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Sweet and Tender Hooligan anonymous May 9 2010, 04:50:13 UTC
Arthur Kirkland, a infamous criminal/delinquent in his boarding school and one of the most productive and tyrannical and hated kids in school.

So his big bro, Scotland (you give him a name)gets rid of him by sending to off to a school in America....where he become the most popular, well-liked kid in school.

It helps that Americans love foreign accents and Alfred, the most popular and nicest guy/jerk in school has an accent fetish.

Parts 1-4 here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11813.html?thread=38373669#t38373669

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Sweet and Tender Hooligan [5/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 04:51:28 UTC
Sunday came and when Arthur slammed his fist on his alarm clock he considered standing the boy up. Arthur entertained the idea as he groaned and stumbled to the bathroom, ignoring the headache that pounded him right behind the eyes and wondered why the hell he had one if he hadn’t had a drop of alcohol to drink in a week. So far in his stay in America, Arthur had been unable to find any good liquor worth the money and went without. It wasn’t as hard as he’d originally thought it would be, but still… sometimes he woke with headaches that he was beginning to worry about ( ... )

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Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 04:52:15 UTC
“Not like a bloody sun,” Arthur muttered as he remembered to a description Francis had once given the boy. The boy wore a large and old bomber jacket, much like the varsity one, with patches sewn on the sleeves, with a red hoodie and blue jeans. He laughed at nothing and from the large pocket on the hoodie a puppy’s head popped out and barked, sending the golden boy into another round of laughter.

England frowned when he looked in his direction and brightened even more (not at all like a sun shining brilliantly in the dark day) as he waved enthusiastically and motioned for him to come in. England walked to the door and went in, keeping from rolling his eyes as the door jingled as it opened ( ... )

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Re: Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 05:16:45 UTC
S-sorry, but Arthur wanking to the image of Alfred's sad, disappointed face when he didn't show up was so fucking priceless I don't even have anything else to say. XD What the hell, Arthur? <3<3<3

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Re: Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 05:29:38 UTC
^ This. XD

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Re: Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 08:51:01 UTC
Ditto, anon.

Seriously, Arthur is such a berk <3. It says so much about his personality if he is going to wank off to someone's sad face. (shakes head at Arthur)

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Re: Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] anonymous May 9 2010, 18:58:45 UTC
I also liked the wanking off to Al's sad face, even though it's clear Arthur can't even admit to himself he treasures the 'absolutely-not-brilliant-sunny' smile of AlXD

Oh, and everytime you give indications of what Arthur does with his language, how he rolls some letters, chooses some words, to turn on people, and the effect it has on others...*blush, strong British accent kink is STRONG*

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Re: Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] anonymous May 12 2010, 00:01:11 UTC
This is a really nice story you have there! Delinquent!Arthur with accent-kink!Alfred? Wow! I'm a happy reader indeed! Now where will our two boys go on their date... Come on, it so is a date! They just haven't realized it yet. XD I'm eager to know how their relationship will evolve (with that massive amount of UST, I expect something good to happen if they get caught in the rain, soaked clothes clinging to their bodies... Hehehe!). Speaking of relationships, I really like the interactions between Francis and Arthur. So funny! That's what good frienemies do!
Can't wait for an update!

CAPTCHA was 182: Belmont... Could it be the address of Alfred's Pops' petshop? *Is shot*

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Oh noes! anonymous May 19 2010, 21:43:29 UTC
England frowned when he looked in his direction and brightened even more (not at all like a sun shining brilliantly in the dark day) as he waved enthusiastically and motioned for him to come in. England walked to the door and went in, keeping from rolling his eyes as the door jingled as it opened.

Was that on porpoise or it just slipped? If so, force of habit I bet, Hahah.
Anyway I like this fill please update soon <3

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Re: Oh noes! anonymous May 24 2010, 05:34:26 UTC
W-was what on purpose anon? *panics* D-did I make a mistake? Glad you like it though!

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Don't panic dear! anonymous May 25 2010, 03:31:03 UTC
You wrote England instead of Arthur. If it was on purpose, there must be an ulterior motive. If not, well, force of habit perhaps? It happens to everyone.

I just wanted to be sure.

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Re: Don't panic dear! anonymous May 27 2010, 04:40:46 UTC
Ohhhhhhhhhh. *blinks* So there is. Damn. I thought I'd taken all the England's out. Thanks for telling me anon!

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Re: Sweet and Tender Hooligan [6/?] nottoo_much May 24 2010, 22:17:18 UTC
Omg!!! yesss update!!!! yeiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
nisdbfbfurbgui I just love arthur in this fic!!! and alfred awwww he's soo inocent XD....lovely!! This fill is awesome...just awesomee!!
update soon!!!!
kisses hun :)

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Nitpicking time! anonymous May 26 2010, 22:44:58 UTC
This fill is so much love but the nitpicker in me is saying, "there;s an England in your fic."

Isn't it AU? England only being called Arthur?

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Re: Nitpicking time! anonymous May 27 2010, 04:41:56 UTC
Thanks for pointing it out anon! I did it by mistake orz.

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