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Lithuania/America: Belong anonymous June 1 2010, 02:52:25 UTC
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=14989090 "Unrepentant smut! America asks Lithuania to top him. Starts out awkward but ends mutually satisfactorily. Bonus - BDSM-type stuff is always good, heavy or less so."

Author!non had fun with this one. Got a bit wrapped up in it, and it got long. o.O Unbeta'd, so apologies for any errors. Please enjoy; I know I did.

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Belong 1/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 02:54:58 UTC
America sighed, struggling not to allow his disappointment to be communicated to the other. Lithuania was curled up in his lap, sobbing and apologizing over and over into his chest, as America petted his hair and whispered reassurances and sweet nothings to him. “Really, it’s okay,” he insisted, cuddling their bare bodies together with all the platonic innocence he could muster at the moment - which was a lot, considering how hard he still was. They had been making out in bed, steadily working towards something more intense, when something he’d done (he didn’t even know anymore) had triggered one of Lithuania’s panic attacks. He’d flinched away and started to cry, whimpering and begging in rapid Russian as his mind replaced the loving man over him with a specter from his past. They’d stopped at once, of course, but America had to admit (to himself, anyway) a growing impatience. Not that he’d want to continue with his lover in this state, but this happened every damn timeNow Lithuania was finally calming down again, letting himself ( ... )

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Belong 2/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 02:56:48 UTC
America saw the panic in the other’s body language and realized the misunderstanding, shaking his head quickly. “No, no, no,” he promised, holding his palms out in a gesture of peace. “Not like that. Here, you take this.” He slipped the small key into Lithuania’s unresisting hand and backed away, keeping their eyes locked as he lay down on their bed, scooting backwards until his hands brushed the headboard. Then in a matter of seconds and a bit of impressive contortion, he had locked himself into the handcuffs, whose chain was looped around one of the solid, sturdy posts in the headboard. Lithuania blinked, glancing down at the key in his hand before biting his lip and staring back at the American. Had he really just…? He knew that those cuffs were real police-issue, kept around for emergencies in case someone broke into the house, and had no safety release. He had just placed himself entirely at Lithuania’s mercy, because he sure wasn’t getting out of there without the key he had so blithely given away ( ... )

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Belong 3/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 02:57:44 UTC
Truth be told, it was surprising America a little that he was enjoying it this much, too. Not that he’d expected it to be unpleasant, but something about this position was lighting his chest on fire, doubling the pleasure of every sensation. He absolutely loved it when Lithuania’s tongue burrowed into his mouth, making him so weak he would have collapsed had he been standing up. As it was he just went limp under the other nation, trembling under his hands and whispering encouragements whenever they broke for breath. Why the hell hadn’t they tried this earlier ( ... )

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Belong 4/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 02:59:42 UTC
America whimpered as he felt Lithuania’s tongue on his chest again as the other settled back between his legs. He was so unbearably aroused, he thought he might come if the other so much as touched his vital regions again. They had come so far already… was it possible that they might take it the whole way? “Toris…” he moaned quietly, catching the other’s attention. The quiet “Hmm?” he got in reply was maddeningly sexy. “Do you want to fuck me?” he asked a bit nervously, and the air between them stilled for a moment. “I assumed,” Lithuania murmured, “that I would still be the one…?” But America shook his head. “I would much rather have it this way.” Let’s face it, they were halfway there already. He only had to move forward another foot or so and he would be brushing right up against the American’s ass ( ... )

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Belong 5/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 03:00:33 UTC
Lithuania concentrated, altering his angle slightly with each thrust, searching out that one piece of anatomy that would make this all the more pleasurable for the other. Finally, when his fingers curled inward, America’s eyes rolled back in his head as he stopped breathing entirely. Another few strokes to that spot and his lover was bucking down onto his fingers, trying to force them in deeper. “Ah, Toris, more…” He smirked slightly in pride, slipping in and out a few times and striking the prostate each time to be sure that he could find it again. America was clenching around his fingers, seeming on the verge of orgasm already. That wouldn’t do ( ... )

