Part 10: A Circle of Trinity [11/?] [UK/US, UK/HK]
anonymous
May 9 2010, 19:08:53 UTC
Hong Kong watched Arthur, trying to gain some semblance of normalcy in his daily life. It was subtle, nothing overtly obvious. The smile had waned into a masked façade, his expressions constantly guarded. His talks with United States had dwindled into polite chats and curt replies. America, surprisingly still does not realize the change of demeanour over Arthur. Hong Kong frowned and cursed
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Part 10: A Circle of Trinity [12/?]
anonymous
May 9 2010, 19:13:53 UTC
Ugh, character limit. Entries are gonna be slow a little, I'm having problems being in-character. OTLHis resistance broke, his hands worked faster than what his mind could react. The American pushed Hong Kong against the wall, one hand gripping his neck tightly; trying break his neck and his other hand fisting up to punch the living daylight's out of this ridiculously good for nothing son of a
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Re: Part 10: A Circle of Trinity [12/?]
anonymous
May 10 2010, 04:48:43 UTC
This is really... I dont know. But I cannot see how it can end up in usuk, not that I care that much though.
As much as I love usuk and hope this fill can have a happy end, I will prefer Arthur being with others if America still regards him as a "precious chess". I don't even think it can be explained by his oblivious. It seems to me that he actually never loves or cares about Arthur. No, I doubt that he even knows what love is. He thinks that Arthur won't leave him because he is the most influential superpower. Seriously, what the problem with him? France is right. He does not deserve Arthur. Well, at least at present.
I like the two protective brothers, France and China here. And Hong Kong! I am not a fan a Hong Kong/UK, but I really really like Hong Kong here.
It is really a great job, anon! Keep going. Devil me want to see America suffers lulz
Re: Part 10: A Circle of Trinity [12/?]
anonymous
June 3 2010, 16:51:04 UTC
I agree with the anon above me on how this can't turn into USUK, especially if that's how America thought of England all along. Even if there could've been more genuine feelings before, I think it would be best if they were apart. You know, like The Break-Up movie.
Don't get me wrong, I'm a USUK fan, but heck, even I hate America in this one.
Great story though. Love how you portray Arthur's feelings with the mirror thing. :D
Re: Part 10: A Circle of Trinity [12/?]
anonymous
January 27 2011, 05:33:03 UTC
Oh anon! You must update this! Please! ;_; I'm at the edge of my seat here! I have never been so close to tears and feel so much pain in my heart while reading a fic until this came along!!
I fistpumped when I read that it'll be Hong Kong!
Granted, I'm not sure which pairing to side with~ I am a die-hard US/UK (and vice versa) fan but this Hong Kong/UK business seems to also be good. I still have a bit of faith with America. As countries I believe they suffer depersonalization to varying extents and there maybe times when they can't differentiate their country aspect from their humanity.
But GAH! I felt very very angry when Arthur saw America getting it on with someone else. >.<
And now, like I said, PLEASE update this! My heart will not be able to take this if you don't update!
UK!Anon loves this!
anonymous
August 16 2011, 17:55:11 UTC
Oh anon. I love you for writing this. Really, you have so much talent! I love the way you compared Arthur to a mirror <3
(Is it weird that I cried when the mirror 'shattered into pieces'? I was like "Nuuuu mirror ILU!") IS ATTACHED TO THE MIRROR LIKE WHOA.
I really want to do fanart for this. With acrylic paints. Mirror/England. Is that bad? (Mind: Yes, very bad.) And then take a picture of it and upload it for other anons to see and laugh at.
captcha is obviously high/trying to get high: class weed. Really captcha? You can't do weed in class!
Summary: US hurts UK really bad, so UK breaks up with him and dates someone else - US strives to get back with UK
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I dont know. But I cannot see how it can end up in usuk, not that I care that much though.
As much as I love usuk and hope this fill can have a happy end, I will prefer Arthur being with others if America still regards him as a "precious chess". I don't even think it can be explained by his oblivious. It seems to me that he actually never loves or cares about Arthur. No, I doubt that he even knows what love is. He thinks that Arthur won't leave him because he is the most influential superpower. Seriously, what the problem with him? France is right. He does not deserve Arthur. Well, at least at present.
I like the two protective brothers, France and China here. And Hong Kong! I am not a fan a Hong Kong/UK, but I really really like Hong Kong here.
It is really a great job, anon! Keep going. Devil me want to see America suffers lulz
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H-hope you update soon!
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Don't get me wrong, I'm a USUK fan, but heck, even I hate America in this one.
Great story though. Love how you portray Arthur's feelings with the mirror thing. :D
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I fistpumped when I read that it'll be Hong Kong!
Granted, I'm not sure which pairing to side with~ I am a die-hard US/UK (and vice versa) fan but this Hong Kong/UK business seems to also be good. I still have a bit of faith with America. As countries I believe they suffer depersonalization to varying extents and there maybe times when they can't differentiate their country aspect from their humanity.
But GAH! I felt very very angry when Arthur saw America getting it on with someone else. >.<
And now, like I said, PLEASE update this! My heart will not be able to take this if you don't update!
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(Is it weird that I cried when the mirror 'shattered into pieces'? I was like "Nuuuu mirror ILU!") IS ATTACHED TO THE MIRROR LIKE WHOA.
I really want to do fanart for this. With acrylic paints. Mirror/England. Is that bad? (Mind: Yes, very bad.) And then take a picture of it and upload it for other anons to see and laugh at.
captcha is obviously high/trying to get high: class weed. Really captcha? You can't do weed in class!
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