Honestly, I'm not one for crossovers at all, but this... Do want. Gryffindor!US/Slytherin!UK and Huffleclaw!Franada are musts. OP doesn't want the HP cast to play a major role at all. Focus should be on Hogwartsified Hetalia members.
Bonus: Alfred still can't see fairies. Cursed at birth or smth. Some sort of romantic mush occurs when Arthur tries to cure him. Bonus2: Some hankypanky in the Prefects' bathroom. Moaning Myrtle... cockblock or voyeur? ;D Get to it, anons!
[Chapter 2, Part 3] Specialis Revelio
anonymous
April 3 2010, 06:48:33 UTC
Arthur tugs them into the alley between Weasley's Wizard Wheezes and a little knick-knack shop that sells fragrances and skin creams before he stops and turns to face Francis. It's very dim here, but Arthur can hear the little hitches in Francis's breathing, and he recognizes the way that his best friend is hiding his face with his robe sleeves
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[Chapter 2, Part 3] Specialis Revelio **EDIT W/PROPER CODING****
anonymous
April 3 2010, 06:58:34 UTC
And, so, Arthur whispers an illusion spell to the entrance to the dead-end alleyway, hiding them from any curious eyes, before taking Francis in his arms. When they were small, Arthur would often start crying with Francis, sensitive to the pain rolling off of his best friend. Now, Arthur bites his lip and controls himself, holding Francis around his shoulders and rocking them both back and forth gently as Francis stuffs his left fist into his mouth, sharp Veela teeth sinking deep into his own skin, to stiffle his horrified screams.
After a thirty-three hour debate, the Wizengamot reached the verdict that the sale of registered half-blood body byproducts in their non-human forms does not violate the Bill of Wizard Rights as the Half-Blood and Intelligent Magical Creature Registration Act included a sub-clause consenting to search and seizure of dangerous implements on registered persons...
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 08:07:07 UTC
oh god my heart goes out to Francis, and thank you for writing Arthur as such a dear. It's a refreshing change to see them as close friends rather than bitter rivals.
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 08:33:56 UTC
lol, flying flubberworm, oh I don't even. ILU.
I love the way you portrait Arthur and Francis, the fact that they both have their own flaws yet simply support each other in the hardest time. It makes them very believable and human. Good Job writer!anon! Love your characterization.
That's really some attitude, Alfred Jones.
Can't wait for the next part! Keep up the great work, dear author!anon.<333
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 16:47:15 UTC
Amazing, writer!anon! I love the FrUK interaction and their childhood closeness - and I can't help feeling awful for Francis and his really messed up family background situation. Will we get more backstory? :D
I'm still desperately curious how Arthur got sorted in Slytherin instead of into any other school - is it just owing to a traditional family thing? His soft spot for magical animals (amazing detail ♥) and lack of smooth politicking make him seem a lot more gryffindor-y to me. (I hope Arthur gets to befriend a dragon - he'd be best friends with Hagrid, with their shared love of odd, possibly dangerous animals, wouldn't he!)
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 16:54:27 UTC
ack! On re-reading, did Arthur (or Francis, because it was his fireball) end up killing Francis' parents in the fireball? Especially if his mother was in a cage and couldn't escape the fire - I can't imagine how their friendship survived that!
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 18:03:15 UTC
ANOOON YOU UPDATED ♥ I'm going to go early here and offer my body/heart/hand in marriage before the requests start coming in. MAYBE I CAN BE YOUR FAVORITE HAREM MEMBER?
Ahaha, seriously though. This fill is amazing. Francis and Arthur being such close and loyal friends is really refreshing, and Alfred is such a little braaat, hahha. Awwww ♥ Francis is tutoring Matthew ♥♥♥
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anonymous
April 3 2010, 21:51:49 UTC
I'm hooked but only two chapters are out. *wails
I'm also really enjoying the fact that Francis and Arthur are such cutesy childhood friends. And how they both deal with their family problems through eachother.
Question: At what point in the Harry Potter timeline does this take place? Anon's secretly hoping for a tiny cameo of herbology professor Neville...
Author!Anon Here
anonymous
April 4 2010, 00:40:07 UTC
I kinda copped out on the main HP timeline and made this around-ish the period where the second generation would be graduated from Hogwarts but not far after. My great failure is in time >>;;
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anonymous
April 4 2010, 01:46:12 UTC
No worries this is quite clear, I was already aware it was after the main HP storyline because of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes combined with the new Minister of Magic.
Time isn't really important in such a timeless epic such as this fic. 8D shot
[Chapter 3, Part 1] Specialis Revelio
anonymous
April 5 2010, 07:11:31 UTC
Chapter 3 The Boy Who Lied
Francis's POV
The cage was the size of a master bedroom, and it always smelled of lilies and rose water. A bath lay attached through a pale silk curtain, light sparkling off of the hundreds of beautiful and tiny orbs that floated between the bed, the tub, the vanity, and the cieling. It was a lavish and white place, all smooth and marble and onyx.
