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Part 5 - drunk England confesses to America - sequel anonymous July 14 2010, 05:34:06 UTC
This is a sequel to a fill called "Darts of Pleasure" (de-anoned as "Amsterdam").

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http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=14344970
England confesses his feelings to America while being drunk.Original Fill ( ... )

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ticking clocks (1/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 05:45:49 UTC
The door has barely shut behind Arthur when he hears, unmistakably in Alfred's voice, "He's here!" Arthur doesn't have to scan the hotel bar to find them as it's nearly empty, mid-afternoon, too late for lunch and too early for happy hour. He raises his hand in greeting, smiling at the gathered Nations before shifting his smile to Alfred, who has risen from the table and is crossing to him ( ... )

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ticking clocks (2/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 05:47:26 UTC
Enough time has passed by the next time Arthur looks round that the bar has started to fill up. Alfred is still stood against the wall with Matthew, and now Feliciano goes over to them with Ludwig and Gilbert in tow. Arthur abandons his seat and his second pint glass, still half-full, and goes over as well, arriving just in time to hear Gilbert say, "We're going to ditch this lot ( ... )

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ticking clocks (3/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 05:51:07 UTC
Doubt is stricken from Alfred's smile. He's inside, on his knees and reaching for Arthur before Arthur has secured the lock, his hands at Arthur's belt buckle even as Arthur turns round. Drawing down Arthur's trousers and boxers, Alfred lets out a soft sound of frustration at Arthur's shoes. He laces them, lifting Arthur's feet one at a time as he helps Arthur step out of his clothing. Naked from the waist down now, Arthur feels oddly exposed in his shirt and jacket, more so than if he were completely naked. But Alfred doesn't undress him further. He wraps his hand around the base of Arthur's cock, kneeling up as he licks to moisten the shaft, kisses the head; takes Arthur into his mouth at last, sucking slow and gentle ( ... )

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ticking clocks (4/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 05:53:35 UTC
Alfred takes it. He keeps his mouth on Arthur, keeps swallowing, trying to hold on, tensing against the gyrations of his body as he tries to suck all of Arthur's come from his cock. When Arthur is done, Alfred leans back, arching and bracing himself on the floor behind him, legs spreading wider, head falling back, openmouthed, moans of supplication still inarticulate, louder now without Arthur's cock down his throat. A strand of come and saliva connects Arthur's cock to Alfred's mouth, snaps and falls, clings to Alfred's face.

Arthur puts his foot flat on the floor and sinks down himself to kneel between Alfred's legs. One hand coils around Alfred's cock, the other reaches for the cord of come. He tries to wipe the come from Alfred's face as he begins stroking Alfred's cock but smears it instead. He rubs deliberately, massaging his come into Alfred's skin as he strokes Alfred's cock.

Shaking with desire, Alfred is not quite incoherent; he is just coherent enough to beg to be fucked, now, please. Arthur wants to ask if Alfred can ( ... )

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ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 05:54:43 UTC
Alfred's so close, more than close, his breath ragged, his body vibrating so hard his pleasure is fracturing; and Arthur stops. He unhooks Alfred's leg and withdraws his fingers. Alfred moans in protest-but then Arthur pulls Alfred up to him and holds him close as he reaches behind to stroke inside Alfred again. Only a few strokes and Alfred is coming, shuddering and crying out. Arthur muffles him with a kiss. He knows Alfred is too far gone to kiss back so he only puts his mouth over Alfred's to swallow his sounds, his orgasm-and then Alfred's tongue licks at Arthur's. He turns his head, breathless for a moment as he rests against Arthur, still straddling his lap. Arthur's fingers slip from Alfred's arse and his palm comes to rest in the small of Alfred's back. Alfred shudders again, small, quiet ( ... )

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 07:13:02 UTC
This anon can't imagine anyone would mind that you wrote a sequel. I know I squee'd when I saw that it was a sequel to Amsterdam. <3

Those two are so awkward turtle, it's almost heartbreaking, and yet I love it.

/bookmarked and stalking

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 16:13:44 UTC
That is genuinely a relief to hear. I sort of have this mapped out in my head but I'm not sure if I'm throwing too much at them (learning how to be together in private AND deciding whether or not to be together in public). So I'm thinking that over--and in any event, I'll do my best not to let you down! Thank you for reading.

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 07:45:48 UTC
Sequel to one of my favourite USUK fics, really? I think I love you, authornon <3

Oh, these two ;A; Even if they're together now, there's so much unsaid, it hurts. And I wish I could say something more to this, cause it's wonderful, but I'm still wibbling in my bed, thinking I must be dreaming.

Can't wait for more!

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 16:15:44 UTC
Thanks so much, Anon! *blushes and grins* I'm really happy to read your comments because that's how I feel about them (so much unsaid between them), but I didn't know if that would be interesting or if it was preferable to leave them at that first breakthrough at the end of "Amsterdam." So I feel reassured now.

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 09:14:01 UTC
Ohhh, a sequel to my favorite. I have the feeling these two are going to make me terribly sad before this is finished, but I love it too much to not follow!

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 16:18:14 UTC
Ah, it's so tempting to spill what I have planned for them! But it's better to focus on writing it instead of telling you about it, right? Thanks so much for reading. ♥

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 11:47:05 UTC
:D Ahhhh 'anon' I haven't even finished the first part yet (sorry have to go soon) and I can tell we're in for a good ride. ♥ Thanks for writing more! :D

...will the other sequels still see the light of day, though?

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 14 2010, 16:22:49 UTC
I know, I'm...not very good at being anon here at the moment, am I. *looks suitably sheepish* Thank you for reading! ♥

Oh, yes! At least one sequel will happen, for I have been promised art and as you may or may not know, I am an absolute and utter whore for fanart. Also, there are two storyverses I really enjoy playing in and one sequel that is pretty much written and just needs to be typed/polished, if only I can find the headspace for it again.

Take the above with a grain of salt, for although I am genuine in my intentions, my follow-through or lack thereof sometimes turns me into quite the liar... orz

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 15 2010, 09:34:54 UTC
salt or no,

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Re: ticking clocks (5/?) anonymous July 15 2010, 16:44:28 UTC
Right back atcha!

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