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Belong 6/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 03:01:38 UTC
The younger nation opened his eyes, smiling tiredly. “That was amazing, Toris,” he murmured. “You’re so amazing.” He felt the other nuzzling against his neck, and whispering something inaudible. “W’s’at?” Finally his lover rested his chin on his chest, looking at him with something akin to awe. “You’re not going to regret this in the morning, are you?” he asked hesitantly, but America only laughed. “Are you kidding? The best damn night of my life? The only thing I’m regretting is us not trying this earlier.” He jingled the handcuffs to show what he was talking about making Lithuania jump up guiltily. “Oh, I’m sorry, I’ll let you go now…” America shook his head. “Only take them off if you think you won’t be scared. I’m a patient sort, I can handle them for a while longer ( ... )

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Re: Belong 6/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 05:00:56 UTC
*fangirls like mad* ASDFGHJK I WILL LEAVE A COHERENT COMMENT, I SWEAR. JUST A MOMENT, HAVING A SQUEE.
[time lapse]
*gushes* I absolutly ADORE the way you wrote Liet's panic attacks. That was arguably one of the best portrayals of semi-rational panic I've ever seen. And coming from someone who has panic attacks far too regularly, that's... saying rather a lot. And AH MY GAWD, America using his ability to read the atmosphere FFFFFFFFF YES. THANKYOU. *dies happy* America's "Well, if me touching you causes the freaking out, let's make sure I can't touch you!" was BRILLIANT AND INSPIRED AND AUTHOR!ANON, YOU ARE LOVE.

And the end. Eeeeeeeeee, the end. Only take them off if you think you won’t be scared. *gushes all over the place* And moments like that are the REASON I ship this pairing. Fwah.

I am SUCH a tard for character interaction, dear lord. >.>;; *cough* Did you get that I loved it? Cuz I really, really did.

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Re: Belong 6/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 05:20:16 UTC
I was sitting here, trying to think of a fitting comment for this fic, but the above anon pretty much said everything I had on my mind =D

So I'll spare you the mindless fangirl squealing that I was gonna be writing and instead simply thank you from the bottom of my heart ^_^ I ADORE this fill!

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Author!non is greatly touched anonymous June 2 2010, 00:34:56 UTC
Sooo happy you guys liked! X333 I mean, obviously I like my own writing, but it gives me warm fuzzies to hear that outside sources agree with me. Funny, I never really liked this pairing before now. *irreversibly converted by own fic*

I'm especially happy that you noticed my attention to detail in their character interactions. It's so good to meet a fellow detail!whore!!! XD <3 Basically all the bits you pointed out were the bits that made me squee while I was writing it.

Oh gosh, now I'm grinning like an idiot at my computer screen. I have to write another AmerLiet now.

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Re: Author!non is greatly touched anonymous June 2 2010, 01:18:21 UTC
LOOOL, converting yourself with your own fic. That's hilarious. I'd have been converted if I wasn't already a shipper.

HI, FELLOW DETAIL!WHORE!! THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH OF US, I THINK. *brick'd* I still squee just thinking about your brilliant characterization.

... OH MY GOD, YES. DO IT. DO IT NOW. *insert subliminal messaging here*

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Re: Author!non is greatly touched anonymous June 2 2010, 01:35:04 UTC
Haha, too late. Now I've started on a Russia/Cuba for another kink. With America as the bad guy. Oh, me. You're so funny.

Really, I like Russia. It's just so easy to villify him when Lithuania comes strolling by. ^J^

Now I make you wait for your AmerLiet, like a mean person. Hoh hoh hoh.

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Re: Author!non is greatly touched anonymous June 2 2010, 02:56:40 UTC
.....Damn. *headdesk* Huh, I don't think I've ever seen that pairing before. America as the bad guy scares me so much. T^T

I like Russia too, most of the time. When he's not being psychotic at me.

You... You mean person you. *flail*

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Re: Belong 6/6 anonymous June 1 2010, 08:15:52 UTC
There isn't nearly enough of this pairing out there, but the existence of this made that sad fact drastically more bearable. This is just...I don't even have words. It's stunning. Keep up the good work preferably with more America/Lithuania!

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Re: Belong 6/6 anonymous June 2 2010, 00:18:03 UTC
I'm not a shipper but damn I enjoyed it. A lot. ♥ They are both so adorable, bawww. <3

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Re: Belong 6/6 anonymous June 2 2010, 00:45:54 UTC
OH MEIN GOTT IN HIMMEL ICH LIEBE DICH <3

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