This was the place his mother had resided, chained with curses and spells that kept her forever within the windowless walls. If Francis closes his eyes and breathes in deep, he can imagine her hands, long fingered and painted with the reddest of reds, helping him dress for a party in the ballroom she had never seen. If it's a particularly good day, he can remember more: his mother, so fair and pale but with dark, beautiful eyes, taking him in her arms and kissing his brow. Her hair had smelt of lily and talc; her tears had tasted of salt; and she had whispered:
Je t'aime, mon cher, mon fils, maintenant et toujoursAnd he doesn't know if he has just
( ... )
[Chapter 3, Part 2] Specialis Revelio
anonymous
April 5 2010, 07:15:41 UTC
One part him, the human part, rages: I'm Ravenclaw. I'm Slytherin. I'm a Bonnefoy. This Ministry is built on my family's blood and sacrifice. I'm not stupid. I'm not weak. How dare they forget who I am?
The other part, the Veela in his flesh, whispers: But I saw the hair. I've heard so many stories, and so many of us have already immigrated to the Continent. It would only take a few days settle my affairs here. I don't have to stay in danger's way. I'm not stupid.
Francis breathes in, breathes out, breathes in. He keeps his breathing even, closes his eyes, and fights the ongoing battle not to go insane.
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anonymous
April 5 2010, 07:25:43 UTC
:D :D :DDD
YOU UPDATED ANON right before I was going to go to bed! I must figure out what timezone you are in to better stalk this fill!
This is awesome and I love what you've done with the characters. I want to hug Francis, and it's nice to see a non-pervy Francis. And his friendship with Arthur is <3, and awwww Matthew!
I am stalking this fill, seriously. It's a pleasure to read and just overall amazing.
Honestly, I'm not one for crossovers at all, but this... Do want. Gryffindor!US/Slytherin!UK and Huffleclaw!Franada are musts. OP doesn't want the HP cast to play a major role at all. Focus should be on Hogwartsified Hetalia members.
Bonus: Alfred still can't see fairies. Cursed at birth or smth. Some sort of romantic mush occurs when Arthur tries to cure him.
Bonus2: Some hankypanky in the Prefects' bathroom. Moaning Myrtle... cockblock or voyeur? ;D Get to it, anons!
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After a thirty-three hour debate, the Wizengamot reached the verdict that the sale of registered half-blood body byproducts in their non-human forms does not violate the Bill of Wizard Rights as the Half-Blood and Intelligent Magical Creature Registration Act included a sub-clause consenting to search and seizure of dangerous implements on registered persons...
The Daily Prophet on the 23 August 20--
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And what attitude you have, Young Master Jones.
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I love the way you portrait Arthur and Francis, the fact that they both have their own flaws yet simply support each other in the hardest time. It makes them very believable and human. Good Job writer!anon! Love your characterization.
That's really some attitude, Alfred Jones.
Can't wait for the next part! Keep up the great work, dear author!anon.<333
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I'm still desperately curious how Arthur got sorted in Slytherin instead of into any other school - is it just owing to a traditional family thing? His soft spot for magical animals (amazing detail ♥) and lack of smooth politicking make him seem a lot more gryffindor-y to me.
(I hope Arthur gets to befriend a dragon - he'd be best friends with Hagrid, with their shared love of odd, possibly dangerous animals, wouldn't he!)
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Ahaha, seriously though. This fill is amazing. Francis and Arthur being such close and loyal friends is really refreshing, and Alfred is such a little braaat, hahha. Awwww ♥ Francis is tutoring Matthew ♥♥♥
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I'm also really enjoying the fact that Francis and Arthur are such cutesy childhood friends. And how they both deal with their family problems through eachother.
Question: At what point in the Harry Potter timeline does this take place? Anon's secretly hoping for a tiny cameo of herbology professor Neville...
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Time isn't really important in such a timeless epic such as this fic. 8D shot
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The Boy Who Lied
Francis's POV
The cage was the size of a master bedroom, and it always smelled of lilies and rose water. A bath lay attached through a pale silk curtain, light sparkling off of the hundreds of beautiful and tiny orbs that floated between the bed, the tub, the vanity, and the cieling. It was a lavish and white place, all smooth and marble and onyx.
This was the place his mother had resided, chained with curses and spells that kept her forever within the windowless walls. If Francis closes his eyes and breathes in deep, he can imagine her hands, long fingered and painted with the reddest of reds, helping him dress for a party in the ballroom she had never seen. If it's a particularly good day, he can remember more: his mother, so fair and pale but with dark, beautiful eyes, taking him in her arms and kissing his brow. Her hair had smelt of lily and talc; her tears had tasted of salt; and she had whispered:
Je t'aime, mon cher, mon fils, maintenant et toujoursAnd he doesn't know if he has just ( ... )
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The other part, the Veela in his flesh, whispers: But I saw the hair. I've heard so many stories, and so many of us have already immigrated to the Continent. It would only take a few days settle my affairs here. I don't have to stay in danger's way. I'm not stupid.
Francis breathes in, breathes out, breathes in. He keeps his breathing even, closes his eyes, and fights the ongoing battle not to go insane.
--Fear is a curious thing ( ... )
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YOU UPDATED ANON right before I was going to go to bed! I must figure out what timezone you are in to better stalk this fill!
This is awesome and I love what you've done with the characters. I want to hug Francis, and it's nice to see a non-pervy Francis. And his friendship with Arthur is <3, and awwww Matthew!
I am stalking this fill, seriously. It's a pleasure to read and just overall amazing.
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Aw, man. I just want to give Francis a giant hug. I was practically crying manly tears at the beginning.
I'm lovin' this fill like crazy, anon.
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