely into the earth, disturbing no undergrowth, his body flowing through it, letting the foliage pass across flashes of bare skin, branches leaving tiny red scrapes behind. The shadows turned his skin even paler, the deep earth color of his cloak blending in perfectly. A creature of the woods
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Re: Millennium [2/?]
anonymous
July 8 2010, 04:33:28 UTC
I am the Lorax and I speak for the trees OP (but not officially) when I say that this prologue is prolly exactly what she was looking for- but wait! THERE'S MORE!
Your writing style is absolutely fantastic; your descriptions are spot on. I now finally understand what my fourth grade teacher was preaching to my class when she said that imagery in stories 'paints a picture', because, honestly, this has "painted a [proverbial] picture" in my mind.
Your writing is flawless without wax. AND DON'T FORGET OUR PROMISE.
Re: Millennium [2/?]
anonymous
July 8 2010, 08:07:15 UTC
Whoa, that was an excellent start! I absolutely loved the gorgeous, engaging imagery. I had a sudden urge/want to see a picture book based on this.
I also vote for evil wizard. Vagabond hero and runaway prince sound so very fitting for America, but I can kind of already see how the story would go with those roles. Evil wizard!America, on the other hand... I'd kill to see that.
Millennium [5/?]
anonymous
July 13 2010, 01:32:54 UTC
And Arthur could not read his thoughts, could not get past whatever shielded his mind to see what he was thinking. Strong as the knight's magic was, his mastery of it was plain to see: the knight had none
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Millennium [6/?]
anonymous
July 13 2010, 01:41:32 UTC
Arthur's headscarf slipped off: sunrise, poppy, fuchsia, copper, flame. Red, brighter than the blood soaking the snow. The colors were there on the dew-kissed petals of the roses, the fiercely beautiful flowers in full bloom despite the cold winter season. They made a stark picture against the gold of his short, choppy hair. The green of his eyes matched the stems and leaves coiled around the length of his body, possessive in their ownership
( ... )
Millennium [7/?]
anonymous
July 13 2010, 01:54:08 UTC
The knight shifted then, pushed himself up to a sitting position. He felt at the side of his jaw and opened and closed his mouth. He moved his jaw left and right, winced when he touched his busted lip. "I don't think it's broken." His voice was a whisper
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America discovers one day by accident. He first teases him then helps look after him and finally falls in love with him.
Bonus 1: The thorns hurt America badly
Bonus 2: No England loves America or America loves England since Revolutionary War. I want to see how they fall in love with each other gradually.
Bonus 3: England blooms during their first kiss
Here is one picture, hope it can inspire you XD
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=9418212
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Thirding~ Also--just a point of interest, since I can't promise anything ;_; sorry--would anon mind human/fairytale AU? Or do they have to be nations?
hey is that the doujinka of rosarium
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Though I kinda hope they can stay as nations, it is not necessary XD
Yeah, it is from a doujin =)
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Your writing style is absolutely fantastic; your descriptions are spot on. I now finally understand what my fourth grade teacher was preaching to my class when she said that imagery in stories 'paints a picture', because, honestly, this has "painted a [proverbial] picture" in my mind.
Your writing is flawless without wax. AND DON'T FORGET OUR PROMISE.
I'm creaming my pants for an update already XD
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very brilliant, this one is. can't wait for more!
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This is fantastic and OP hopes to see an update soon (yeah, I am shameless~)
Kinda hope to see Alfred as a runaway prince...lol
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I also vote for evil wizard. Vagabond hero and runaway prince sound so very fitting for America, but I can kind of already see how the story would go with those roles. Evil wizard!America, on the other hand... I'd kill to see that.
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AND YES. ♥ I'd love to see America cast against type!
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