15 minutes of pleasure (1/3)
anonymous
May 1 2010, 19:18:52 UTC
Note: Well.. since you asked =u= (Please note that I am using their names though they don't know each others names yet.. Just because it's easier to write that way, and, well, WE know what they're named
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15 minutes of pleasure (2/3)
anonymous
May 1 2010, 19:21:14 UTC
Alfred couldn’t get all the way in in the first go. His cockhead bumped against the back of Arthur’s throat, and as he man started coughing, the pleasure was gone and he pulled back for a second to allow him to breath. Then he went back in again. “Yes…” His s turned slurry as he watched his cock disappear down Arthur’s thigh throat, and he slipped a hand down to feel how it stretched to take him in. The pleasure was unbearable, just like the sounds the other was making trying to breath through his nose, so Alfred closed his last way of getting air by closing two fingers around the nostrils and pressing them together
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15 minutes of pleasure (3/3)
anonymous
May 1 2010, 19:45:40 UTC
“Just take whatever.” Arthur quirked a brow at him. Alfred shrugged. “I can afford it.” Arthur opened his wallet and took whatever bank notes he could see. Didn’t count them, just slipped them down into a random pocket of his jeans.
“A pleasure serving you, mate. If you ever come to town again -” Arthur winked at him and kicked the door open even before he had his pants on. Alfred said nothing, and Arthur disappeared in the night. He ran across the cold parking lot, around the fence and stopped at the public toilet. No one. He was lucky. Closed the door behind, fell to sit on the toilet seat as he started to jerk himself off. He came quickly, hard, he had needed it. “Damn…” Arthur leaned against the wall with a sigh as he felt a shameful blush creep across his cheeks. “Since when have I turned into a pussy…”
So hot!! Well done anon, this was amazing! I hope you know how addictive your writing is <3 I sorta couldn't help but think that it was cute that Arthur denied to show any weakness even when having sex <3 This was a great extra, anon!
Glad you liked it, OP! For I kind of had the choice between writing the next chapter or doing this scene. But since there hadn't been any sex yet, I chose to do this scene. <3
Re: 15 minutes of pleasure (3/3)
anonymous
May 1 2010, 23:20:54 UTC
It seems that my comments have spawned other comments which have spawned porn! Yay!
This was hot, but it also kept with the situation well too. I like how Arthur was thinking about what cliche and slutty things he should do or say. And the ending was perfect, and somewhat hilarious.
I agree it would have been jarring to include it in the fic itself though. But I'm still happy we got to see this. :3
capthca: Malthus technology, I suppose Arthur is pretty miserable and gay prostitute so I guess that does prevent population growth...
Re: 15 minutes of pleasure (3/3)
anonymous
May 2 2010, 10:55:45 UTC
Wow I can't believe you did this because of me asked/suggested!
Weeeeewt!!! Anon (not OP, but OP of the 'suggestion') is HAPPY!! HAPPY!! I'm floating away here with love! <33 Thank you for writing this *-* Brb drooling forever.
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“A pleasure serving you, mate. If you ever come to town again -” Arthur winked at him and kicked the door open even before he had his pants on. Alfred said nothing, and Arthur disappeared in the night. He ran across the cold parking lot, around the fence and stopped at the public toilet. No one. He was lucky. Closed the door behind, fell to sit on the toilet seat as he started to jerk himself off. He came quickly, hard, he had needed it. “Damn…” Arthur leaned against the wall with a sigh as he felt a shameful blush creep across his cheeks. “Since when have I turned into a pussy…”
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I hope you know how addictive your writing
is <3 I sorta couldn't help but think that it
was cute that Arthur denied to show any weakness
even when having sex <3 This was a great extra, anon!
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The OP is damn right, your writing is addictive though it's a drug I'll gladly subdue to any time.
And the title... *snort*
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This was hot, but it also kept with the situation well too. I like how Arthur was thinking about what cliche and slutty things he should do or say. And the ending was perfect, and somewhat hilarious.
I agree it would have been jarring to include it in the fic itself though. But I'm still happy we got to see this. :3
capthca: Malthus technology, I suppose Arthur is pretty miserable and gay prostitute so I guess that does prevent population growth...
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Now I can patiently wait for the next parts _^_
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Weeeeewt!!! Anon (not OP, but OP of the 'suggestion') is HAPPY!! HAPPY!! I'm floating away here with love! <33 Thank you for writing this *-* Brb drooling forever.
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