And I Will Be Icarus [1/2]
anonymous
May 8 2010, 07:14:38 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13125.html?thread=34031429 Summation of Request: "...smutty fic in which America's partner is totally getting off on the fact that they're in bed with this insanely powerful person, someone who could hold them down and ravish them, but who doesn't do a thing unless they allow him to."
And I Will Be IcarusEvery time he hugged Alfred, it felt like he was embracing the sun. It was so energetic and warm in your arms that you couldn't bear to let go if you wanted to; even with having the terrifying knowledge of how close you were to burning up in it
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Re: And I Will Be Icarus [2/2]
anonymous
May 8 2010, 11:45:41 UTC
It almost seemed sinful for such a powerful man to look so vulnerable, so helpless.
THIS WAS SO FUCKING HOT
Anyway, since this anon's guilty of this kink irl, I loved this from beginning to end. And there's something even more erotic about Russia being the other one
Re: And I Will Be Icarus [2/2]
anonymous
May 8 2010, 17:07:18 UTC
Oh, fantastic fill. Love the characterization of both Russia and America, especially through Russia's point of view. That, and your prose is amazing. Great job!
Re: And I Will Be Icarus [2/2]
anonymous
May 8 2010, 18:24:44 UTC
Guess what I'm going to be thinking of the entire time my social class covers the Cold War? THIS RIGHT HERE. *epic shame*
But oh man, that was gloriously hot. Metaphors, OMG. *literary nerding* You just pushed my power kink buttons in ways I didn't know they could be pushed. *loves forever*
Re: And I Will Be Icarus [2/2]
anonymous
May 11 2010, 02:05:48 UTC
Whatwhatwhat, no fail AT ALL! This was amazing; hot, symbolic and introspective all at the same time and with a little humour there too. And I love the metaphor of Alfred as a sun.
Oh, this is just orgasmic! And with my OTP, too! I really just couldn't believe that there weren't ANY power!kink requests/fills on here, aside from the usual BDSM stuff. I love it when fic plays with power/helplessness themes -- like here where Russia is the elder, and sexually dominant, but where America has all the raw power. That is the hottest stuff in the world (well, if you're me!)
Author!Anon! ^.^
anonymous
May 8 2010, 23:00:51 UTC
I'm glad OP was happy with it! (Everyone else too, I've seriously never done this kink before so I was worried that it would suck) And the fact that America is freakishly strong is usually ignored in fics, so it was nice writing one that revolved around that theme.
Summation of Request: "...smutty fic in which America's partner is totally getting off on the fact that they're in bed with this insanely powerful person, someone who could hold them down and ravish them, but who doesn't do a thing unless they allow him to."
And I Will Be IcarusEvery time he hugged Alfred, it felt like he was embracing the sun. It was so energetic and warm in your arms that you couldn't bear to let go if you wanted to; even with having the terrifying knowledge of how close you were to burning up in it ( ... )
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Ivan trusted Alfred to not split his head open like a rotten melon.
Hahaha fuck yeah.
Loved this~!
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THIS WAS SO FUCKING HOT
Anyway, since this anon's guilty of this kink irl, I loved this from beginning to end. And there's something even more erotic about Russia being the other one
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But oh man, that was gloriously hot. Metaphors, OMG. *literary nerding* You just pushed my power kink buttons in ways I didn't know they could be pushed. *loves forever*
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Wow. I... I'll be in my bunk. :3
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THANK YOU SO MUCH.
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