Onyx [Prologue]
anonymous
July 30 2010, 16:03:18 UTC
I think this prompt haven't been filled so I would like to try and do it. -------------------------------
There! It’s recording now.
Why would you want to record this?
Since there are no witnesses, I don’t want you to conveniently forget this conversation later due to your old age.
After you lose, you will be the one trying to pretend this never happened.
Yeah, yeah… Come on, just repeat what you said before.
Alright. If by some kind of miracle you are able to behave during meetings for the rest of the week then I shall praise you and fulfill one of your silly whims without questions. Do I have to repeat what it means ‘to behave’?
Nah, I got it the first time. Wow, You are going to regret your words!
You are aware this goes in both directions, right? If you can’t do it, you will be the one who---
Yeah, I know and just to spice things up how about long term tasks? Not a month or anything but… two weeks, maybe?
You are digging your own grave.
We’ll see. Anyway, are you game?
Sure.The voice recorder was stopped at that moment
( ... )
Re: Onyx [Prologue]
anonymous
July 30 2010, 17:14:30 UTC
This already looks really promising, anon -- in so many ways! ;D -- but I have to admit that the video game part really stuck out to me as funny. I mean, of all the possibilities, the thing America gets excited about is the idea of hanging out with England, probably snuggled up in blankets or whatever playing video games. XD Very in-character, I have to admit, especially since America looked so rejected when England brushed him off during the winter in that one comic strip where America was holed up for the winter.
The prologue is really intriguing <3. *Makes camp so have somewhere to settle on* This OP will camp here to wait for the next update because it's really interesting. =3
This OP felt your writing is familiar somehow, do you write 'That's for us to decide' by any chance? owo
Thanks a lot for your comments, everyone! Let's start this story ------------------ England hadn’t been worried at all on the first day. He knew it was only a matter of time -hours- before America acted on his impulses
( ... )
“Hey America, I just got a box of freshly baked doughnuts but I can’t eat them all by myself so, do you want some? They are still warm”
“Sure, I’ll have them during break, they taste sweeter when cold”
“Oh, is that so?...”
~~~~~~~~~
“Why didn’t you answer any of my messages?”
“Uh… I turn my cell phone off during meetings now. If there’s an emergency someone will interrupt it and tell us, right? Everything else can be discussed later”
“I… guess”
~~~~~~~~~
“We don’t have to head back right now, there are still ten minutes left and you are half way through your story. I’m really curious to know what happened next”
“Aww, thanks England, I know is mean to leave my awesome story like this and I promise I will continue but we shouldn’t be late”
“…”
~~~~~~~~~
“Hamburger?”
“Yeah! Let’s go for some after the conference” America shot down each and every one of his offerings without a second thought
( ... )
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anonymous
August 1 2010, 16:31:50 UTC
Wow, I didn't expect this to turn out so brilliantly funny so fast. But seeing crafty!England try to play dirty is hilarious, as is America's reaction: “Come on, don’t be a sore loser! I even had to turn down the warm donuts with an empty stomach this morning and the hamburger… the hamburger!!” I can practically hear the melodramatic anguish in his voice there. XD And poor England getting all paranoid that America had switched places with Canada was hilarious. I'd feel sorry for France for having to deal with paranoid!England, but he's clearly enjoying himself way too much. XP
Oh England, your life is pain: If this was about self control, England thought he should be praising himself for not choking someone to death then and there. ;D
I love that everyone figured out the bet so fast, btw.
Original Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13943.html?thread=34285175#t34285175
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There! It’s recording now.
Why would you want to record this?
Since there are no witnesses, I don’t want you to conveniently forget this conversation later due to your old age.
After you lose, you will be the one trying to pretend this never happened.
Yeah, yeah… Come on, just repeat what you said before.
Alright. If by some kind of miracle you are able to behave during meetings for the rest of the week then I shall praise you and fulfill one of your silly whims without questions. Do I have to repeat what it means ‘to behave’?
Nah, I got it the first time. Wow, You are going to regret your words!
You are aware this goes in both directions, right? If you can’t do it, you will be the one who---
Yeah, I know and just to spice things up how about long term tasks? Not a month or anything but… two weeks, maybe?
You are digging your own grave.
We’ll see. Anyway, are you game?
Sure.The voice recorder was stopped at that moment ( ... )
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Definitely one to stalk from start to finish, eh?
Many praises and declarations of love and seemingly unwanted children to the Author!Anon...!
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Parentage 284...what its no loner 101? XD
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This OP felt your writing is familiar somehow, do you write 'That's for us to decide' by any chance? owo
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Oh well, I'll update soon XD
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That's awesome, Author!non~ *Sends loves and chocolates*
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Let's start this story
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England hadn’t been worried at all on the first day. He knew it was only a matter of time -hours- before America acted on his impulses ( ... )
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“Hey America, I just got a box of freshly baked doughnuts but I can’t eat them all by myself so, do you want some? They are still warm”
“Sure, I’ll have them during break, they taste sweeter when cold”
“Oh, is that so?...”
~~~~~~~~~
“Why didn’t you answer any of my messages?”
“Uh… I turn my cell phone off during meetings now. If there’s an emergency someone will interrupt it and tell us, right? Everything else can be discussed later”
“I… guess”
~~~~~~~~~
“We don’t have to head back right now, there are still ten minutes left and you are half way through your story. I’m really curious to know what happened next”
“Aww, thanks England, I know is mean to leave my awesome story like this and I promise I will continue but we shouldn’t be late”
“…”
~~~~~~~~~
“Hamburger?”
“Yeah! Let’s go for some after the conference”
America shot down each and every one of his offerings without a second thought ( ... )
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Oh England, your life is pain: If this was about self control, England thought he should be praising himself for not choking someone to death then and there. ;D
I love that everyone figured out the bet so fast, btw.
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** I'm stalking this like crazy
WAITS IMPATIENTLY
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