The Claiming of Breasts (4/?)- Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 5 2010, 10:12:44 UTC
Korea sighed in relief when the port city had finally left. Now he could observe in peace! But Japan had better hurry it up. He was running out of kimchi
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Re: The Claiming of Breasts (4/?)- Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 5 2010, 16:27:43 UTC
t-this! This is so cute ;x; I was giggling through the whole thing. Your Korea depiction is really good! It's funny without being grating, with just enough mischievousness.
The Greece/Japan is shaping to be really cute so far, each with pitch-perfect characterization.
Re: The Claiming of Breasts (4/?)- Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 5 2010, 21:32:51 UTC
I had pretty much forgotten about this prompt, and then you go and write this great fill for it! (The Girisha and Nihon thing threw me off a bit, as I've never seen these terms used before, but you explained what they were for beforehand so they're fine.) I love Korea's characterization here the best. Poor, poor Japan (and of course Greece is just plain confused).
Please do continue; I can't wait to see what happens next! And thank you so much for filling this!
The Claiming of Breasts (5/?) -Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 5 2010, 21:33:39 UTC
Outside the dining hall, Korea could be found in the hallway laughing with obscene loudness. Most other nations gave the Asian odd looks, but they ignored him as Korea was usually doing something weird. China took one look at the Korean and ran in the other direction dragging Hong Kong with him, he knew nothing good could come out of such a deliriously happy Korea
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The Claiming of Breasts (6/?) -Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 5 2010, 21:40:20 UTC
Greece was still flushed and out of breath as he ran out of the dining hall. Although this time it was more out of physical exertion and the adrenaline pumping through his veins than sexual excitement. Greece ignored the nations calling his name and ran further down the hallway
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Re: The Claiming of Breasts (6/?) -Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 6 2010, 01:58:10 UTC
Why of course, Japan. It's going to be a long shot of anyone finding you there indeed. *snickers*
I'd recommend that you not rush into the smut without build-up; the sex is hotter if there's development up to it and it doesn't come out of nowhere, IMHO. How much build-up is needed is up to your discretion. ;-)
The Claiming of Breasts (7/?) -Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 8 2010, 05:59:02 UTC
Japan jolted slightly and pick his head up from its position between his knees when he heard frantic knocking coming from the main room. Japan miserably re-curled himself into a tight ball and ignored the knocking. They'd go away eventually
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The Claiming of Breasts (8/?) -Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 8 2010, 06:56:15 UTC
After a while, Japan's heavy breathing relaxed into light panting and his body finally went limp. Greece held their position for a while, but he eventually lifted his head a bit so that he could peek at Japan's face. Japan's face was neutrally blank, as usual, but Greece could see a tightness there as well as a hint of resignation. This worried him since it was almost unheard of for Japan to give up. Greece picked his head up a little higher and looked into Japan's eyes
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I liked it that you put in some fluff before the sex and having Japan be the one to make the first move (clever decision by Greece, there). It just makes the future sex more meaningful. (And yes, it was fluffy enough. Not diabetes-causing, don't worry!)
Though I'm admittedly rather eager to get to the sexytimes too, so I'll be awaiting the next parts with even more bated breath. :D
Re: The Claiming of Breasts (8/?) -Greece/Japan
anonymous
July 9 2010, 08:38:16 UTC
Yup, I think that's just enough fluff, anon. Especially since these guys are both probably kind of desperate at this point. ;D I mean, Japan's got repression down to an art, but it still is obviously getting to him. And Greece. Uh, well, that's a bit obvious. XD
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OH JAPAN. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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The Greece/Japan is shaping to be really cute so far, each with pitch-perfect characterization.
Please continue? ;x;
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Please do continue; I can't wait to see what happens next! And thank you so much for filling this!
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I'd recommend that you not rush into the smut without build-up; the sex is hotter if there's development up to it and it doesn't come out of nowhere, IMHO. How much build-up is needed is up to your discretion. ;-)
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It'd probably take a little bit of confessing and explanation prior to the smut, but I vote for sexytiems~
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Though I'm admittedly rather eager to get to the sexytimes too, so I'll be awaiting the next parts with even more bated breath. :D
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I love this SOOOO much. I only like canon pairings, so it makes it that much more awesome for me =3
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